Overall a really well done game, the whole thing is top notch, polished and impressive.
I really dislike dream sex scenes as I feel it ruins the moment when the MC finally scores with the woman. You don't need to have sex in every episode. If you are going to include dream sex scenes and fantasies perhaps allow the player to skip the scene?
I loved Dylan, found that whole situation hilarious, first time I've ever wanted one of these games voiced just so I could hear the terrible accent. All of the Love Interests are great looking though I think Chloe is my favorite, sexy asian nerd... The sex scene with Lily was disappointing as I play these games for the ability to make choices, especially as to who the MC fucks (also would like to turn down Sue but I get it that you need that to happen).
Anyway, I think this is going to be a huge success. It really feels well made and if I had money, and this wasn't on Patreon, I would consider pledging.