VN Ren'Py From Wife to Wench [Ch.4.5] [ForeverLosing]

[ForeverLosing]

The art is completely fine I don't think you have to improve a lot. I think the biggest "issue" is the inconsistency. It's sometimes great and sometimes poor, and weirdly enough the poorer drawings are the ones you reuse a lot while the good art are the one-off scenes.

The art more than suffices and communicates the eroticism enough. Don't waste your precious time on the art when you could be focusing on the parts that people actually care about like plot, hot dialogue and Choice & Consequences.

If you mean the kissing cut-in then I've now received enough negative feedback to redraw it from scratch

 

[DarkDaemonX]

Sounds like a vanilla game, it's not going to happen here, sorry!

So you choose your path and get no opportunity to actually make her cum? That image made it sound like both paths had multiple requirements, that's why I asked, but I guess it's predetermined.

 

[Riel_555213]

Loved the update, it's been amazing

slightly unrelated, has anyone been able to get this to work on joiplay? chapter 2 worked fine for me a few weeks ago but the current version keeps kicking me out :/

 

[El-bandi]

this is so great, once i got some cash to spare i gotta member for a month or two
my only hope is for the rival route that Danton and Cassandra are gonna do some stuff in front of Jack with him being oblivious to it and maybe only having a hunch that something might be happening, groping and kissing as he turns around or as they are on the other side of the bar

 

[ForeverLosing]

So you choose your path and get no opportunity to actually make her cum? That image made it sound like both paths had multiple requirements, that's why I asked, but I guess it's predetermined.

You can make her cum plenty of times, but only if you accept your inner urges via the pervert route.

Loved the update, it's been amazing

slightly unrelated, has anyone been able to get this to work on joiplay? chapter 2 worked fine for me a few weeks ago but the current version keeps kicking me out :/

I forgot to add in the changelog that you need to update Joiplay so it supports Renpy 8.4 for it to work.

 

[CERVIXPIERCER]

To me her design is just fine, but I'm massive fan of huge tits and huge asses so call biased. LOL

To me the only thing thats weird is the head proportion, it looks wayy too small compared to the rest of her body, if you look at the preview picture 3 on page 1 for example

 

[DarkDaemonX]

You can make her cum plenty of times, but only if you accept your inner urges via the pervert route.

Is there a reason the MC can't make her cum on the willpower route though, because if there isn't a good reason, it would make no sense.

 

[ForeverLosing]

To me the only thing thats weird is the head proportion, it looks wayy too small compared to the rest of her body, if you look at the preview picture 3 on page 1 for example

Yeah, I agree. That art was from one of my very first drawings. I'm not saying I've gotten much better, but I recognize I need to make the head bigger in her standing art/event art going forward. It's especially obvious when her tits are so badonkalicious

 

[ForeverLosing]

Is there a reason the MC can't make her cum on the willpower route though, because if there isn't a good reason, it would make no sense.

Believe me, I do justify it in game, but the spoilery reason is

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I needed to set the willpower route up this way for an excuse to write the Truck Cuck path, where the wife cheats on him at every possible turn for pleasure. So if that doesn't sound desirable, then be a pervert.

 

[Joshy92]

A new update? Well I was trying not to masturbate tonight, but that's out the window now lol.

 

[Leo D. Marstone]

We are three chapters in now and I never noticed the game?
Lowkey I love the artstyle and the premise of the game.

Now before everyone rolls with their eyes and I know this game so far is getting much love as a NTS game but just let me get it out of my system xD

I read on the frontpage that netorare and netorase is not really avoidable. However they are two seperate things.
My question is can we steer the story down the line into the direction of full NTR? Like letting the bond break the main couple has and go to the bull? If not thats fine. I just thought I might ask.

Then the gay content recently added. Is this content skippable or avoidable. Like can the player decide not to watch these scenes but still happen in the narrative? Or can we actually completely avoid it without ever getting it mentioned in the game again?

Lastly is there some *cough* pregnant content *cough* to find in your list of optional content?

Anyway, good luck and fun in further development. I will surely keep an eye out for this game.

 

[ForeverLosing]

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I wrote that NTR and NTS are unavoidable so people don't bitch, but no you can't ever hit full NTR where the wife leaves the husband. The worst she will do, on the willpower route, is fuck near everything with a cock and try to hide it from her husband (but he knows all about it).

NTR is super easy to avoid otherwise. Netorase is so far also completely avoidable, but I can't make any promises for that in the future.

Gay content is and always will be fully avoidable. They won't happen in the narrative if you don't want them to.

And yeah I definitely am going to have this wife knocked up sometime. Hopefully soon!

 

[Johnthomas]

Loved this update

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[Joshy92]

I had an idea after talking to some friends about NTS the other day. What if MC watches Cassandra & Danton having sex but as he watches he notices that it turns into passionate lovemaking?

Not that Cassandra won't love or leave him MC of course, but maybe she feels an emotional connection to Danton that gets stronger whenever they make love.

 

[Leo D. Marstone]

but no you can't ever hit full NTR

Aww shucks xD

Thanks for the quick reply.

And yeah I definitely am going to have this wife knocked up sometime

Impregnation only or do you want to show her pregnant with maybe pregnant sex scenes as well? I dunno maybe in a timeskip during the ending.
Sry if I ask this again but this site made me paranoid about this content and I annoy every dev when they decide to utter these words ......

 

[Melancholy Blues]

A small bug:
Cassie calls the MC Jack on the first day (My MC has a different name).

 

[ForeverLosing]

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We're a little early for such hardcore shenanigans, but we'll get there.

I had an idea after talking to some friends about NTS the other day. What if MC watches Cassandra & Danton having sex but as he watches he notices that it turns into passionate lovemaking?

Not that Cassandra won't love or leave him MC of course, but maybe she feels an emotional connection to Danton that gets stronger whenever they make love.

We already get a bit of this in ch3.5, I think we're on the same wavelength here.

A small bug:
Cassie calls the MC Jack at the first day (My MC has a different name).

Good catch, thank you so much for bringing this to my attention. Fixed for next update.

 

[ForeverLosing]

Impregnation only or do you want to show her pregnant with maybe pregnant sex scenes as well? I dunno maybe in a timeskip during the ending.

There are going to be pregnant sex scenes and it will absolutely not be optional. No timeskips either. Magic will hurry things along (thank you fantasy setting!).

 

[DonComedia132]

Will you be adding more women to the game? I mean, it would be way better if MC could also reverse NTR.

 

[skyrfen]

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