-In the first Brooke dream scene, the way the main character was positioned on top of her and the dialog (him being mad and wanting an apology) really made me thought he was about to pull her shorts down and spank her until she gave in and apologized for embarrassing him. IMO the scene would have been much hotter if he did, especially since it would imply that Brooke secretly wants to be dominated by her younger brother.
The "wrestling" dream is intended to be a big tease--turning up the heat slightly from Zero to about... Two(?) on the stove while servicing some early characterization goals. In my mind, the scene was intended to show that Brooke is struggling with her desire to maintain her dominance over her brother while processing his newfound assertiveness towards her. In the dream, she then switches to a different source of her power--her body, and uses it to "push back" against him. I definitely intended to suggest that Brooke subconsciously desires to have him ultimately dominate her, and she will continue to try and push his buttons and test him.
When I get to the next part of Brooke's story, I may do a reprise of this scene, showing what happens next, but I want to limit how often I go to the "dream" well. I want to transition to them doing things IRL.
-The second Brooke dream sequence was pretty hot but it would have been better if she actually looked embarrassed when her clothes disappeared, her facial expression didn't really change the whole time. See the "hair cutting" scene for comparison.
-In a game with multiple female character who have big/huge tits (Lucy is my favorite BTW), it's odd that we never see the main character squeezing or fondling their breasts. Sometimes the text says he is doing it but it's not shown. I would also like to see him sucking on their nipples and getting a titjob/titfuck (with so many delicious jugs around him it's tragic that this doesn't happen).
Completely agree on the facial expression in the second dream. That was less of an oversight and more of a "ran out of time" thing. Similarly, the lack of breast fondling/sucking is a missed opportunity, the most glaring examples being the extended version of Meredith kissing scene and Show-and-tell with Lucy. Titjobs are planned, Meredith is the obvious first candidate for one.
I agree that Lucy deserves some more scenes, particularly ones showing her from the front, since that is what is showcased from the moment we meet her. I do have to say though that hardly anyone has expressed interest in her, so I have not prioritized her. She won't get any love in the next update, but we'll see after that.
In any case, I'm looking forward to seeing how the game develops. (And more Lucy scenes please! Maybe some anal?)
As you can imagine, anal is a hard thing to prioritize since it's not something that everyone likes. I can tell you that Brooke would be the first candidate for an anal scene and that it would be entirely optional.
Thank you for the detailed, thoughtful comment. I write these scenes and they make sense in my head, so it's nice to get an outside perspective on individual scenes and how they're interpreted. Cheers!