LoSoSAnimation

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The game looks really good so far and promissing, but like everybody said, It needs some stuff fixed.
Here's the list of things I noticed.

The most obvious: The light.
It's SO DARK, and the neon lights are way too bright. Maybe make It a little less dark, but put light switches in the rooms as an option. I know, It sounds against the rules of a FNAF game, but just a proposition.

The animations, some have a short duration, like Frederica's doggystyle, I don't know if It's because I clicked somewhere, but It seems to only last a few seconds.
But then Bonnie (or Bunny, like in the game), the animations last way too long.
Perhaps make a small menu to change between animation variations according to the position, and an exit button, in case players want to check another character, before 6AM.

Also, a small crosshair in the POV when you're wandering around.


Now for something that kinda disturbed me...
When I finally found out which key was the flashlight, I could not wait to see the new models, cause It was so dark even during the sex scenes I couldn't figure out any features.
So I reached 3AM, I ran out of the office and flashlight in hand to see the new sexy models!

And... their faces... are so disturbing! I would say It's the teeth, but It was definitely those black marks across their faces.
I don't know what's with It, but It makes them look way too creepier than sexier. I say maybe remove those marks, maybe...

ONE THING I MUST GIVE YOU CREDIT FOR IS choosing models with actual feet instead of those ugly mechanical feet like the older models of early FNAF 3D porn.
And those glowing eyes, oh man, they're so sexy and menacing! Keep those!

Overall, keep It up, and I leave my suggestions.
First thank you, I take not of all. For the lights, when did the game is too dark ? In sex scene ? Or just the gameplay ?
 

Budoop

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Whole game is too dark, tbh, map and frederika's scenes, bonnies are ok tho.
Other than that this seems amazing so far, looking forward to more.

Also some of the dicks are angled wrong in the scenes, frederika's bent over scene for example the dick seems to go below her and in the cum stage of Bonnie's sex scene the cock clips through her hip to the right a LOT.

Keep up the good work.
 

LoSoSAnimation

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The entire game is way too dark unless you use the flashlight, but no luck with the sex scenes.
I even got the screen brightness to max, and didn't work.
Whole game is too dark, tbh, map and frederika's scenes, bonnies are ok tho.
Other than that this seems amazing so far, looking forward to more.

Also some of the dicks are angled wrong in the scenes, frederika's bent over scene for example the dick seems to go below her and in the cum stage of Bonnie's sex scene the cock clips through her hip to the right a LOT.

Keep up the good work.
Thanks ! I'll take note.
 
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Nub123XXD

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Damn what a revamp, amazing work! really changes the gameplay in a unique way from the 1st version of the game(which is a fnaf 1 clone)

I love the recharging battery/generator mechanic so even though the battery is technically infinite, you still risk not doing the task/minigames to charge it. even though i dont think there's much punishment(as of 0.5.1 alpha2) to running out of power as you can still use the camera to view stuff.

The 3AM task/minigame change is actually great, so you don't just sit in office like fnaf 1 and have to explore a bit. it also integrates the porn into a 'porn game' which is amazing.

and the models, god DAMN look at those abs and the ring-glow eyes? you have to do a lot more animations with them(either standalone or ingame) because that model is amazing. the animation is also pretty neat, the "cold breath" effect is a good idea but needs better implementation.

though there is a good bit that needs improving for the game

1st is the light, i get the aesthetic of it with the neon signs and of course it makes the sex scene so good especially the glowing eyes. but it needs a little bit more for some visibility of the scene(like feddina doggy on jukebox) and don't just add some point light on the sex scene, i think it is better to get some more neon lights like in the bonnie arcade because most of the scenes there looks REALLY GOOD (which ironically, the bad part of the bonnie scenes are too bright).

I don't know if i miss something on the controls,which is still labeled "resume" on the main menu btw, but i can't seem to 'control' the scene, when one finishes sometimes it plays a different one sometimes it loops and i think having a bit of control on the scene is good, not skipping/fast forwarding, but having the option to 'continue' to the next animation or 'loop' current animation (also G for flashlight? really? what kind of war criminal psychopath puts G for flashlight? or maybe its the qwirky AZERTY keyboard idk) it can also be a genuine strategy where you can loop one girlnimatronic's scene to reduce the bar to empty but risking others's bar to fill up.

The first-person HUD seems a little bit too empty, it is up to you to go the "PDA"/tool route where you need to pull up something to get info or just the standard UI elements but it is good to have atleast tell the current time on the top left. the sex HUD could also get more info, maybe just 1 bar that represents the current anger/boredom levels that will decrease during the animation(which also connects to putting some control on the sex scene feedback)


Overall the revamp is amazing, it would be cool to have a "game over" animation aswell since this game is tagged "female domination" im omega-biased towards femdom but it would be cool to be "caught" by the animatromos (like the f*p n*ghts at fr*nn*'s or the infamous fuck n*ghts at fr*dd*rika's)

8/10 "i cant see shit but i think the boob is good"
 

LoSoSAnimation

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Damn what a revamp, amazing work! really changes the gameplay in a unique way from the 1st version of the game(which is a fnaf 1 clone)

I love the recharging battery/generator mechanic so even though the battery is technically infinite, you still risk not doing the task/minigames to charge it. even though i dont think there's much punishment(as of 0.5.1 alpha2) to running out of power as you can still use the camera to view stuff.

The 3AM task/minigame change is actually great, so you don't just sit in office like fnaf 1 and have to explore a bit. it also integrates the porn into a 'porn game' which is amazing.

and the models, god DAMN look at those abs and the ring-glow eyes? you have to do a lot more animations with them(either standalone or ingame) because that model is amazing. the animation is also pretty neat, the "cold breath" effect is a good idea but needs better implementation.

though there is a good bit that needs improving for the game

1st is the light, i get the aesthetic of it with the neon signs and of course it makes the sex scene so good especially the glowing eyes. but it needs a little bit more for some visibility of the scene(like feddina doggy on jukebox) and don't just add some point light on the sex scene, i think it is better to get some more neon lights like in the bonnie arcade because most of the scenes there looks REALLY GOOD (which ironically, the bad part of the bonnie scenes are too bright).

I don't know if i miss something on the controls,which is still labeled "resume" on the main menu btw, but i can't seem to 'control' the scene, when one finishes sometimes it plays a different one sometimes it loops and i think having a bit of control on the scene is good, not skipping/fast forwarding, but having the option to 'continue' to the next animation or 'loop' current animation (also G for flashlight? really? what kind of war criminal psychopath puts G for flashlight? or maybe its the qwirky AZERTY keyboard idk) it can also be a genuine strategy where you can loop one girlnimatronic's scene to reduce the bar to empty but risking others's bar to fill up.

The first-person HUD seems a little bit too empty, it is up to you to go the "PDA"/tool route where you need to pull up something to get info or just the standard UI elements but it is good to have atleast tell the current time on the top left. the sex HUD could also get more info, maybe just 1 bar that represents the current anger/boredom levels that will decrease during the animation(which also connects to putting some control on the sex scene feedback)


Overall the revamp is amazing, it would be cool to have a "game over" animation aswell since this game is tagged "female domination" im omega-biased towards femdom but it would be cool to be "caught" by the animatromos (like the f*p n*ghts at fr*nn*'s or the infamous fuck n*ghts at fr*dd*rika's)

8/10 "i cant see shit but i think the boob is good"
Really thank you for your comments. I really appreciate. I take note of all your advices and wishes. And I'll make the change.
 
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