Ren'Py Abandoned Forgotten Diaries [v0.5] [BigBirdDev]

[BigBirdDev]

the throne room in the second preview looks exactly the same from other game called the survival of sarah rose

any relation with that project maybe?

Are backrounds like these free? Saw them already in another game.

It's actually from an older japanese game, seems like this sarah game ripped it too lmao. I mean I could comission an artist for a custom background, but would you rather see some titties or a custom background

Read this friends

By the way, could someone tell me if it's alright to plug a game related discord on this page?

 

[dgxsu]

Read this friends

By the way, could someone tell me if it's alright to plug a game related discord on this page?

Jup, it's allowed

 

[Doom_]

By the way, could someone tell me if it's alright to plug a game related discord on this page?

Yes you can add any links to a website, blog, discord, social media, etc. as long as its related to your game

 

[Zolfried]

my anatomy may be wrong, but i feel the preview 1 and 2 of her, her shoulders are a tad too wide. There's almost room for an extra head above each shoulder, which is very unnatural unless she's some crazy body builder.
In the 3rd preview, her legs looks a bit weird.. like she's wearing some very tight thigh-high socks.. so her skin deforms.. except there is no sock.
but except from those anatomy things i noticed,the general art style and her design looks very nice. her outfit looks very pretty as well.
i hope the story writing is on same level as the art, and wish you luck with the project. ill try it when it gets a bit more content, because i like to play games i can connect with the story and the characters. and i don't think this is long enoughfor me to form a bond with the chars.

 

[thswherizat]

Her head is wayyy too small for her body in the artwork.

 

[Joeburqa]

Demo version of a game with the No Sexual Content tag on a site dedicated to pirating porn games...


You're one of those folks that plays with the difficulty slider maxxed, ain't ya?

dont remember there ever being the rule that every game here must be a dedicated porn game, or even have any sort of porn in it. obviously you must be privy to the "special" rules and im not. i just figured that the no sexual content tag existed for a reason. i guess the entire tag was a typo, since no games are allowed on here that have it....

 

[GreenGobbo]

dont remember there ever being the rule that every game here must be a dedicated porn game, or even have any sort of porn in it. obviously you must be privy to the "special" rules and im not. i just figured that the no sexual content tag existed for a reason. i guess the entire tag was a typo, since no games are allowed on here that have it....

Oh no, I made another poorly recieved joke that someone just had to respond to because reasons. Whatever shall I do? Please, sir. I beg your pittance. Don't put me in the room again!

 

[RedPillBlues]

I'd suggest adding some more screenshots of the females or maybe a scene or two in the OP BigBirdDev. As it is it doesnt stand out very much.

 

[bobdillan]

BigBirdDev suggestion: planned tags (under genre or dev notes, just make sure to clearly label it as planned/future tags).
Also might be worth mentioning not gonna happen i.e. banned. tags, like a certain 3 letter one that is quite polarizing (or if there are very niche tags whether or not they will be avoidable).

 

[BigBirdDev]

I've made a free discord, join if you want to see dev updates or general work in progress stuff
discord.gg/6MNpD3QGCY

You must be registered to see the links

 

[TotallyNotWatchingPorn]

Just wanna clarify something, so this game will be heavily focused on humiliating the queen and letting her screwed by the entire city/kingdom?

 

[BigBirdDev]

Just wanna clarify something, so this game will be heavily focused on humiliating the queen and letting her screwed by the entire city/kingdom?

Humiliating yes, but the "rougher"/sexual scenes you will be able to decide if you just want her for yourself or enjoy humiliating her in the way you said. There won't be any ntr though. But if you want to know specifics let me know here or on discord

 

[TotallyNotWatchingPorn]

Humiliating yes, but the "rougher"/sexual scenes you will be able to decide if you just want her for yourself or enjoy humiliating her in the way you said. There won't be any ntr though. But if you want to know specifics let me know here or on discord

Awesome! Any plans to add more characters, more specifically female characters?

 

[BigBirdDev]

Awesome! Any plans to add more characters, more specifically female characters?

Of course, I have Ideas for, for example a female chief guard knight, or when we eventually get outside of the castle peasants, monster girls(for those two I will ask supporters what they want), but for example the female royal knight in command is definitely planned. With my current funding I plan on doing like 3 more versions of building mc to queen relation, so that he finally gets some "action" with her^^, then branch out

 

[opepe]

Any plans to remove the 'step' from step mom or is that going to be an integral part of the story?

 

[Mercedes]

Where I would recommend paying more attention in the future would be the drawings/animations.
Let's take image 4 of the preview.
The belt is over the hair, but it still moves completely freely. This is probably because the bottom part is left out for the next scene. Likewise, the fabric doesn't move, although the hand underneath should definitely come into contact with it, but definitely the movement of the ass would move the fabric.

 

[BigBirdDev]

Any plans to remove the 'step' from step mom or is that going to be an integral part of the story?

I don't mind either, but don't think patreon will like it that much . Though Im adding a custom name to her next version, so you can call her what you want ^^

 

[BigBirdDev]

Where I would recommend paying more attention in the future would be the drawings/animations.
Let's take image 4 of the preview.
The belt is over the hair, but it still moves completely freely. This is probably because the bottom part is left out for the next scene. Likewise, the fabric doesn't move, although the hand underneath should definitely come into contact with it, but definitely the movement of the ass would move the fabric.

I get the belt and fabric moving(fixing next version , but what do you mean with " This is probably because the bottom part is left out for the next scene. " ?

 

[Mercedes]

You prepare the body model voir and then put all the clothes over it. Common practice.
But if you forget that the clothes have to move with the model and not remain rigid, you get the result as in picture 4.

Lower part actually means the skirt.
Error of my translation program that has interpreted the actual word differently.

 

[Creiz]

This is one of the games to keep your eyes on. It has a lot of potential.

Normally this kind of game wouldn't be worth my time, I really dislike underhanded tactics shit like hypnosis or mind control but in this one? The bitch absolutely deserves it, so it changes the dynamics a lot.

Hopefully we can keep her "sane and clear minded" enough so she can actually pay for her crimes. It's useless to punish her if she becomes nothing but a hollow shell of herself. Make her be addicted to you, having no choice to succumb to the pleasure but hating herself (and you) for it. Remind her every single time she moans that her actions have consequences and being your personal cumrag is her fate.

Regardless? I can't wait to see more of this. Art is more than decent, honestly, despite the few glaring mistakes here and there. This is one of those games where the effort shows straight from the get go, I really hope it's not gonna get an abandoned tag soon.