VN - Ren'Py - Fate and Life: The Mystery of Vaulinhorn [Ch. 12] [Celestial Novel]

The setup is interesting:

What went wrong? Writting. The MC is supposed to be smart and formidable, but soon turns to be a 2 IQ soccer mom that every cock she see is the best in the universe and completely falls for it, even from teenagers.

Any plot about the CSI part is dead because the inspector is dumb as fuck and has no charisma, she is just a meat piece. It just turned into another family and school saussage fest without much sense at all, the same clichés as any other FMC novel, the "masturbation teaching", the pool lotion massage and the phone pic blackmail. Boring. What looked like an interesting setup turned into a quick fap novel that makes no sense.

Btw, it's not the averague visual novel, where you have paths and options. It's more a kinetic novel where you only click to see or avoid sex scenes, but if you don't click yes on everyone you will soon run out of corruption points so you wont see any other. There are no real branches and in reality there are no real options. That part is deceptive.

Pros:
- The setup
- Watching Linda 2.0 and Gail 2.0 is fun
- You are hookedd into what the paranormal side of things might bring
- If you like overly exagerated women, this is for you

Cons:
- Writting is inconsistent
- It's just a "situations" novel. Not a single character either makes sense, or have any real charisma, or deserves any emotional investment (unless you simp for some boobs or any shit like that)
- Light is wrong in every scene
- Scenarios make no sense. She has somekind of marble palace in her home, and then she has a full audience classroom for just 4 students...
- Some situations are cringe. The gym scene was really hard to see without feeling embarrased, too bad. The text and the bluring of the sunscreen was also WEIRD!
- Faces in general and sex scenes could improve a lotThey are like 5 years old quality. Very outdated
- You have to play it in "dumb mode - whatever, just fuck her dude!". Don't invest time thinking about the characters or the plot. You will be wasting your time. You should skip text to the corruption checkpoint. Really, text is not worth it

If you just want a quick fap to 2/3 scenes once every 2/3 months, its ok. If you are looking for an actual novel, don't waste your time, go elsewhere.

I mean, why even bother putting choices? This game has good and corruption point system yet 5 chapters/updates and the only thing that actually trigger any sexy outcome is only the corruption option. I didn't even mind the NTR cause to me NTR can go two ways. Lust driven (Netorare) and Feeling/Comfort driven (Netori imo) which is both cheating but is driven by different thing. Overall i'm just disappointed of given a choice but was only force to choose one path cause that one path is the path that actually qualify this game as a sex game.

Devs should really make the good choice matter otherwise the spoiler game overview is just plain false advertising. the only good choice scene here is the one with the husband which really isn't worth it.

I mean, if your only gonna develop lewd scenes in the corruption path then just remove the good choices entirely and advertise this game as a plain generic NeToRare game which this game is obviously is. Just saying..

Afterthought.
Female models are above average.
Teenage boys models are below average.
Male models are just average.

Plot is... Barely explored? The mystery feels more like an afterthought with lewd corruption scenario as the main thing here.

*If you ever thought to yourself and said "huh you know what would make this game more great more content focused on milfs" well here it is , and did I mention you play the super hot milf.

*the story is all right the women are hot and the only reason it's not a 5 is because it just needs a little more polishing with the art/animations to really boost this to the next level.

wonderful start ！
great game with super graphics that makes me love every minute of it, also the story is told very good with lots of room for your imagination.i love it.
sexy milf gets into hot scenarios with the young men around her...sign me up. And the dialogue was very detailed and contributed to the sexiness of the scenes. And there's quite a bit of content for a first release. Hope this one keeps updating!

But judging from the content so far, the author's inspiration for sex stories is limited.blackmail and hardcore groupsex will make things more excitement ,I always like to try crazy newexperience stuff!
so far this game has a lot potential ,best of luck to the dev and his game. cant wait to see more in the future ！

The quality of the game itself is mediocre , sex scenes are rare and use only nipples to seduce players .
But in support of this work, this work is clearly a fan work. The game he imitated was so disappointing to players , so any fan work has a good reputation.
As long as the author keeps updating, the game may be worth collecting in the future.
But judging from the content so far, the author's inspiration for sex stories is limited.

Always floating in this mediocre space of average adult games.
Sex scenes are frequently but poorly represented, very shorts, no sexual tension, nothing, barely fappable.

Graphic is likable, even though, there is a weird alien girl with blue hair (always the case in mediocre's game, some odd girl with blue, pink , green, purple hair).

Plot is... mhhh.. try to show different "kinks" but still not supported by properly designed sex scenes... almost like checkbox exercise.

My advice is try this game, might be your type, but do not expect and big excitement

Every single aspect of this game except for the models is a big flop. It's poorly written, hard to read, and takes itself too seriously without proving itself first. Also, did they hire a VA at the beginning or is that an AI? Cuz the voice is good but what he's reading is dreadful. He literally has to say "It was a dark and stormy night." And why is there a male narrator if the protag is a woman? Speaking of, the author clearly should have had a male protagonist, as his ability to write from the perspective of a woman could charitably described as laughable.

The only reason this gets more than 1 star from me is the Mama model. She's so great that if she had a few scenes I could even see myself giving this 3+ stars and skipping all the dialogue, because wowee is she drop dead gorgeous.

EDIT: The Mama model is gone

This is a very promising start for a female protag game! A very sexy milf gets into hot scenarios with the young men around her...sign me up. And the dialogue was very detailed and contributed to the sexiness of the scenes. And there's quite a bit of content for a first release. Hope this one keeps updating!

Version Played: Ch. 1
Time played: 30 minutes, Completed content

An intriguing synopsis and some hot ladies drew my interest to this one. I always like when a game attempts to have a compelling narrative in addition to hardcore pornography, but sadly, the weird tonal shifts coupled with the poor english writing really ended up turning me off. For example, the game starts with some exposition and our MC's parents lying dead Dr. Thomas and Martha Wayne style. OK, gonna be dark. Cool. Yet, a scant few scenes later, we have our MC walking through the halls of the school she is teaching at with the camera zooming in on her T&A and we get to hear the pervy monologs of her students. We then have some additional exposition and get a pool scene with a strip poker scene after that. This tonal whiplash does the game no favors and is confusing and immersion breaking.

Positives
+ Sexy ladies. (On the thicc side, so ymmv)
+ Potentially intriguing story
+ While extremely cliche, the sexual scenes are titillating and corruption is always fun

Negatives
- The tone is all over the place
- Aside from the women, the facial renders for the other characters range from goofy to ugly
- Poor english writing and grammar

The dev really needs to adjust the tone and decide if this is a story first game then pr0n or vice versa. You can absolutely do both, but the sexual situations our protag has found herself in so far are extremely run of the mill and are incongruous to the dark mystery the game purports to be telling. It feels like they're there because they have to be and are not implemented organically. I'm not ready to write this off fully, but it needs a lot of work.

Note to Devs: Work on the tone of the game and see if you can find a native speaker for help.

My Rating for (Ch. 1) is:

Pros:
+ Great Graphics
+ Fun Playing
+ Easy Playing
+ No Grinding
+ Great Story
Cons:
- Nothing

Conclusion:
Great Game with super Graphics that makes me love every minute of it, also the story is told very good with lots of room for your imagination.
Love it.

Last Words:
Worth The Download

Really good start, It seems that the story will move much faster than most of the other games on this site. It has already some really hot teasing moments for chapter one.

Renders are good. There is few instances of weird lighting and screen effects that make some scenes look worse. But overall nice work on visuals.

There are choices to make, so i guess We can expect some character builing for main character in the future.

Annnd ... Including that hot girl from Death stranding was amazing choice