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More choices, the character building and writing and world building and cg's are all too good for the choices to boil down to (get fucked: yes/no). It would be better if there were different paths for each love interest rather than real railroady
 

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More choices, the character building and writing and world building and cg's are all too good for the choices to boil down to (get fucked: yes/no). It would be better if there were different paths for each love interest rather than real railroady
It would be nicer if it were structured more like star periphery, so that it allows you to choose with which content to engage and when. I mean right now its not a big deal, but as the game gets more content, a completely linear progression might feel a bit tedious.

you need to put on some spoiler warnings
Whoops, I failed to consider that other people might also want to be pleasantly surprised.
 

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It would be nicer if it were structured more like star periphery, so that it allows you to choose with which content to engage and when. I mean right now its not a big deal, but as the game gets more content, a completely linear progression might feel a bit tedious.


Whoops, I failed to consider that other people might also want to be pleasantly surprised.
I'm sorry, but I hate sandbox games with all my soul, so it's never going to happen, I'd rather be clear. And it's completely unsuited to a story where the POV can change at times.

Options - skip/unseen text - is the way :cool:
 

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I'm sorry, but I hate sandbox games with all my soul, so it's never going to happen, I'd rather be clear. And it's completely unsuited to a story where the POV can change at times.

Options - skip/unseen text - is the way :cool:
I also hate sandbox games they always revolve around tedious repetition and grind, but star periphery isn't really a sandbox game its more of a non-linear VN, it just gives you a map allowing for more freedom of choice on when to access the content you wish to see.
A bit better than simply fast-forwarding in my opinion, but at the end of the day people will get their fap content one way or another, so its not a big deal.
 
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I'm sorry, but I hate sandbox games with all my soul, so it's never going to happen, I'd rather be clear. And it's completely unsuited to a story where the POV can change at times.

Options - skip/unseen text - is the way :cool:
It is not really sandbox, no idea why the mods put that there, but rather the game having a main storyline and sidequests that Spacer (the protagonist) can chose the order in which to do them.

But i agree, this method is ill suited to the way you are writting the story in Futa Dominium.
 

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I also hate sandbox games they always revolve around tedious repetition and grind, but star periphery isn't really a sandbox game its more of a non-linear VN, it just gives you a map allowing for more freedom of choice on when to access the content you wish to see.
A bit better than simply fast-forwarding in my opinion, but at the end of the day people will get their fap content one way or another, so its not a big deal.

This structure doesn’t work when scenes follow a specific chronology referenced in the dialogue.
You could have a scene in the morning, then in the evening, then at noon, with characters referring to events the player hasn’t even experienced yet—it just wouldn’t make sense.

It’s best suited for kinetic visual novels where the game is made of pieces that fit together like legos. Because, what happens if a player decides to skip a scene in the sandbox mode because they dislike NTR or domination content, but that scene contains a choice that alters part of the story or changes certain dialogues? Well...
 

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Love a good story in a hot VM, but man the overarching plot is making my jerk off sessions depressing. So hot but uuugh so dark.

You sure this isn't from the DC universe?
 
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I just replayed the game because i was bored lol. I like at the end of the update you get a Glimpse of what will happen in the future for luna once she becomes a prostitute like if you pick "get mad" luna in the future will be a dominatrix which is what i chose. the dev is doing a good job with this like most have said other devs always make the fmc a sub which i dont mind but it sometimes get exhausting to get the same thing. This dev had the balls to make luna a dom :sneaky:. i hope in the future all futa (or most) will be calling luna mistress luna and luna will have a strap-on lol:WeSmart:
 
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I just replayed the game because i was bored lol. I like at the end of the update you get a Glimpse of what will happen in the future for luna once she becomes a prostitute like if you pick "get mad" luna in the future will be a dominatrix which is what i chose. the dev is doing a good job with this like most have said other devs always make the fmc a sub which i dont mind but it sometimes get exhausting to get the same thing. This dev had the balls to make luna a dom :sneaky:. i hope in the future all futa (or most) will be calling luna mistress luna and luna will have a strap-on lol:WeSmart:
I want to see that as well
 

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So it seems the dust has settles a bit after the last update. As AB Software is still in the house I would also give my 2 cents about it.

Luna is still among my top ten hottest MCs on this site. So this one is actually so important to me that I feel I have to make a comment about the last update because I did not see it being brought up:

I think the way the story in this update was told is not good.

We start with a pretty good scene, then LORE, then the scene continues.

Then the story continues until we get to the club. The 2 Futas start to get on to Luna, then LORE some dude with guns in a car with some weird Mambojambo while I sit there with my dick out being totally ready for the action. My brain simply was not able to comprehend in that moment what was going on, because it was in a totally different mindset.

I have read from a few people that they just skipped through the worldbuilding or that they don´t like it or whatever. I personnaly think that this is caused by the how these scenes are structured. I perfectly understand that you as dev have seen this scene hundreds of times and there is nothing hot for you. But think about how the story unfolds for us viewers.

Do you know the big shootout scene in Heat (with De Niro and Pacino)? It is one of my favorite scenes in any movies. But put it in a porn movie right after she blew him and before he is going to put it in her and you can be sure this scene would be nothing than an unwelcoming distraction to me and I would skip as fast as possible.

You did not use this kind of retarding element in the 1st update. I don´t think it works in porn at all and I also don´t know any other VN that uses it. It feels more to be punished with lore and story while progression should be a positive part of a novel.

My personal problem with this way of storytelling is that at this point I honestly had lost some confidence in your writitng so that during that whole 2nd scene the back of my brain alwas said "what if the next scene will be another unrelated distraction? What if the dude with the guns is shown again?" So I just could not let go and enjoy this fantastic scene as I should have. (And actually there was another distraction with the waitress entering in between which seemed completely unnecessary and drawn out in that moment to me).

I thought about commenting about the massacre as well. But that is completely a "me" problem whith this particular scene while imho the things I mentioned above adress a more broader issue in your writing that affected more people that watched this update.

Maybe I could at least give you a little food for thought as the initial update to me was 100% fantastic. English is not my 1st language so I hope I could get my point across and apologies for too much rambling.

Cheers!
 
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i cant wait for the senator scenes ♥
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Between losing her "boyfriend" and a assassination attempt i think we won't be seeing sex scenes with the senator anytime soon.


By the way i was thinking why did the sniper working for "Wesker" stopped the assassination attempt on her? Wouldn't be better to simply have a puppet president ralling people againsts extremists while his biggest political adversary was dead? Unless "Wesker" also wants to put some strings on her to control both. :unsure:
 
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Between losing her "boyfriend" and a assassination attempt i think we won't be seeing sex scenes with the senator anytime soon.


By the way i was thinking why did the sniper working for "Wesker" stopped the assassination attempt on her? Wouldn't be better to simply have a puppet president ralling people againsts extremists while his biggest political adversary was dead? Unless "Wesker" also wants to put some strings on her to control both. :unsure:

That wasn't the senator in the attack, that was her aide. The senator only showed up during speeches, she doesn't have a real in game appearence yet.
 

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That wasn't the senator in the attack, that was her aide. The senator only showed up during speeches, she doesn't have a real in game appearence yet.
Not just an aide, She(Casey Sinclair) is the leader of FRI and the Vice presidential candidate. I wonder if she's gonna hide with Arianna and Sarah Chambers?
 
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