VN Ren'Py Formula Zero [v0.01a] [Celeritas.VN]

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Mellt

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You are definitely not alone in that. Though that guy does have a point with the scoreboard looking a little awkward with MC on it.

But who is you?
He means you don´t see the MC name or "MC" for the lap time on the scoreboard there is only written "YOU" and then the lap time or lap time result for the MC.
 

Myntz

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Unique concept and story line, however feel the need to comment of tags currently posted. The Formula One racing theme I like and don't think it's ever been done, well that I have seen. Like the art work and background art. Going to do another play through and will report back. Thanks for allow us to review your work.

3DCG (like), Male Protagonist (good), Romance (good), Twins (ok), Teasing (honestly no one ever gets this right but will see),

Planned Tags: Sexual content (would be good), Group sex (prefer to be allowed to avoid this crap), Masturbation (honestly not needed), Sex toys (Hell NO), Vaginal sex, Anal sex (Hello NO or at least allow the player to avoid this)

NTR will not be present. (good)
 
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WaltS

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Unique concept and story line, however feel the need to comment of tags currently posted. The Formula One racing theme I like and don't think it's ever been done, well that I have seen. Like the art work and background art. Going to do another play through and will report back. Thanks for allow us to review your work.

3DCG (like), Male Protagonist (good), Romance (good), Twins (ok), Teasing (honestly no one ever gets this right but will see),

Planned Tags: Sexual content (would be good), Group sex (prefer to be allowed to avoid this crap), Masturbation (honestly not needed), Sex toys (Hell NO), Vaginal sex, Anal sex (Hello NO or at least allow the player to avoid this)

NTR will not be present. (good)
You ofc realize you're only speaking for yourself. Other's opinions may - and will - differ ;)
 

Celeritas.vn

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Jan 27, 2023
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Unique concept and story line, however feel the need to comment of tags currently posted. The Formula One racing theme I like and don't think it's ever been done, well that I have seen. Like the art work and background art. Going to do another play through and will report back. Thanks for allow us to review your work.

3DCG (like), Male Protagonist (good), Romance (good), Twins (ok), Teasing (honestly no one ever gets this right but will see),

Planned Tags: Sexual content (would be good), Group sex (prefer to be allowed to avoid this crap), Masturbation (honestly not needed), Sex toys (Hell NO), Vaginal sex, Anal sex (Hello NO or at least allow the player to avoid this)

NTR will not be present. (good)
All sexual tags not commonly accepted as "vanilla" will be optional. The plan is also to have a SFW version of the game, so implementing optional paths help with that workflow.
 
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fajiker145

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All sexual tags not commonly accepted as "vanilla" will be optional. The plan is also to have a SFW version of the game, so implementing optional paths help with that workflow.
Is netorase/sharing/swinging and other cuck tags going to be in the game? Even if avoidable I would like to know, since you already confirmed NTR will not be here.

Basically all content where the LI would be intimate with any other character that isn't the MC regardless of context.
 

WaltS

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Is netorase/sharing/swinging and other cuck tags going to be in the game? Even if avoidable I would like to know, since you already confirmed NTR will not be here.

Basically all content where the LI would be intimate with any other character that isn't the MC regardless of context.
Check the 'Genre' spoiler in the OP.
 

Celeritas.vn

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Jan 27, 2023
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Is netorase/sharing/swinging and other cuck tags going to be in the game? Even if avoidable I would like to know, since you already confirmed NTR will not be here.

Basically all content where the LI would be intimate with any other character that isn't the MC regardless of context.
If you're asking if there would be a path/option for the MC to share a LI with another dude, the answer is no.
 

Pervo

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Just played through to the end of the current content.

If its a first attempt, its really solid. It could do with polishing but that comes with experience!

The story is original and so far, keeps the main concept of the game, the racing in the centre. The technical knowledge and know-how about how things work in real life racing feeder series is very welcome as it helps in immersion.

The characters look good and with further polishing, they will get even better.
The actual car run animations look quite sick and are very welcome.

There are various points where the name of the MC gets swapped out with the default or just the generic MC and that will need sorting in the next versions.

The build-up of relationships will need adequate time and focus as well, as its a VN at the end of the day and romantic involvement is a key element of it. Likewise, hopefully the sex side of things will have adequate thought behind individual scenes, whenever they are planned to come about.

So in summary, really solid attempt. Keep polishing it, keep chipping away with a chisel and you'll have a unique, highly interesting story at the end of it.

