- Jun 15, 2017
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That’s actually intentional, just reflecting the MC’s discomfort at having gotten a little tipsy with Gabby, and potentially gotten a little too familiar with her. Like, despite how innocent it was, MC should really not be drinking with an 18 year old, offering her booze, and discussing her relationships. Even if she wants to, he should know better.
I should have thrown a few more flags in there to denote whether he kissed her, for improved text accuracy. But, hindsight’s 20/20.
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Also if brent forged nicki's signature, there is no way in hell the loan shark can go after her legally, that won't hold up in the court of law
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Managed to eventually sub, charged me for a higher tier instead of the one I was going for but its fine.
Is this image going to be a new branch of Viola (where you can pay her to please you), because I think the only way to get a scene with her is forcing her into it, which imo takes the fun out of the equation.
I haven't been able to completely play this yet but I have no doubts its going to progress into a great VN
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Ack, sorry about that! Feel free to message me on Patreon for a refund. And yes, this will be for Viola's paying-for-it path. It's important to note that not all characters may be able to get good/evil routes at the same juncture.
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Glad you're enjoying it so far, though!
I'd have loved to have Ashe in here, but the update was already kind of enormous. Still, she has a big part next chapter, and she'll continue to have a prominent place in the game.The lack of ashe makes this update sad
Also if brent forged nicki's signature, there is no way in hell the loan shark can go after her legally, that won't hold up in the court of law
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- Aug 29, 2019
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Now that its been hinted im looking forward to potential raceplay scenes with gabby, i hope the author dosnt back away from that "kink"
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Hey NeonGhosts,
Just wanna say I know you worked your butt off on this latest update, and it really shows. Not a lot of games do the multiple paths things well, and each of your updates has improved tremendously. The best part for me is the dialogue and story you manage to weave into your sex scenes - they're really good. Don't burn yourself out and take some time to yourself when needed! You're doing great work!
A small criticism of the latest chapter I would say is that
Just wanna say I know you worked your butt off on this latest update, and it really shows. Not a lot of games do the multiple paths things well, and each of your updates has improved tremendously. The best part for me is the dialogue and story you manage to weave into your sex scenes - they're really good. Don't burn yourself out and take some time to yourself when needed! You're doing great work!
A small criticism of the latest chapter I would say is that
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- Jul 10, 2017
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You either connect or keep being distant and snobby.
Whatever she wants to talk about, it should be O.K. with you.
Are ya that scared of a wee lil flower so strong she might infatuate you?
Grow a spine and keep chatting her up!
Whatever she wants to talk about, it should be O.K. with you.
Are ya that scared of a wee lil flower so strong she might infatuate you?
Grow a spine and keep chatting her up!
Well, if he's a loan shark, he probably doesn't care. If Brent wanted to put his own momma down on the loan, he'd have probably let him.
Kinda don't get though the part about Bret stealing the documents, but hey, whatev
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Snake doing the Shark Tank show and chiming in on disastrous investment ideas.
Sorry, that sob story was not even close to a good enough excuse. She had far too many chances to not be an idiot and somehow managed to take the wrong turn every time. She would have needed to be kidnapped or in a coma or in jail or something similarly debilitating to explain dropping off the face of the earth for three fucking months without so much as a text.
On top of that, I showed zero interest in her after her return and I even specifically told her that she did lose me in no uncertain terms, yet she still casually strolled into the bedroom naked expecting to get some action. To add insult to injury, with no prompting from the player, the MC calls her the smart one and offers a job which requires good judgment to this person who has done nothing in this entire story except repeatedly demonstrate poor judgment.
Honestly, at this point, all my eggs are in the Gabby basket. If that route goes to shit, I'm out. It's unfortunate, because the writing is on the better end of the porn game writing spectrum in basically every way except the most important to me: making me like the potential love interests. I assume that's because the writer wants to give the player some superficial reasons to rationalize being a monster to them in the dark path. All it does instead is make me wonder why he, as probably the most eligible bachelor in the entire city, doesn't just pull up a dating app and match with someone who has their shit together.
On top of that, I showed zero interest in her after her return and I even specifically told her that she did lose me in no uncertain terms, yet she still casually strolled into the bedroom naked expecting to get some action. To add insult to injury, with no prompting from the player, the MC calls her the smart one and offers a job which requires good judgment to this person who has done nothing in this entire story except repeatedly demonstrate poor judgment.
Honestly, at this point, all my eggs are in the Gabby basket. If that route goes to shit, I'm out. It's unfortunate, because the writing is on the better end of the porn game writing spectrum in basically every way except the most important to me: making me like the potential love interests. I assume that's because the writer wants to give the player some superficial reasons to rationalize being a monster to them in the dark path. All it does instead is make me wonder why he, as probably the most eligible bachelor in the entire city, doesn't just pull up a dating app and match with someone who has their shit together.
Here's an unofficial PDF walkthrough for those who might like one. Possibly contains errors; further updates unfortunately not guaranteed.
14th edition, updated to: v0.70b (Chapter 10).
14th edition, updated to: v0.70b (Chapter 10).
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Meant to ask, did anyone find a use for the allergy meds you can pick up? Probably down the line, but didn't know if I missed something.
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No worries about the sub, just glad that it worked out in the end.Ack, sorry about that! Feel free to message me on Patreon for a refund. And yes, this will be for Viola's paying-for-it path. It's important to note that not all characters may be able to get good/evil routes at the same juncture.
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Glad you're enjoying it so far, though!
I'd have loved to have Ashe in here, but the update was already kind of enormous. Still, she has a big part next chapter, and she'll continue to have a prominent place in the game.
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Would love to turn Viola into a sugar baby if that's the path you're thinking about.
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Wait, really? Her whole storyline already made me want to bash my head on the wall as it is... I liked the writing in this one, but that just makes me not want to download the game at all.