Text needs a good once over.
The think he worked on. : thing
A lot of the time relation is used should instead be the name of the character.
Am I going to start having a public everytime I jerk off? : (public should be "audience") every time (jerk off should be "masturbate")
If you choose second girl in red light district it says you chose the first.
Kaltra eating background the faces are smeared. Kind of terrifying.
Kaltra hand.png is a corrupt image. The file is there but it can't be opened with anything.
Get rid of all the ds store files. Also separate out the mac from the pc.
Slight separation of choices would be nice. If you look at Aridus thanking for food and asking to leave, they are right on top of each other. Just a slight distance between to make it less likely to miss click.
If you go into the cockpit, choose a destination, then choose to go back to hyperspace and then click another destination it doesn't update to the new place in the text.
A bit too much on extra space at the bottom when things are done.
As I mention on most html games, adding the ability to control the game via input keys is always useful. Look at the game college daze for this, and the ability to have the audio at a predetermined level with videos only playing if they are in the main view, which can be seen in Apocalyptic world.
Some image aren't great, like calling Riley to the room and her being so small in those.
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