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Thank you for your contribution, I plan on doing Four girls each with their own personality; I've got two idealised, I just need to figure out what the other two will be. As for their Mother, I will cover her later in the game as she wont be around at the start for reasons that will become clear in the game. She will not however be a romance-able character.

I do plan to pretty much make it up as I go along whenever new thoughts enter my mind, I don't expect it to turn out perfect as it is indeed my first game. If it ends up abandoned that is just the way the cards fold, but I'll try to keep that from happening.
Well good luck, I hope you change your idea on the mother, seeing as a lot of ppl love that sort of thing.
 

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if the mom is a non-romancable character you better make her ugly af or people will complain
You could always make her to look like the average 29-31 yo American that has given birth to 4 kids...
:mad:) :*)
While I like milfs, it'd be nice to see once in a while a game that does things bit differently.
 
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You could always make her to look like the average 29-31 yo American that has given birth to 4 kids...
:mad:) :*)
While I like milfs, it'd be nice to see once in a while a game that does things bit differently.
May I ask, what kind of "Differently" do you mean?
 
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my point was that if she is even remotely attractive like an average 31yo mom can be for some people there will be complain that she in not romanceable so he should make her ugly to avoid it
Ah well, she's not going to be Ugly but she wont be someone you can go for, kind of a "look but you can't touch" style cockblock lol
 

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May I ask, what kind of "Differently" do you mean?
I mean the mom could actually look like a woman who has given birth to four kids, and no, she did not get them while she was still underage. Since kids are likely the "mandatory" 18+ yo, the mom should be around 50 yo. She is also NOT a former model who has gone through dozens of plastic surgeries to look like 17 yo. Just make her to resemble the average modern day American, meaning ~170 pounds and 5 in shorter than the mc.
 
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I mean the mom could actually look like a woman who has given birth to four kids, and no, she did not get them while she was still underage. Since kids are likely the "mandatory" 18+ yo, the mom should be around 50 yo. She is also NOT a former model who has gone through dozens of plastic surgeries to look like 17 yo. Just make her to resemble the average modern day American, meaning ~170 pounds and 5 in shorter than the mc.
"Since kids are likely the "mandatory" 18+ yo, the mom should be around 50 yo."

I think we can both agree the "All characters portrayed in this game are 18" tag on most games is because the devs are trying to avoid a breach of law. That being said they don't account for this in their family design. For example, Big Brother, Milfy City etc... all have a parental figure that appears way younger than they actually should.

"Just make her to resemble the average modern day American, meaning ~170 pounds and 5 in shorter than the mc."

My game isn't intending to be realistic, in fact I doubt most of the games on this platform actually conform to the normality of real life in regards to appearance. The characters are specifically designed to look nice to attract people to them and the game, if they looked ugly or non-beautiful then people wouldn't be interested in them.

I think it would be cool to have a character that looks beautiful but isn't actually pursuable, it breaks the tradition of "I see sexy woman, I bang her" that most games follow.
 
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that's really a bad idea people won't like it, if you want to do something different you should just give your characters an unusual look, i can give you some ideas if you want but having a non romanceable girl will really upset people
Its only a game, I don't see why having a non-romanceable character would upset people. Like I've said previously she might be off the menu for the MC but I'm happy to do renders of her for people.
 
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Its only a game, I don't see why having a non-romanceable character would upset people. Like I've said previously she might be off the menu for the MC but I'm happy to do renders of her for people.
As long as the MC never peeps on her, never expresses desire or attraction, or we are never shown renders of her nude or near nude. There are at least two games I can point out where players are upset by not being able to bang a hot character - Intertwined (the MC can peep at the mom when she is nude) and Become a Rock Star (the sister is hot and has been a constant point of contention), however both developers have been clear about not including them in any lewdness. I doubt they are the only examples.
 
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There will always be people who are complaining, even if they get the games free. I'd still like to see games with a bit more realistic Americans, where the mother doesn't look the same age as her kids, except that she has muuch bigger boobs and is much taller than all her 4 adult kids. With almost all games going for the same old "mother is an ex-model who has magically managed to avoid aging" way, it'd be refreshing to see someone brave enough to do it bit differently.
 

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I wish for a game that if the MC wanted the mother then he/she would have to help her get back in shape as well as pervert her. I agree that too may games are doing the ex-model thing, and yes the game's are unrealistic. women are shorter then men 98% of the time, Depending on the area of the world. In the US the average height of a women is 5'4" vs. a man 5'10". So all these games where the mom is bigger then the MC is a tad unrealistic. (unless the MC is like a teenager, but even then by the age of 18 most men have hit their height. (although you can still grow up to the age of 23 - 25, but that's uncommon.)
 
