VN Ren'Py From Wife to Wench [Ch.4.5] [ForeverLosing]

[ForeverLosing]

ji dev just play a little, haven't finished, but curious to ask
if there is a path where fmc cheated behind mc without him knowning.
oblivious path where the husband doesn't know.

There is, but it isn't a guarantee. Each of the suitors has a rival route where NTR can possibly happen. You have to disappoint the wife, keep your love-o-meter low, and do nothing to stop the rival from gaining affection with her. Only then she'll cheat behind the MC's back.

 

[Arkade]

Surprisingly well written- I expected a kinetic VN or one where choices all lead to the same inevitable acceptingyourroleasacuck scene but pleasantly surprised it's not like that at all and there's multiple characters with choices that really change things. Will put it on watch- seems ambitious but if it's been worked on for this long I am sure you'll end up finishing it. Played through what was there in a couple different ways- when first seeing the rival route crossed out I thought it was something not implemented yet- but going back to change a few choices and I was able to get on it. personally- I like NTR happening but the heroine attempting to keep it a secret- and actual happenings while in-character you try to avoid it. And I see Lux as someone who could really mix things up in an interesting way for a route like that. Like- are they also trying to get close to your wife- or would they if the chance? Would they respect your wish to keep the other adventurers away or collude with them if it meant getting closer to you(who is seemingly their type)- but maybe it's not a sexual thing and you interest them only because your obliviousness- and they see you more as entertainment. I can't really get a beat on their ambitions and personality because they seem like the type to lie with a straight face. But I like it this way- as a different race it's clear they favor different innate values and maybe monogamy isn't seen as a great virtue. Also- with magic a lot can happen there... I wonder if they're really actually a cute thing underneath those clothes or someone who can also please the heroine in bed like Danton.

 

[ThirstySquidward]

Haven't even played the game, but i'm going to now that i know the dev is based and talks to the people here. so many devs get pissy and upset that their stuff is here which, fair i suppose, it is a piracy site after all. but this? this is horribly rare. keep it up dev, based.

 

[MIRONENKO]

The scene with Danton on the river is very good.

 

[DarkDaemonX]

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Basically, in the willpower path she fucks everything and never tells the husband about it (not for a while anyway), while the husband is aware of all of it and getting off on it. It's the ultimate cuckold path which I wrote for my own fucked up reasons. What makes it unique from other games is that the wife remains romantically faithful to her husband in her own fucked up way.

What about a path where you struggle to resist the intrusive thoughts, but you do make her cum every time? What happens then?

 

[Youssef302]

the story is 10 /10 but the FMC her Physical composition is Weird she need redesigning

 

[ForeverLosing]

the story is 10 /10 but the FMC her Physical composition is Weird she need redesigning

Yeah I redesigned her once already but the ratio's still off a bit. Someday I'll learn how to draw

 

[ForeverLosing]

What about a path where you struggle to resist the intrusive thoughts, but you do make her cum every time? What happens then?

Sounds like a vanilla game, it's not going to happen here, sorry!

 

[LookerNSFW]

Sounds like a vanilla game, it's not going to happen here

To me her design is just fine, but I'm massive fan of huge tits and huge asses so call biased. LOL

 

[Arvynn]

I love it when cassandra using her blue dress, especially when she show it first to that black ugly bull. Looking forward for her using it more in future.

 

[Deathbringer_jo]

The art is completely fine I don't think you have to improve a lot. I think the biggest "issue" is the inconsistency. It's sometimes great and sometimes poor, and weirdly enough the poorer drawings are the ones you reuse a lot while the good art are the one-off scenes.

The art more than suffices and communicates the eroticism enough. Don't waste your precious time on the art when you could be focusing on the parts that people actually care about like plot, hot dialogue and Choice & Consequences.

 

[goodreader7711]

Is there an Android version somewhere?

 

[ForeverLosing]

The art is completely fine I don't think you have to improve a lot. I think the biggest "issue" is the inconsistency. It's sometimes great and sometimes poor, and weirdly enough the poorer drawings are the ones you reuse a lot while the good art are the one-off scenes.

The art more than suffices and communicates the eroticism enough. Don't waste your precious time on the art when you could be focusing on the parts that people actually care about like plot, hot dialogue and Choice & Consequences.

If you mean the kissing cut-in then I've now received enough negative feedback to redraw it from scratch

 

[DarkDaemonX]

Sounds like a vanilla game, it's not going to happen here, sorry!

So you choose your path and get no opportunity to actually make her cum? That image made it sound like both paths had multiple requirements, that's why I asked, but I guess it's predetermined.

 

[Riel_555213]

Loved the update, it's been amazing

slightly unrelated, has anyone been able to get this to work on joiplay? chapter 2 worked fine for me a few weeks ago but the current version keeps kicking me out :/

 

[El-bandi]

this is so great, once i got some cash to spare i gotta member for a month or two
my only hope is for the rival route that Danton and Cassandra are gonna do some stuff in front of Jack with him being oblivious to it and maybe only having a hunch that something might be happening, groping and kissing as he turns around or as they are on the other side of the bar

 

[ForeverLosing]

So you choose your path and get no opportunity to actually make her cum? That image made it sound like both paths had multiple requirements, that's why I asked, but I guess it's predetermined.

You can make her cum plenty of times, but only if you accept your inner urges via the pervert route.

Loved the update, it's been amazing

slightly unrelated, has anyone been able to get this to work on joiplay? chapter 2 worked fine for me a few weeks ago but the current version keeps kicking me out :/

I forgot to add in the changelog that you need to update Joiplay so it supports Renpy 8.4 for it to work.

 

[CERVIXPIERCER]

To me her design is just fine, but I'm massive fan of huge tits and huge asses so call biased. LOL

To me the only thing thats weird is the head proportion, it looks wayy too small compared to the rest of her body, if you look at the preview picture 3 on page 1 for example

 

[DarkDaemonX]

You can make her cum plenty of times, but only if you accept your inner urges via the pervert route.

Is there a reason the MC can't make her cum on the willpower route though, because if there isn't a good reason, it would make no sense.

 

[ForeverLosing]

To me the only thing thats weird is the head proportion, it looks wayy too small compared to the rest of her body, if you look at the preview picture 3 on page 1 for example

Yeah, I agree. That art was from one of my very first drawings. I'm not saying I've gotten much better, but I recognize I need to make the head bigger in her standing art/event art going forward. It's especially obvious when her tits are so badonkalicious