I don't know if the translator will translate correctly what I want to say, but I see a lot of inaccuracies in this game. The first thing that came to my mind when I delved into the history of this universe was that I was dealing with a writer who had an idea for his first book, but at the same time had poor skills.
The good news is that skills are things that can be learned over time. I'm more concerned about the story itself in this game. If the beginning of the story is bad, even if the skills are better later, they will not fix what was once broken, and each new player will have to go through the worse part of the game before getting to the better part.
I will emphasize that I am not talking about the game itself and its mechanics, but about the history of the universe presented.
As a solution to this problem, I would suggest writing a script of the story you want to present in the game and making this script available to a wider audience so that some kind soul could say whether it is good or bad, and if it is bad, point out where everything can be fixed.
Let me give you a good example of what I'm talking about. SPOILER:
And now because of this one error, the developer will continue to develop the game based on this error, and the later he wants to fix this error, the more the game will have to be rebuilt.