Others Freyline [v0.1.2 alpha] [Purple Octopus]

[Faolan Farcreek]

really great setup for a game, however i would suggest maybe making it so you're much tankier on the HP front and getting rid of the game over from too many orgasms.
like for example: every time you orgasm you lose 1 max HP and gain a debuff stack, upon getting a certain amount of these stacks you get a random debuff that makes things harder.
or perhaps make enemies more agressive after you orgasm/make enemies with a dick want to take your virginity the higher your arousal is or the amount of orgasms you've had so far

 

[Ronia]

One note I'd like to add after reading the comments; it might be a good idea to ask what games in the genre people have played, at what difficulties, when assessing feedback. While feedback from anyone can be useful, context also matters. If someone who winstreaks A20 in Slay the Spire tells you that some cards are too niche to pick, or that a given enemy has design flaws, that is very different from someone who has only ever played deckbuilders if they come with sexual content.

That's not to say that the less adept groups should be disregarded. Just that their opinions on balance should be seen in the context of experience. Players are generally very good at pinpointing what *feels* bad in a game. They're great at telling you what is frustrating or obscure. They do, however, tend to be extremely bad at telling you how to solve those problems.

 

[tacosgrande]

Downloaded Datanodes file, uploaded to Virustotal and got 3 flags as malicious. Not sure if that copy is compromised.

Obviously smoke is not a fire and no virus checks are perfect, but I've tried both Datanodes and Buzzheavier and I'm getting this result. Am I doing something wrong here?

 

[Blue2343]

you get turned to a ghoul for a bit... it might have been a bit OTT to add the tag actually- but in the full game i want to do more TF stuff. its another one thats ... in my kink library

was thinking what an interesting TF might be. contrast is good, the MC is strong and agile, so maybe something that is like weak and fat (maybe ugly?) maybe like a fat little hairy goblin might be funny! perhaps like a body swap boss... hmmm

I like the idea of a body swap boss because you have to figure out how to counter your own cards because I beat the boss the first time by stalling with flirting and cleansing but the second time I beat the boss with pure power.

 

[raziel321]

Just found some small bugs:
- When purging Hit (and probably any other card of which you have two copies in your deck), both Hit cards are purged, instead of only one
- Bless doesn't have an explanation and shows undefined
- Hovering over an enemy shows some "undefined", see attached screenshot

 

[morphisblob]

Great job overall. It is cool seeing something with a starting deck that isn't just a Slay the Spire clone.

The card, Flourish, is too bad. It is essential to note that every card incurs an additional cost of 1 card, in addition to its listed cost. This makes Flourish cost 1 card and 1 mana on a turn for the benefit of 1 card on the next turn; or 1 mana, do nothing. As the size of the starting deck is very small, removing this card is an overly large increase to deck strength. Prepared 2, and the card is still bad IMO, but perhaps on par with starter cards.

Totally cool sword is overly punishing, but only barely so. It would make for a fun challenge run if you came out in a marginally better condition. Perhaps slightly more health could get you to a shop to purge/replace the unusable cards, or losing virginity could automatically transform Virgin's Prayer and Focus.

The Virgin's Prayer card is missing the apostrophe BTW

 

[Purple Octopus]

...getting rid of the game over from too many orgasms...or perhaps make enemies more agressive after you orgasm...

ohh thats a good idea. i was thinking about this.
i was tempted to just do this (the non game over bit), but it clashes a bit with what i got planned a bit later on. but i am likey to do the +agro post your orgasm thing.

the big picture here is
hp build : safe but slow. this needs to reward dicipline, as the game designer/ DM- it will be my job to tempt you away!
aro build : risky but quick/ rewarding. stuff here works better if you play at a low resolve (i.e. naked and aroused)
master build (balancing the two) punishing but the most rewarding.

themeatically it should work. aro should be like playing with fire trying not to get burnt, like entering a fight very close to an aro game over ought to make you super powerful- high risk high reward.

 

[Purple Octopus]

Downloaded Datanodes file, uploaded to Virustotal and got 3 flags as malicious. Not sure if that copy is compromised.

Obviously smoke is not a fire and no virus checks are perfect, but I've tried both Datanodes and Buzzheavier and I'm getting this result. Am I doing something wrong here?

Agh! i should have kept a copy of the file hash to compare to the one above!
but if you can wait - in about 6 hours im planning to ship a release a new version
i'll provide the SHA256 hash along with it, so you can have a bit more piece of mind what im shipping is what your getting

 

[Purple Octopus]

...assuming that you plan on adding actual battlefuck/defeat CGs in the future rather than just changing clothing/expressions? ... black screen saying 'femdom scene'...

Im going to have to be realistic, i would love to animate the scenes, but im copping flack already in other places for AI in just the stills... if i had more money - or a better PC- i could actually animate all of this with AI.

i think after all the stills are in (incuding those scenes you correctly identified as missing)-then i will look what i can do with animation.

....Werewolves or vampires could fit with the current crypt theme? Mimic chest with tentacles as a possible trap? I am guessing that future levels will involve different environs but a forest level could include goblins/orcs/beastmen/bandits/gnolls/trolls etc. Maybe a broken down wagon that if you approach to investigate results in a scene with some bandits laying in wait?

Current planned biomes

Crypt: possession, undead, ghosts, curses
Goblin cave: gross out, uglification etc
Asylum: mind control, hallucinations, emotional stuff
Jungle: beastkin, slimegirls (ofcourse), parasites.. maybe
Mage prison/ Dungeon: magic, portals, transformation, bondage
(+ 2 x SECRET biomes for the two endings)

i already had mimic and tentacles down (again ofcourse)
warewolves is a good idea, i'll add them in

... way to keep track ... number of times fucked ... pregnancy ...

yep, a simple one to build and stats are always fun

 

[Smevven]

The goth girl after orgasming once has a quite unsettling face, idk if it's intentional but compared to her first image or after she has orgasmed twice, her second forms face turns me off quite a bit. Aside from that I didn't really dislike anything in the experience I had playing this.