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I wish for a game that if the MC wanted the mother then he/she would have to help her get back in shape as well as pervert her. I agree that too may games are doing the ex-model thing, and yes the game's are unrealistic. women are shorter then men 98% of the time, Depending on the area of the world. In the US the average height of a women is 5'4" vs. a man 5'10". So all these games where the mom is bigger then the MC is a tad unrealistic. (unless the MC is like a teenager, but even then by the age of 18 most men have hit their height. (although you can still grow up to the age of 23 - 25, but that's uncommon.)
I've actually put together a Development team now, I'm unsure how the Character will be received and I don't want to spoil anything fornow but we've definitely not gone down the model trope for the mother.
 

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I've actually put together a Development team now, I'm unsure how the Character will be received and I don't want to spoil anything fornow but we've definitely not gone down the model trope for the mother.
Now that will peak my interest. I hope it's more realistic, if the Mom / landlady... is over 40 then it should show on her body. EG/ stretch marks on tits/ ass/ midriff... vein's starting to show on tits... depending on how much she has to work bags under her eyes, maybe some swelling in the knees... things like that. A tad on the thick side defiantly if she had kids. Very hard to lose pregnancy fat.

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I've actually put together a Development team now, I'm unsure how the Character will be received and I don't want to spoil anything fornow but we've definitely not gone down the model trope for the mother.
Now that will peak my interest. I hope it's more realistic, if the Mom / landlady... is over 40 then it should show on her body. EG/ stretch marks on tits/ ass/ midriff... vein's starting to show on tits... depending on how much she has to work bags under her eyes, maybe some swelling in the knees... things like that. A tad on the thick side defiantly if she had kids. Very hard to lose pregnancy fat.

Just my two cents
Fall Fable has a rather realistic milf or two in it. If you want to look for or need inspiration. Not that there aren't women I know who are in their 40's and look great, just not model/actress great (need a team and money to keep someone looking that good), I see quite a few when I'm out on my runs in the morning. Just not as good as all of the moms in these games end up looking.
 
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Now that will peak my interest. I hope it's more realistic, if the Mom / landlady... is over 40 then it should show on her body. EG/ stretch marks on tits/ ass/ midriff... vein's starting to show on tits... depending on how much she has to work bags under her eyes, maybe some swelling in the knees... things like that. A tad on the thick side defiantly if she had kids. Very hard to lose pregnancy fat.

Just my two cents
Only time will tell my friend, I'm glad to see you're eager to see what we have in mind.
 
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I think it's the most important thing to say. We need much more different subjects and titles. Keeping everything simple makes it no longer an art. That's why we have to make creative and fun games. Dont be cheap just think about everything.
 

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I have a game idea which I wanted to create. unfortunately i can't do it because many obstacles. if u want I could give u the idea for free
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that's main story and as for game play
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lastly sorry for my bad English. and I hope someone give me a review about the game should I continue create the script or not
 

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I have a game idea which I wanted to create. unfortunately i can't do it because many obstacles. if u want I could give u the idea for free
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that's main story and as for game play
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lastly sorry for my bad English. and I hope someone give me a review about the game should I continue create the script or not
That's an interesting Idea @badi90 .

Of course you need to do a lot more work to begin to create content that might become a game:
1. a story outline and overall plot,
2. main character descriptions,
3. design the locations
4. detailed plot for intro, chapter 1 etc.
5. any specific scene ideas?
6. if you want a "sandbox" style with tasks to raise stats / triggers, then write our all that information (at least as needed for the first parts of the game).
7. If you want a VN style with a few choices in between dialogue and scenes, then write out those plot branches and how the story will be affected by choices and how you plan to bring the branches back together again.
 
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That's an interesting Idea @badi90 .

Of course you need to do a lot more work to begin to create content that might become a game:
1. a story outline and overall plot,
2. main character descriptions,
3. design the locations
4. detailed plot for intro, chapter 1 etc.
5. any specific scene ideas?
6. if you want a "sandbox" style with tasks to raise stats / triggers, then write our all that information (at least as needed for the first parts of the game).
7. If you want a VN style with a few choices in between dialogue and scenes, then write out those plot branches and how the story will be affected by choices and how you plan to bring the branches back together again.
I have thought about most of the things u mentioned ofc . while I have the beginnings and what will the game will look like at the end .
it's a sandbox game . where there will be 3 types of characters he will work with 1st are main characters. the main story revolves around them as he continue increasing his stats *trust love corrption *will lead deffreint events .
2and type of character are ppl will be introduced from 1st type after certain events of 1st type . help u get more ability and help building underworld network businesses/information while after certain events triggered u could jest leave them alone or countue to corrupt them for fun .
lastly 3rd type . they are side characters. u could jest leave them alone or corrupt them . if u do it will lead other option in ur game for ur underworld or help u courrpt the other 2 types
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I know most of this did not answer ur questions but this should give u a general idea of the game behaviour.
one of the main reasons I can't make the game is I have bad asp . even i create the game i can't upload it to the internet from where I live . if ur interested we could voice chat and tell u about the game in details
lastly sorry about my bad English. as u noticed it's not my 1st language