VN Ren'Py Fate and Life: The Mystery of Vaulinhorn [Ch. 12] [Celestial Novel]

[Celestial Novel]

View attachment 2750137

i didn't like the update maybe because i waited big things but it was disappointed

I would have to agree with you 100%, this update was worthless. Was thinking about
supporting the dev on this VN but not now. After seeing all those black screens with
text only, cutting out the biggest and major part of her not only being DP'd but
getting her cherry(virgin) ass popped was down right stupid and pointless.

If he sales it like it is on steam like he says he wants to, I see a lot of bad revues
coming from a lot of pissed off people, but whatever.

In just 2 months I created 960 DAZ renders and 7600 UE5 renders while other dev usually only make 150 renders. But people still complain about things even though they are not even supporting the dev. I could make every scene not on black screens but it will take 6 months and then people will complain about milking too. Hahaha normal day as a dev on a pirate site

 

[kadgilek]

In just 2 months I created 960 DAZ renders and 7600 UE5 renders while other dev usually only make 150 renders. But people still complain about things even though they are not even supporting the dev. I could make every scene not on black screens but it will take 6 months and then people will complain about milking too. Hahaha normal day as a dev on a pirate site

you have good talent, i have nothing against renders but i didn't like last update's dialogues and story . i will wait for your new games . good luck

 

[mulerider]

In just 2 months I created 960 DAZ renders and 7600 UE5 renders while other dev usually only make 150 renders. But people still complain about things even though they are not even supporting the dev. I could make every scene not on black screens but it will take 6 months and then people will complain about milking too. Hahaha normal day as a dev on a pirate site

As far as how many renders you make and how hard you work on this VN I have no problem with,
it's easy to to see you work hard at it and do good work. To me it would have been better if
you would have taken an extra week to do ALL the renders rather than use those worthless
black screens. I can name a milker but that sure as hell is not you. that's easy to see.

As far as support goes, sorry but I'm not one to start supporting on the first or second update,
I wait for for about 5 or 6, to give a better idea on not only renders but more importantly
what the story is about and where the story might be going in the future, as well how many
paths/routes it might have. I was waiting and looking forward to that beach screen, you made it
clear in the writing that Derek and Jeremy were not good guys, that they would use anything
and everything to their advantage and their end goal was to use her good and hard, then it went
to hell with all those black screens.

I would like to support you, the money I can care less about, but i sure as hell don't want to
pay for black screens, that's just down right dumb as hell.

 

[David9sk]

Thanks

promise us this game will continue and continue and continue <3333 more hot games mom milf with students <3333

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

What black screens are we talking about, you had to start a new game so some older scenes weren’t there, but others were added, I don’t remember any black scenes, I know I’ve seen them in other games, but don’t remember seeing it here

 

[LucidLover]

What black screens are we talking about, you had to start a new game so some older scenes weren’t there, but others were added, I don’t remember any black scenes, I know I’ve seen them in other games, but don’t remember seeing it here

I think in Chapter 6 beach scene, there were black screens with dialogues. It didn't matter much, but I would suggest the dev to keep the renders repeated at least instead of black screens.

 

[gambit87]

I hope there will be pregnancies in the game at some point!

 

[n_e_x_u_s]

The author replaced Mama model from Death Stranding. So disappointed (

 

[LucidLover]

The author replaced Mama model from Death Stranding. So disappointed (

The new model is equally hot. Sadly not much content with her.

 

[mulerider]

I think in Chapter 6 beach scene, there were black screens with dialogues. It didn't matter much, but I would suggest the dev to keep the renders repeated at least instead of black screens.

I agree it would be to have renders rather than those worthless black screens and if it takes an
extra week or two to get an update out, so what, big deal. But IMO it would have been better to
add a few renders to show the look of surprise and shock and even some pain on Maive's face when
she realized Derek was going to shove his hung cock up her virgin ass while already having a cock
up pussy.

But I also think it would better to add more text as well, not dialog between the characters, but
from a narrative point, explaining what Maive is thinking and feeling first at the idea of being
ass fucked, then whats she's thinking and feeling as Derek is shoving his cock up her cherry ass.
A lot would be going to be going though her mind as it all happened.

But it should be what Derek is thinking as well, Maive is his dream milf, and for him being how he is,
willing to do whatever it takes to get whats, then to find out her ass is virgin, he would be in
heaven sitting on cloud nine with a silver lining.

 

[LucidLover]

I agree it would be to have renders rather than those worthless black screens and if it takes an
extra week or two to get an update out, so what, big deal. But IMO it would have been better to
add a few renders to show the look of surprise and shock and even some pain on Maive's face when
she realized Derek was going to shove his hung cock up her virgin ass while already having a cock
up pussy.