 

[Ronia]

The goth girl after orgasming once has a quite unsettling face

Ah, I seen you've met my high school girlfriend.

 

[Purple Octopus]

Great job overall. It is cool seeing something with a starting deck that isn't just a Slay the Spire clone.

The card, Flourish, is too bad. It is essential to note that every card incurs an additional cost of 1 card, in addition to its listed cost. This makes Flourish cost 1 card and 1 mana on a turn for the benefit of 1 card on the next turn; or 1 mana, do nothing. As the size of the starting deck is very small, removing this card is an overly large increase to deck strength. Prepared 2, and the card is still bad IMO, but perhaps on par with starter cards.

Totally cool sword is overly punishing, but only barely so. It would make for a fun challenge run if you came out in a marginally better condition. Perhaps slightly more health could get you to a shop to purge/replace the unusable cards, or losing virginity could automatically transform Virgin's Prayer and Focus.

The Virgin's Prayer card is missing the apostrophe BTW

TIGHT feedback!... nothing i can clap back on , thanking you...

 

[Purple Octopus]

The goth girl after orgasming once has a quite unsettling face, idk if it's intentional but compared to her first image or after she has orgasmed twice, her second forms face turns me off quite a bit. Aside from that I didn't really dislike anything in the experience I had playing this.

Ok.. time to give babe a makeover

 

[anvimur]

Haven't read the thread yet so if anything here is already mentioned, feel free to ignore it

Current pet peeves with this, in no particular order:
-Jab never seems to actually do its listed damage, even when fighting obviously tangible enemies like goths or skellies. I'm not sure the Combo effect functions for it, and neither it northe only other Combo card I've seen have a tooltip like the other card effects.
-Cleansing shrines can spawn as the literal first room. Considering that you haven't done anything yet, this is basically a dead node that does nothing, unless there's a special interaction with them if you don't actually need to heal/purify yourself.
-Buffs/debuffs have no indication of where they're coming from (ex how to get rid of the debuffs enemies stick you with that persist through the end of the battle)
-The mummy's purge cards "Remove Bandage" stick around and become unplayable when fighting any other enemy type, making them effectively "Remove Wallet" cards if you accidentally defeat the mummy before managing to get rid of them

 

[JJ993]

Im going to have to be realistic, i would love to animate the scenes, but im copping flack already in other places for AI in just the stills... if i had more money - or a better PC- i could actually animate all of this with AI.

i think after all the stills are in (incuding those scenes you correctly identified as missing)-then i will look what i can do with animation.



Current planned biomes

Crypt: possession, undead, ghosts, curses
Goblin cave: gross out, uglification etc
Asylum: mind control, hallucinations, emotional stuff
Jungle: beastkin, slimegirls (ofcourse), parasites.. maybe
Mage prison/ Dungeon: magic, portals, transformation, bondage
(+ 2 x SECRET biomes for the two endings)

i already had mimic and tentacles down (again ofcourse)
warewolves is a good idea, i'll add them in


yep, a simple one to build and stats are always fun

Nice! Still images during battles could still work to be honest (although animations would be great!) but maybe a still image of her giving a blowjob or masturbating when those cards are played for instance and a CG of her being fucked on game over?

Biomes sound great! Have you considered a hell/underworld option? Would fit with the paladin theme...

 

[Purple Octopus]

Haven't read the thread yet so if anything here is already mentioned, feel free to ignore it

Current pet peeves with this, in no particular order:
-Jab never seems to actually do its listed damage, even when fighting obviously tangible enemies like goths or skellies. I'm not sure the Combo effect functions for it, and neither it northe only other Combo card I've seen have a tooltip like the other card effects.
-Cleansing shrines can spawn as the literal first room. Considering that you haven't done anything yet, this is basically a dead node that does nothing, unless there's a special interaction with them if you don't actually need to heal/purify yourself.
-Buffs/debuffs have no indication of where they're coming from (ex how to get rid of the debuffs enemies stick you with that persist through the end of the battle)
-The mummy's purge cards "Remove Bandage" stick around and become unplayable when fighting any other enemy type, making them effectively "Remove Wallet" cards if you accidentally defeat the mummy before managing to get rid of them

all new and valid actually- cheers a lot of easy things to fix up

 

[Purple Octopus]

Ok new version up with just minor stuff in it.
this wont be the last update to the demo, im keen to get the demo really hitting the gameplay i want to have

 

[Yun_D]

I hope there is more futanari content. Events with futanari content in it, more enemies being futanari, the MC being turned into a futanari. Things like that.
Also, pregnancy content as well please. Either the MC getting pregnant or getting enemies pregnant as a futanari.

ya know any games like that ?

 

[WellIGuess]

Ok new version up with just minor stuff in it.
this wont be the last update to the demo, im keen to get the demo really hitting the gameplay i want to have

Don't forget to actually, y'know, update the download links with the new update.
Very neat gameplay loop, although some more explanations about mechanics/hover pop-ups over what card modifiers mean would certainly help. Also not sure if I just missed them but some actual events beyond "enemies strip, you strip, GG you win/lose" wouldn't go amiss, even if it's just a couple of lines accompanying certain 'ero' cards.

 

[Boomshockalocka]

Speaking on the "I would struggle to animate this", it doesn't need to be animated, a few good stills with convincing text, maybe a moan or two is all you really need.