the "touch her" picture is missing, there are a few more translations that could be corrected (see below). The "Help her" does nothing after a certain affection was reached, although the code is there for more actions (maybe it's just the layout for future development, but it's missing the "in development" flag). Going to Lucy's house has no action and no development flag. Also, a "pass time" button might be interesting and I don't see how you can lose 5 mins just moving between rooms (maybe not increment it and just push time when an action is taken, and use "Advance time" as an alternative?).
I couldn't find a way to get to Angela's work place but I'm guessing that's just layout for now.
Sleeping pill has no use right now, or I couldn't find a way to use it.
Good game overall, still needs more work but it looks promising.
Text that might need changing:
- at breakfast, the monsters did not climb towards me could be "the monsters under my bed were silent/well behaved/whatever"
- "smile her and go" doesn't exist, maybe Give her a smile and leave/go
- "Go the fuck up pervert!! " - maybe get the fuck out pervert
- go work = go to work
- instead of corridor = "leave" would work better, or even hallway
- Let’s see, well, let’s go about my business. See you! (from comedy) - We'll see. Right now I have some business to attend to. See you later!