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Dessolos

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I think I made him rape them all at some point, except for Gabby, Brittani and Viola. Never tried anything dark with them (Viola just because I don't really care for her). But I try not to keep going on any of those paths, I feel like they're all so sweet man, you can't hurt em. But Nicki, just a gold digger, I treated her like a whore again and again but I balance it out and treat her nicely when possible. But in her case it's all her fault, the others did nothing to deserve it
yeah I disagree 100% about Nicki being a gold digger. It comes across like that at first but once you explore everything and listen to her explanation, she actually doesn't want the MC's money. She is just weak and listens to her boyfriend and allows him to abuse her to the point she does something she doesn't want to do or agree with. Even on the dark path route she ask the MC for way less money than what Brent wanted her to get from him.
 
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Fauxcest

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yeah I disagree 100% about Nicki being a gold digger. It comes across like that at first but once you explore everything and listen to her explanation, she actually doesn't want the MC's money. She is just weak and listens to her boyfriend and allows him to abuse her to the point she does something she doesn't want to do or agree with. Even on the dark path route she ask the MC for way less money than what Brent wanted her to get from him.
Oh yeah, I agree with that, but I'm not forgiving towards her actions. She won't get any lenience because she's dumb:KEK:
 

clippedwings

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Great update. I loved all the mason content, as they're my favorite character. I have a question though, does it matter much where you go while waiting for mason to finish their appointment with the doctor? The Chesty Cheetah and school scenes are left on cliffhangers. If you choose the brittani route is there going to be an extra scene in the next update?
 
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Joshy92

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Why won't it? A new update is still a new update
Once an update is out there's a cooldown period before it can be on the updates page again.

It's why so many people are complaining of bugs now because they played a beta of chapter nine when it leaked before.
 
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I absolutely get why people want more scenes with the main girls. But, I sort of wrote myself into a position where I couldn't quickly/easily get to ero scenes with some of the characters, without it feeling totally unearned. Then, certain events got more involved/required more time, than I really thought they would.

Like, it's worth pointing out my original plan was for the last three chapters to basically be one chapter: MC wakes up, meets the annoying influencers while running an errand, gives Risa a ride to Lucien's, brings Risa home, visits Alex, encounters Brent, convenes with Nicki and Mason, brings Mason to get glasses, and then goes to get Gabby's dad out of jail.

That all sounds pretty obtainable, when laid out like that. But, as often happens, once I'm writing a scene I start seeing where else it could go. So, taking Risa home becomes taking Risa to a hotel first, for some different ero options. That then becomes two scenes, because a Good Guy MC probably wouldn't just bring her to a hotel, and hey, why not go ahead and address Pepper's camgirl storyline while I'm there at the diner? Then, it's easy to go down a rabbit hole, and what should have been pretty straightforward, becomes a sprawling series of scenes.

Add in that I do want to add some fanservice, and even basic scenes tend to expand past their original plans. So, a scene which could have just been MC going to a store, fading to black, and emerging with milk to encounter the influencers becomes.. MC goes to a store, talks to the girl who works there, establishes that he has partial ownership of the business, encounters Brittani and her mom, and has different routes/options to interact with both her, and Isabella.

All that said: I'm going to try to restrain myself a bit, going forward. Before the conclusion of Season 1 next year, Gabby and Brittani will have their big ero scenes. A couple of dangling story threads will be resolved, and the focus will tighten a bit more. We'll see another girl have departed from the dark path. All of that makes things easier for me to move the story along.

I also have a bad habit of over-explaining certain things, or lingering in scenes for too long. I'm going to try to address that moving forward, by using more storytelling shorthand. Now that everyone's relationship is basically set up, that's considerably easier.



I have no real interest in doing 24 FPS animations right now. They'd take way too much time, for a result which I feel is underwhelming anyway. Once the first season is complete, I'm going to talk to some people about doing some proper animations. Until then, they'd just feel like a distraction. Same deal with music/sex sound effects. It'll be more work to do them poorly, and then go back and re-do them, rather than to just do them right the first time.
Fair enough.
 

