Saraf

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nah it's pretty on the nose with Korra's actual personality. She wants the MC and just takes it like she's done everything else in her life lmao
Wasnt the whole point of taking her legs to humble her?
Also,whats possibly more important here,is that its rather anticlimatic for the reader.
The entire route has built up towards that point,complete with a rather long stint without the character and then it just kinda happens.
A complete waste of what should have been a strong culmination(and its not like Korra showing at least some hesitation for her presumeably first time would be out of character,if anything you could turn it into a cute little scene where she psyches herself to keep the strong facade up).
 
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kaggen

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Just noticed in the gallery Jinora sleep fuck, either spelled wrong or it is suppose to be Jorina he is fucking? because tenzin didnt meet her at all untill mc go to swamp which is must later on in the story
 
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Crusado

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Seeing Azula, Mai, and Tai Lee again was incredibly surprising. I thought when Tenzin mentioned Izumi we would get a scene with her. I wonder how much longer this book will be. Is the next update just going to be some time on the island/Republic City, then straight to the platinum mech fight, and then the end?
 
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