...Jeremiah would go down the cuck route of his own volition, since there is a risk that he might lose the only other thing he has now which is his girlfriend...
Or maybe not to lose, for example, the main character confesses to Freya about his fetish, she replies "God, how happy I am, I only dreamed about this too. For my man to watch me when I give myself to another, how lucky I am with you." But my post was not about this, but about the fact that a very strong emphasis is placed on the whining and grimacing of the main character, who is already annoying without it. As for me, it was possible to do without emphasizing this moment.
...also if Freya just goes and cucks him first chapter, with little to no build up well there is that, the magic is gone...
Well, I certainly didn't call for that, I also like well-done teasing)
The only thing is, if you've already touched on this topic, I'd like to add that there are authors who only tease-tease-tease-tease-cheating-(I've run out of imagination) end. Or a slightly more advanced version kiss-oral sex-vaginal sex-anal sex-group sex-(I've run out of imagination) end. In my opinion, such approaches are due to a lack of talent, since, for example, on the same porn resources (I don’t know if links to third-party sites are allowed here, so I won’t provide them) there are channels of actresses with thousands of subscribers who post videos in the style of “the husband comes home with flowers, and there she is fucked hard and cums in her mouth in front of him, after which she goes to passionately kiss her husband” or “a guest comes to the couple, they sit with him in the kitchen drinking coffee, the wife gets up and starts licking the guest’s anus” or “the husband dresses his wife in underwear and shoes and prepares her for a date with her lover, after which he licks the sperm out of her pussy.” And so on for years, for 5 years or more, hundreds of thousands of subscribers, some actresses have over a hundred such videos. And the fans are happy, no one is indignant, how come they already cuckolded the husband from the first day, now it’s not interesting. What I want to say is that the main thing here is talent, creativity, imagination and good implementation, and you can do hundreds of cuckold scenes, either in a game or in a movie, and you can cuckold right from the first day, and hundreds of thousands of satisfied fans and subscribers are proof of this.