Ren'Py Abandoned Father's Legacy [v0.2] [Proudly Poor]

Avaron1974

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Between the writing and the constant resting bitch face, i've had more fun plucking my eyebrows.

Finding a vibrator and calling her a dirty slut .. wut?

Dirty slut for masturbating?

That's the level of writing i'm seeing and it comes across immature at best. Couple that with 2 incredibly unlikable characters and it's not looking great.
 

Canto Forte

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Then look harder ... past the mundane beaten to death stereotype of nonsensical dude
surclassed by the biology classes he never listened to an game the babe!

Happy babe worship to spite the clueless dude!
 

Avaron1974

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I tried again, I thought it can't possibly get worse.

MC gets knocked out and tied to a chair.

Woman tells him his dad was murdered over some such nonsense and he will be too.

MC asks for a handjob.

Seriously, it's a 14 year old stoners wet dream. The fuck did I read?

"Your father was murdered, you will be killed when they get what they want, i'm going to keep you here because they have someone I care about...what is your mature, level headed response to this predicament you find yourself in?"



"Can you toss me off?"
 

DarkAssassin

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Here is my unofficial android port of Father's Legacy-0.2
Let me know if you find any problem.

You can request me any game you want. I will try my best.

Join my
 
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Mormont

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Sorry, this game will not have NTR.
Perfect (y)

I'm glad you made the sandbox-style simply nothing worse than an overly complicated sandbox game but this is nice and basic but I'm guessing over time you will expand that adding a map perhaps?
 

anne O'nymous

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Couple that with 2 incredibly unlikable characters and it's not looking great.
Not just unlikable, but also unbelievable ; especially the MC.

He receive a phone call about his father, and answer that he don't care... but still listen.
His father assistant tell him that his father is dead, and that he inherit from everything. Again he say that he don't care... but still continue to listen.
The assistant ask him to go to his father's house the next day, to what he answer that he [suspense] don't care... but still he'll go.
Once in the house, the assistant ask him to live here starting now, which he refuse... but still will do.
Then the assistant ask him to search for clues about his father death, what he refuse to do... but will still do.

And we are supposed to believe that this carpet MC will corrupt the said assistant who make him do whatever she want ?

Sorry but, since it's an adult game and with such premise, I expect the MC to have his dick encaged the second day, call the assistant "Mistress" the third one, and have a dildo up in the ass the fourth one. Not for him to suddenly become an Alpha male after a good night of sleep.
 
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Avaron1974

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Sorry but, since it's an adult game and with such premise, I expect the MC to have his dick encaged the second day, call the assistant "Mistress" the third one, and have a dildo up in the ass the fourth one. Not for him to suddenly become an Alpha male after a good night of sleep.
That's pretty much what I was thinking.

The MC does not have the smarts or presence to dominate her. The writing to get her to do something was so far fetched.
 

Pogo123

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girl looks really nice, quality ok. but again a young boy mc game. not surprising it got abandoned. the girl should have be the mc