- Jul 7, 2020
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After some thought the jealousy is fine, but if that's the main hook then I want them to go further with it. Jinora just having a random crush on the MC is fine, but at this point the only reason we are having sex with her is because she's a popular character. In the slave route there was a whole forbidden aspect to her route. What's the main hook right now?interesting thoughts in there. methinks as it seems now, Jinora has a crush on MC, pretty much just that.. implies MC is maybe some cutie of sorts (?) idk she's sent to teach him then finds out she wants him, like that; at least could get behind that jealousy and whatnot. looks she goes out of her (usual) way alot to bend terms to some ahead of Korra on that path, actually alot teenagers do that more or less for somewhat comparable reasons.
Is she like Pema who gets off on hearing about our sexual exploits? No.
Is she like Lin or Suyin struggling with her repressed feelings for us? No.
What they could do is take her jealousy/possessiveness/desperation to a higher level. Instead of just mentioning that she's even with Korra since she gave us a blowjob, how about have her spying on us and desperately doing things with us that she sees us do with other girls. And while fucking her instead of "don't fuck Korra, you only love me" it's " I'll make you forget all about her". Or she fucks us before Korra so that way she can say she's ours. What if she lets us fuck her pussy before getting a blowjob from Korra so Korra has to taste her pussy off our dick? You get what I'm saying? Make it an actual competition.
Also, the other girls seem to have a kink:
Ikki - pee, futa
Opal - exhibition, voyeur
Suyin - exhibition (like mother like daughter), wife sharing
Kuvira - masochism or rough sex
Jinora she might not have a kink, but if she's super competitive she might be super submissive and follow all kinds of orders just to be our number 1 girl.