wizardcock
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I noticed that, too. I don't want to sound like a pain-in-the-ass critic, sorry, but in this moment it caught my eye immediately.
Maybe in this pose, the part of the thigh that is closer to the butt should be bigger. and she's got her leg too far up.
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lagaard
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Well I wouldn't go in expecting SPNATI quality, but thanks for being honest about it though!
Not having money isn't bad, but I suppose if it adheres to the "winner is the one fully dressed, loser is naked, so you gain/lose clothes" it could certainly lead into that loop for sure. Though I understand its not an uncommon idea, as it can make the game rather short otherwise.
Although, I'd also argue that's kind of the point. Strip poker (or any strip game) should probably be a pretty quick affair, and not potentially tens of minutes, or hour(s) long like some old games could be. Most of those involve money though (and the selling/buying back of clothing, leading into the looping problem).
YaBoy
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Fair enough - thanks for the correction! Just felt like sharing the most popular options.
lagaard
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I rummuged up a $1 to give it a try. While it is, as you stated not up to SPNATI (not a lot is), I don't inherently dislike what you have here as a framework though.
It's nice that the dialogue options do change a little for Meredith losing, though I think its a missed thing that nothing happens if the player is losing.
I can't really comment on the art, as I don't really pay super close attention, and it all seems fine to me.
I do admit, I focus more on the LOSING content, as that is incredibly rare in the strip game scene for some reason.
The writing is fine though, and I do like even the minor details of just the player description as he strips. Not a lot of things do that either. Everything also being in first person perspective is also kind of nice.
Should certainly be able to just start touching yourself if you lose though. Personal preference. But I understand this is also a kind of preview of upcoming content, and not exactly a finished thing.
My only nitpicks would be the same as the strip poker you can play on your PC. The fact it's an all or nothing affair, I think really lowers the erotic content of the scene. Also thinking of that one, it's a small shame the player's lost clothing just vanishes into the ether for this, instead of lingering somewhere in the scene. Same could be said for Meredith's clothing as well. Another detail usually not shown in almost any strip game is where the clothes end up going when they get taken off really...
It's nice that the dialogue options do change a little for Meredith losing, though I think its a missed thing that nothing happens if the player is losing.
I can't really comment on the art, as I don't really pay super close attention, and it all seems fine to me.
I do admit, I focus more on the LOSING content, as that is incredibly rare in the strip game scene for some reason.
The writing is fine though, and I do like even the minor details of just the player description as he strips. Not a lot of things do that either. Everything also being in first person perspective is also kind of nice.
Should certainly be able to just start touching yourself if you lose though. Personal preference. But I understand this is also a kind of preview of upcoming content, and not exactly a finished thing.
My only nitpicks would be the same as the strip poker you can play on your PC. The fact it's an all or nothing affair, I think really lowers the erotic content of the scene. Also thinking of that one, it's a small shame the player's lost clothing just vanishes into the ether for this, instead of lingering somewhere in the scene. Same could be said for Meredith's clothing as well. Another detail usually not shown in almost any strip game is where the clothes end up going when they get taken off really...
anaa
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am I imagining or her body become slimmer with each update? I believe what always make moms on games better than any character other than the taboo of course is having a voluptuous body especially on the thighs/ass/belly, which is closer to reality, which is what mothers generally have because they don’t care much about diet because they have more important responsibilities to bear, not like models.
anyway, I will always like and support your game.
I agree with you. I've gotten a list of critiques about the way Meredith was drawn in this scene. I'm not trying to draw her thinner each time and she should have a bit more meat on her bones for sure. When I posted the sketch in my Discord, her tits were way smaller and I made them bigger twice. I need to do that for the other curvy bits as well. Cheers!
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sir.may be you can also consider to rework the face of Meredith in her bonus spank .It is truly hot but each picture while she sitting .her face is look much older and the outline of her face is not as smooth as the one she bending over in the kitchen
Meredith's heads have been a hot topic of conversation lately, more-so in the past month than every prior month combined since the game was made public, it feels like.
I've kind of created a problem for myself having so many different heads for a 2D character. Each different head has its own problems. Some of the older heads are drawn in low resolution, which is what I suspect you're getting at with the "smooth outline" comment. Meredith is 39-years old, so she's supposed to have a little bit of age to her. In some scenes, she looks closer to 29 (like the Kitchen), which is not what I intended.
