Me, reading this thread.
This part I will respond to though... Book 4, when compared with the slave route of books 2 and 3, is crap.
There's entirely too much focus on random side girls that mean nothing, and sooooo fucking little actual Korra content.
I wanted her as broken and manipulated as Azula was, or as taken advantage of as Toph was. Instead, she's still the same attitude riddled brat, but now you can cum on her feet when you want... That's crap.
Asami also should have been handled sooo differently than she was.
Let me throat fuck Korra as punishment for her attitude. Let me choose to be downright vile to her all so she can learn Airbending, and leave Amon out of it.
She should have lost her virginity to the MC, not to the MC dressed as Amon. Its just all shit.
i gotta say, while i did enjoy this chapter, i couldnt agree more with how it was handled. it feels like we are in the first third of the chapter, not its final months. i have no problem with the side girls, every chapter had them, and they do add alot of flavor, they are at least better developed than some of the girls in the earlier ones.
to me, the biggest problem comes from how unfocused it was. we are training her, but then we are also helping the police, while also helping someone with her job, then there's trying to blackmail the other one with the police help... and for no fcking reason we travel to a diverent place... TWICE. it almost feel like a headless chicken running around spilling blood everywhere.
maybe that's a consequence of trying to "up the ante". i wasnt a fan of the dungeon of chapter 3, it was interesting, but having to go back down every day was a bore, at least it had some focus on it. here, the "world" doesnt feel that interesting.
i think it should've been like the seven bladed sword, a single blade with small horns growing from it, instead, it was closer to a fan blade that keeps spining in random directions.