VN Ren'Py Fleeting Memories [Demo] [Lyrical Artistry]

DraxisSilencer1000

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Mmm... I hope this is not those games where the MC cheats on his supposed "girlfriend" or something. Its easily understood that his girl seems to be a really, really long time sex friend, but she might as well be his girlfriend because of how she isn't interested with anyone at all except the MC.

Technicalities aside, I hope this actually becomes a Harem with the angle they're going with here.

Animations are really good, though more positions/variations are appreciated, and surprisingly not laggy at all.

There's nothing to tell about the story itself at the moment, its still a mystery and I'm surprised to see that the MC might've have a wife (that nightmare the MC experienced seems to imply he had a wife/girlfriend before, might be a widow), even though he himself have said that he isn't interested on a relationship as well a long time ago, an oath he made alongside his long time sex friend.

Looking forward to this, as well the future tags so everyone would know now if this game's worth it.
 
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Mmm... I hope this is not those games where the MC cheats on his supposed "girlfriend" or something. Its easily understood that his girl seems to be a really, really long time sex friend, but she might as well be his girlfriend because of how she isn't interested with anyone at all except the MC.

Technicalities aside, I hope this actually becomes a Harem with the angle they're going with here.

Animations are really good, though more positions/variations are appreciated, and surprisingly not laggy at all.

There's nothing to tell about the story itself at the moment, its still a mystery and I'm surprised to see that the MC might've have a wife (that nightmare the MC experienced seems to imply he had a wife/girlfriend before, might be a widow), even though he himself have said that he isn't interested on a relationship as well a long time ago, an oath he made alongside his long time sex friend.

Looking forward to this, as well the future tags so everyone would know now if this game's worth it.
I am glad to see your interest in the story, man. About the first part of your text ("Where the MC cheats on his supposed "girlfriend" or something"). Since it may contain spoilers, I can't answer that but I would like to let you know that me and my partner are pretty sure of how the story will play and whether such things would be added or not.

What I mean is... The plot resolving that question is already finalized, you just will have to wait to find out.



As for the girl from the nightmare, I can't tell you who she actually is to the protagonist, since that would be spoilers. But to avoid any misunderstanding, what I can say is...
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Beast Within

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ok I know someone said it a while back, but, the white hair girl's head seems a bit off proportionally with her body( a bit smaller compared to her body). it could be the camera angles though or my blind eyes.

she is definately gorgeous though.
 
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AnonW123

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The description sounds interesting, but the demo is too short to make a judgment at this point. It literally ends where the story is about to begin. I think it would've better to go at least a little bit further to set up the story in the game and give us more insight into the characters.

The renders look good and the sex scene was hot as fuck. I will keep an eye on this.

I'm also a harem guy and I strongly prefer that. Ultimately it's up to the devs. My advice would be decide the kinks as soon as possible and declare them so no one has to run off after getting invested in the game.
 

Porthas

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Sure, man. I will try to do. Its a good suggestion. Thanks for it, mate
I would second this request, also named saves if there's going to be multiple paths I suppose.

I liked the animations and I liked the premise.

One personal pet peeve of mine - not pulling out isn't a mistake or messing up. The pull out method is not birth control. If a girl doesn't want a dude's semen in her vag, don't have sex with him. I see this a lot in AVN's and it's always a bit annoying, so I'm not necessarily picking on this one project.

But that's just a tiny nit pick, again I like the premise and what little we know of the characters so far, so I'm interested to see where the story goes.

Edit: Also, since there's a request to financially support the project at the end of this demo - I will only do that for projects that have set parameters on what they're offering. Once that's all ironed out and I know what I'm "supporting" then it's easier for me to evaluate my financial decisions.
 
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I would second this request, also named saves if there's going to be multiple paths I suppose.

I liked the animations and I liked the premise.

One personal pet peeve of mine - not pulling out isn't a mistake or messing up. The pull out method is not birth control. If a girl doesn't want a dude's semen in her vag, don't have sex with him. I see this a lot in AVN's and it's always a bit annoying, so I'm not necessarily picking on this one project.

But that's just a tiny nit pick, again I like the premise and what little we know of the characters so far, so I'm interested to see where the story goes.

Edit: Also, since there's a request to financially support the project at the end of this demo - I will only do that for projects that have set parameters on what they're offering. Once that's all ironed out and I know what I'm "supporting" then it's easier for me to evaluate my financial decisions.
I've brought this up on a few threads too. Forced pull outs are so silly. It's pure porn logic. If a dev doesn't want a girl to get knocked up, just don't have her get knocked up, why do they have to force a pullout? I get having the option, some people like seeing a girl covered with cum, may not want to do a full creampie for whatever reason, or other stuff, cool. But why not give the option, and it's worse when the game gives several options but none of them are creampies, like "Cum on back, cum on face, or cum in mouth," which I saw in a game the other day.

As an actual system of "birth control," pulling out doesn't work anyway because even precum has semen in it and before you feel the "I'm cuming moment," approaching you're already releasing "pre-ejaculate" which is just normal cum but without the force of the muscle spasms that "shoot it out." As soon as the guy feels like he's about to cum, he is already putting seed inside her. And I also despise when they have "I'm on the pill," or "I'll get the pill" types of dialogs. Just let me creampie a girl and then just not have her get preggers.

I've literally known people who tried for months and years to get knocked up and didn't let alone in a game where the Mc only bangs a girl like four or five times. For real, just let me have my fantasy that she might get knocked up and then just never make it happen in game if you don't want pregnancy content or just don't want it yet, you know what I mean?

But that's my little mini rant over, :ROFLMAO:
 
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mongoose003b

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Oops... sry then
Not sure if i mentioned this though but i am liking the demo so far, its not enough for me to really give a decent review yet but looking forward to what you have in store. ill wait until you have more done for me to really form an opinion on it. i feel its too early to give a comprehensible review yet.
 
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