I have a moratorium on new Meredith heads. In fact there are some heads I'd like to put on a rocket and shoot into the sun (POV Handjob Scene and Breast Play Scene). For the Strip Poker scene, I borrowed a head from a 2024 wallpaper and put it in the game. I might be able to fix the Bonus Scene head for v0.6 or v0.7, but I'm trying to prioritize new content and put a "budget" on fixing old content.
Cheers!
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Nullx54
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Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?
MC's Dad's name is Carl, so I will hereafter refer to him by that name.
The most important things for me are that Carl a) challenges MC (repeatedly), b) mc rises to the challenge and proves himself, and c) Carl has a life philosophy that is diametrically opposed to MC's.
Carl will NOT be a martial arts expert by any stretch of the imagination. His cruelty comes from his (perhaps solipsistic) belief that the world is his playground and that his charm & rhetoric are super powers which allow him to navigate life on God Mode. One of Carl's catch phrases is, "I ALWAYS get what I want!"
He believes he can talk his way into and out of any situation and he often does. He believes that the family will be thankful that he has decided to show back up after abandoning them and that if there's any expressed grievances, he can just talk his way out of it.
When family rejects him, he uses his power and influences to turn the economic screws. He gets Meredith fired from her job. He and his law partners force the arcade owner to sell the property so they can bulldoze it and build an Evil Karate Dojo, that kind of thing.
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Lucy quest still bugged, when drinking the scotch twice and getting the "Athlete's foot" message, I could never have the courage to see Lucy and a third shot started the dream sequence with Meredith.
Got past it by going to Irene's and having two glasses of Rose and then heading to the basement
Got past it by going to Irene's and having two glasses of Rose and then heading to the basement
Irene is very hot sir, hopefully there will be a new scene in the future, thank you sir dope art
Irene is my personal second favorite (after Meredith), but she won't be worked on in v0.6 or v0.7. Her "story" is considered complete outside of some cameos in Meredith's story later on, but I would like to give her more scenes. She is a much more popular character than I expected.
Cheers!
I know this has nothing to do with what you were talking about regarding Irene, but I’d like to make some suggestions for the next two updates about Meredith. Basically, some feedback on things that could be improved or added.
The game is already really good, but something that would give it a huge boost is making the sound effects more consistent in the scenes. The moans are fine, but I think they could play more often to keep the intensity going. The same goes for the sound of bodies colliding (plap plap), which is only in some scenes. If it were used more frequently, it would make the action feel much more immersive. A great example would be the shower scene with Meredith—those sounds would make the scene feel more alive and realistic.
Another thing is the camera angles. The blowjob scene is amazing, and it’s not just because of the POV, but because of everything else that makes it immersive—the constant sound effects, the interactions, and the way it flows. That level of detail is what makes the scene so good, and I think more scenes with Meredith could benefit from a similar approach. For example, in the next shower scene, there could be a POV angle where you can clearly see the action from the protagonist’s perspective.
It could also be interesting to add a small screen or bubble (like the X-ray effect during ejaculations) to show an alternate angle at certain moments. This wouldn’t replace the main view but would serve as an extra detail to make the scene more visually engaging.
Speaking of details, something that could improve the scenes even more is interaction with the environment. The game already has interactions, but they could be even better and more detailed in some moments. In the next part of the shower scene, when the protagonist finally has sex with Meredith, it would be great if the environment was used to make the scene more dynamic. For example, he could push her against the shower glass at some point, or there could be a reflection in the glass showing part of the action from another angle. These kinds of details make the scene feel more realistic and immersive while adding more visual impact.
If possible, it would also be great to add shifts in position or perspective within the same animation so that the scenes don’t feel too static. It doesn’t have to be anything overly complex, but having the positions shift a bit within the scene would make them more engaging and dynamic.
Overall, what I mean is that the best scenes tend to be the most explicit and immersive, and I think these changes would make them even better. Just a suggestion, but I hope you consider it.
I know I talked a lot about the shower scene, but that’s because it’s one of the best ones, and it also has one of the best designs. With these details refined, along with the overall designs and everything else, the game would be even better than it already is.