But I also think it would better to add more text as well, not dialog between the characters, but
from a narrative point, explaining what Maive is thinking and feeling first at the idea of being
ass fucked, then whats she's thinking and feeling as Derek is shoving his cock up her cherry ass.
A lot would be going to be going though her mind as it all happened.

But it should be what Derek is thinking as well, Maive is his dream milf, and for him being how he is,
willing to do whatever it takes to get whats, then to find out her ass is virgin, he would be in
heaven sitting on cloud nine with a silver lining.

Absolutely. One of the best scenes was in the beach, and I was super excited how the things were going. But it lacked emotions. However, the game is pretty brilliant, and I trust the developer to keep the pace going well. He can up the ante anytime, and hopefully Chapter 7 would be great as well!

 

[Apexpredator47]

The new model is equally hot. Sadly not much content with her.

The new model is hotter than the main character lol

 

[ZoD__Yo!!!!!!!!]

Can we get the beach scene version in next update come out

 

[Celestial Novel]

if it takes an
extra week or two to get an update out, so what, big deal

I already promised to my Patron that the update will come out in June and I never break my promise, that's a big deal for me.

Can we get the beach scene version in next update come out

There will be

 

[mulerider]

Absolutely. One of the best scenes was in the beach, and I was super excited how the things were going. But it lacked emotions. However, the game is pretty brilliant, and I trust the developer to keep the pace going well. He can up the ante anytime, and hopefully Chapter 7 would be great as well!

I agree, the beach scene is the best scene so far and it's not even done yet, and if the
dev wanted to, he could set it up so Derek and Jeremy could flat out own Maive with her
having no way out but to summit to any sexual demand they want of her.

 

[shawnnation]

is there real incest and is there m/s sex scenes?

 

[Celestial Novel]

is there real incest and is there m/s sex scenes?

So far there is handjob, there will be sex scene in the future

 

[phreadom]

What the heck!?!?!? The dev replaced one of the most beautiful women in any game with some mid tier old lady model that looks like it's from some previous generation of 3d models?

I honestly cannot grasp why on earth you would ruin one of the best looking women in any game and replace her with some completely forgettable and vastly inferior model!?

She was literally the far and away main reason I even played this game!

What the heck!?



I mean I get personal tastes and all... but I just don't get why somebody would make a change like this.

EDIT: I read back through previous pages and it seems like all these changes were made so that the dev could push it on Steam and try to make more money etc. So the young characters were aged up, and the Joyce model was changed to a vastly inferior model to avoid potential legal problems from using a Death Stranding model.

I understand why... still don't agree that it was a good change, and will no longer be following this game.

Good luck, dev.

 

[exazubi]

What the heck!?!?!? The dev replaced one of the most beautiful women in any game with some mid tier old lady model that looks like it's from some previous generation of 3d models?

I honestly cannot grasp why on earth you would ruin one of the best looking women in any game and replace her with some completely forgettable and vastly inferior model!?

She was literally the far and away main reason I even played this game!

What the heck!?

View attachment 2753094 View attachment 2753095 View attachment 2753096 View attachment 2753097 View attachment 2753098 View attachment 2753099

I mean I get personal tastes and all... but I just don't get why somebody would make a change like this.

EDIT: I read back through previous pages and it seems like all these changes were made so that the dev could push it on Steam and try to make more money etc. So the young characters were aged up, and the Joyce model was changed to a vastly inferior model to avoid potential legal problems from using a Death Stranding model.

I understand why... still don't agree that it was a good change, and will no longer be following this game.

Good luck, dev.

First of all, only models have been exchanged. Which doesn't change anything about the game's story itself. That means the game itself stays the same. I understand that you have your favourites. But seriously, the new models look way more realistic and hotter than the ones before. Ok, that's a matter of taste of course.

Second. I am a private book author. And when you're writing a book, it's also normal to change and improve existing text so that it reads better and has more atmosphere. Just as it is normal with games that optical improvements are made. In every book and game there are rough drafts of scenes that are rewritten and changed umpteen times before the final version is published. The only difference here is that you get to see the raw versions.

Third. A game is the work, the imagination, of the developer. You as a consumer are a guest. You can be enthusiastic about a product or not. But you can't expect it to be perfectly tailored to your taste. You are just one of many. a developer cannot please everyone. Mainly the work has to please the developer himself. iI that doesn't do it, you can assume that the full version will never come. Development consumes a lot of lifetime. And no one invests it in something they don't like themselves.

I would recommend you to get off your high horse, show some respect to the developer, give him/her a fair chance, and try to get excited about the game that you liked before despite the change.

 

[AnimeHentaiGamer]

love the game great update