VN Ren'Py Formula Zero [v0.01a] [Celeritas.VN]

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Mellt

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You are definitely not alone in that. Though that guy does have a point with the scoreboard looking a little awkward with MC on it.

But who is you?
He means you don´t see the MC name or "MC" for the lap time on the scoreboard there is only written "YOU" and then the lap time or lap time result for the MC.
 

Myntz

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Unique concept and story line, however feel the need to comment of tags currently posted. The Formula One racing theme I like and don't think it's ever been done, well that I have seen. Like the art work and background art. Going to do another play through and will report back. Thanks for allow us to review your work.

3DCG (like), Male Protagonist (good), Romance (good), Twins (ok), Teasing (honestly no one ever gets this right but will see),

Planned Tags: Sexual content (would be good), Group sex (prefer to be allowed to avoid this crap), Masturbation (honestly not needed), Sex toys (Hell NO), Vaginal sex, Anal sex (Hello NO or at least allow the player to avoid this)

NTR will not be present. (good)
 

WaltS

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Unique concept and story line, however feel the need to comment of tags currently posted. The Formula One racing theme I like and don't think it's ever been done, well that I have seen. Like the art work and background art. Going to do another play through and will report back. Thanks for allow us to review your work.

3DCG (like), Male Protagonist (good), Romance (good), Twins (ok), Teasing (honestly no one ever gets this right but will see),

Planned Tags: Sexual content (would be good), Group sex (prefer to be allowed to avoid this crap), Masturbation (honestly not needed), Sex toys (Hell NO), Vaginal sex, Anal sex (Hello NO or at least allow the player to avoid this)

NTR will not be present. (good)
You ofc realize you're only speaking for yourself. Other's opinions may - and will - differ ;)
 
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Celeritas.vn

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Jan 27, 2023
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Unique concept and story line, however feel the need to comment of tags currently posted. The Formula One racing theme I like and don't think it's ever been done, well that I have seen. Like the art work and background art. Going to do another play through and will report back. Thanks for allow us to review your work.

3DCG (like), Male Protagonist (good), Romance (good), Twins (ok), Teasing (honestly no one ever gets this right but will see),

Planned Tags: Sexual content (would be good), Group sex (prefer to be allowed to avoid this crap), Masturbation (honestly not needed), Sex toys (Hell NO), Vaginal sex, Anal sex (Hello NO or at least allow the player to avoid this)

NTR will not be present. (good)
All sexual tags not commonly accepted as "vanilla" will be optional. The plan is also to have a SFW version of the game, so implementing optional paths help with that workflow.
 
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fajiker145

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All sexual tags not commonly accepted as "vanilla" will be optional. The plan is also to have a SFW version of the game, so implementing optional paths help with that workflow.
Is netorase/sharing/swinging and other cuck tags going to be in the game? Even if avoidable I would like to know, since you already confirmed NTR will not be here.

Basically all content where the LI would be intimate with any other character that isn't the MC regardless of context.
 

WaltS

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Is netorase/sharing/swinging and other cuck tags going to be in the game? Even if avoidable I would like to know, since you already confirmed NTR will not be here.

Basically all content where the LI would be intimate with any other character that isn't the MC regardless of context.
Check the 'Genre' spoiler in the OP.
 

Celeritas.vn

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Jan 27, 2023
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Is netorase/sharing/swinging and other cuck tags going to be in the game? Even if avoidable I would like to know, since you already confirmed NTR will not be here.

Basically all content where the LI would be intimate with any other character that isn't the MC regardless of context.
If you're asking if there would be a path/option for the MC to share a LI with another dude, the answer is no.
 
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Pervo

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Just played through to the end of the current content.

If its a first attempt, its really solid. It could do with polishing but that comes with experience!

The story is original and so far, keeps the main concept of the game, the racing in the centre. The technical knowledge and know-how about how things work in real life racing feeder series is very welcome as it helps in immersion.

The characters look good and with further polishing, they will get even better.
The actual car run animations look quite sick and are very welcome.

There are various points where the name of the MC gets swapped out with the default or just the generic MC and that will need sorting in the next versions.

The build-up of relationships will need adequate time and focus as well, as its a VN at the end of the day and romantic involvement is a key element of it. Likewise, hopefully the sex side of things will have adequate thought behind individual scenes, whenever they are planned to come about.

So in summary, really solid attempt. Keep polishing it, keep chipping away with a chisel and you'll have a unique, highly interesting story at the end of it.

Good luck for the rest of the development dev. Lights out and away we go.
 
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KuaneosFZ

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I don't know if this was asked already, but will we be able to make choices that affect the outcome of a race, whether during setup or the race itself?
Personally I'd like that, as long as it doesn't get in the way of the story you want to tell, of course.
 

goulet1995

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If you're asking if there would be a path/option for the MC to share a LI with another dude, the answer is no.
how will the relationships work in this willit be pick solo LI or harem, also how about sharing between LI's such as lesbian/bisexual scenes will that be included and if so avoidable. If you do plan a harem path would avoiding lesbian/bisexual stuff affect that?
 
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