Dessolos

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Really enjoyable game. The only thing missing is a "bad girl" partner-in-crime for a darker path. I wonder if later on some of the girls might get corrupted into something like that.
if that becomes an option only can see Nicki and Risa and maybe Pepper being able to fall under this if corrupted.
 
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Joshy92

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I absolutely get why people want more scenes with the main girls. But, I sort of wrote myself into a position where I couldn't quickly/easily get to ero scenes with some of the characters, without it feeling totally unearned. Then, certain events got more involved/required more time, than I really thought they would.

Like, it's worth pointing out my original plan was for the last three chapters to basically be one chapter: MC wakes up, meets the annoying influencers while running an errand, gives Risa a ride to Lucien's, brings Risa home, visits Alex, encounters Brent, convenes with Nicki and Mason, brings Mason to get glasses, and then goes to get Gabby's dad out of jail.

That all sounds pretty obtainable, when laid out like that. But, as often happens, once I'm writing a scene I start seeing where else it could go. So, taking Risa home becomes taking Risa to a hotel first, for some different ero options. That then becomes two scenes, because a Good Guy MC probably wouldn't just bring her to a hotel, and hey, why not go ahead and address Pepper's camgirl storyline while I'm there at the diner? Then, it's easy to go down a rabbit hole, and what should have been pretty straightforward, becomes a sprawling series of scenes.

Add in that I do want to add some fanservice, and even basic scenes tend to expand past their original plans. So, a scene which could have just been MC going to a store, fading to black, and emerging with milk to encounter the influencers becomes.. MC goes to a store, talks to the girl who works there, establishes that he has partial ownership of the business, encounters Brittani and her mom, and has different routes/options to interact with both her, and Isabella.

All that said: I'm going to try to restrain myself a bit, going forward. Before the conclusion of Season 1 next year, Gabby and Brittani will have their big ero scenes. A couple of dangling story threads will be resolved, and the focus will tighten a bit more. We'll see another girl have departed from the dark path. All of that makes things easier for me to move the story along.

I also have a bad habit of over-explaining certain things, or lingering in scenes for too long. I'm going to try to address that moving forward, by using more storytelling shorthand. Now that everyone's relationship is basically set up, that's considerably easier.



I have no real interest in doing 24 FPS animations right now. They'd take way too much time, for a result which I feel is underwhelming anyway. Once the first season is complete, I'm going to talk to some people about doing some proper animations. Until then, they'd just feel like a distraction. Same deal with music/sex sound effects. It'll be more work to do them poorly, and then go back and re-do them, rather than to just do them right the first time.
Honestly I don't care about animations or sound I focus on the story and so far it's been a darn good ride dude.

I meant it when I said FiN is my favourite avn because I get really happy when I'm reading this kick arse story.
 
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soprano31

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If you choose the brittani route is there going to be an extra scene in the next update?
-If you choose to go to Brittani,
you will find out that Madison Barron also worked at "Chesty Cheetahs" in her younger years.
-You can shape your relationship with Brittani more (more corrupt or romantic )
- and at the end you see how she is harassed by a Weinstein- like character at her "work".

1.If you want a quick fuck,go to the park
2.Do you want to further develop your relationship with Caroline and take the first step with her,
(a beautiful romantic kiss ) go to Nicki at the school event.
3.If you want to learn more about Madison's past,
strengthen your relationship with Brittani ,
and know what kind of work an clientele she handles,definitely go to her !!
 

MagicMan753

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NeonGhosts A grammar mistake and a minor gripe on one render(from a few updates ago)

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Also if you ask Nicki to take Mason, She will have run in with Brent in person[, then you will sit down with her on the sidewalk, she asks "why were you asking about ron" then it cuts to next scene./ISPOILER] It feels like a weird transition or cut, so just would like some feedback on this. Thanks.
 
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SonsOfLiberty

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Once an update is out there's a cooldown period before it can be on the updates page again.

It's why so many people are complaining of bugs now because they played a beta of chapter nine when it leaked before.
It's just 2 weeks, and I doubt the "final" build will be out in under 2 weeks. If he intends on adding more content (even if it's 5 minutes) it can be promoted again with all the fixes.

I mean people are impatient, but if you want a bug free experience the beta will probably be out soon and I'm guessing most if not all the bugs will be ironed out by then.
 
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