Good luck for the rest of the development dev. Lights out and away we go.
 

KuaneosFZ

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I don't know if this was asked already, but will we be able to make choices that affect the outcome of a race, whether during setup or the race itself?
Personally I'd like that, as long as it doesn't get in the way of the story you want to tell, of course.
 

goulet1995

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If you're asking if there would be a path/option for the MC to share a LI with another dude, the answer is no.
how will the relationships work in this willit be pick solo LI or harem, also how about sharing between LI's such as lesbian/bisexual scenes will that be included and if so avoidable. If you do plan a harem path would avoiding lesbian/bisexual stuff affect that?
 
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MarcsTriceps

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One of the best games possibly here, sincerely... I'm a big fan of F1, WEC and other racing categories, and i needed a game like this one, even tried to write a script once, but this is another level... Keep it going man, its really good
 

shiro1313

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Damn it can be sooo good. Tbh would play it even without it being porn :LOL: For me there is like 3 girls / models that are main target and top notch visually. Cant wait for more.
 
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bibbybobbybibby

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May 21, 2021
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Great start looking forward to seeing how this progresses. I like the driving sequences is that a replay from Iracing or something?
Gonna be a hard sell to pick anyone but Emma, until they got to the hotel I assumed they were a couple already. Only thing I can see knocking her off the top spot is if shes the one thats been running interference stopping him from being discovered sooner, in an attempt to keep him for herself.
 
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Elduriel

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man this game is fucking awesome, I really enjoyed playing it. I like watching F1 so it's great to finally see an AVN in a similar setting, even if it's not completely grounded in reality. Good writing and characters, renders are nice. Music too. Racing animations are pretty dope. Can't say anything for lewd animations since there aren't any such scenes yet, but I don't mind a slow-burn game. Good luck with your project Celeritas.vn , I see potential in it, hope you get some traction.
 

TheMarquis

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Gave it a shot.

It's not bad. The whole MC Emma dynamic is a bit weird but ok. The writing could be a bit more original but it's not a big issue.

Btw, Lucca is not a name, Luca is.

At the current state I'll give it a solid 4 out of 5 but a lot depends on how deep the choices will be and how they'll be implemented.
 
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Lucid Lancer

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will you be able to get the overlapping romantic circles without there being lesbian/girl on girl including during threesomes if planned
how will the relationships work in this willit be pick solo LI or harem, also how about sharing between LI's such as lesbian/bisexual scenes will that be included and if so avoidable. If you do plan a harem path would avoiding lesbian/bisexual stuff affect that?
Most probably would consist unavoidable lesbian/bi scenes, just an assumption obviously but dev not answering this is an answer in itself.
 
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Celeritas.vn

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will you be able to get the overlapping romantic circles without there being lesbian/girl on girl including during threesomes if planned
how will the relationships work in this willit be pick solo LI or harem, also how about sharing between LI's such as lesbian/bisexual scenes will that be included and if so avoidable. If you do plan a harem path would avoiding lesbian/bisexual stuff affect that?
Yes. Like I said, anything not Vanilla, as in MC + 1 LI, will be optional, and very clearly avoidable.

Most probably would consist unavoidable lesbian/bi scenes, just an assumption obviously but dev not answering this is an answer in itself.
It's still early in development and I would like to avoid giving hopes on what's not set in stone.
That said, the game has multiple endings planned, where one might involve not committing to anyone in particular.
Choices in game will make it obvious what's your desired path. I'm trying to develop it as to avoid the need for a mod. There will be some points of no return obviously, or else there would be no stakes, but I'm trying to be clear about what's being presented to not need a notepad, a tracker, or a mod to know what path you're on.

Edit: I'm not committing to an update schedule or something like this because doing this alone is a gargantuan task. If I feel that a certain path needs 3 different outcomes to make sense and not break immersion to keep up with the principles I set for the game, then I will have to do the 3 different paths, and that will take the time it needs to take for it to be a product I'm happy with. I abandoned the concept of making it perfect long ago, so as long as things keep moving, I'm happy to keep doing it.
 
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Btw, Lucca is not a name, Luca is.
My university had a lot of international students; my roommates were two Italian guys named Lucca and Claudio. I can assure you that it is spelled exactly like that. We did a lot of projects together, and I saw a lot of files with his name on it. I assumed it was an Italian name.

Fake Edit: Just to make sure so, .

And for anyone curious, because I was, Luca is , in many Spanish speaking countries, and also Portugal, Romania and Italy, according to google.
 
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