Demoness_Kiss
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Gotta be able to change the name. No way in hell's half acre am I having such a retarded name in front of me the entire game. Yes. It is a deal breaker.
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and half of them aren't even there..so i guess they're planned tags
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You can report the OP and tell mods which tags shouldn't be there. Will help future players
Planned tags are not allowed in the tags list.Haven't played yet or I'd do so
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Queen Paulya II. died.
She gave birth only to a son, a male, a reject.
His name was Aegis, later known as Aegis I.
Not becaues he was the first King to be named Aegis, but because he was the first King there was for hundreds of years.
Queen Paulya II only had, besides her son a brother which gave birth to Traeon, the father of Leanor.
Leanor, sometimes called the "True Heir of the Targaryen" had no intentions to rule and so did not want the throne, instead she wanted and got the castle Dragonstone and all lands which belong to the Targaryan-Dynasty.
Leanor is your aunt and King Aegis I. is your father, for you beeing Plaeyon, first son of the King.
Q. Paulya ===> Aegis I ===> Plaeyon
Brother ===> Traeon ===> Leanor
The Emperor King Doesn't it make Plaeyon and Leanor cousins instead of being aunt & nephew?
She gave birth only to a son, a male, a reject.
His name was Aegis, later known as Aegis I.
Not becaues he was the first King to be named Aegis, but because he was the first King there was for hundreds of years.
Queen Paulya II only had, besides her son a brother which gave birth to Traeon, the father of Leanor.
Leanor, sometimes called the "True Heir of the Targaryen" had no intentions to rule and so did not want the throne, instead she wanted and got the castle Dragonstone and all lands which belong to the Targaryan-Dynasty.
Leanor is your aunt and King Aegis I. is your father, for you beeing Plaeyon, first son of the King.
Q. Paulya ===> Aegis I ===> Plaeyon
Brother ===> Traeon ===> Leanor
The Emperor King Doesn't it make Plaeyon and Leanor cousins instead of being aunt & nephew?
I personally recommend you to have an option to read the text faster, it gets pretty boring to wait so much for the next line to appear...
I'm also pretty confused about the relationships, as the comment above mentioned. Not to mention that I would prefer sister/brother relationships and not step-sisters, but whatever, that's just personal preference.
Finally, it would be nice to name your house and your family members, at least it would help a lot to understand some plot.
I'm also pretty confused about the relationships, as the comment above mentioned. Not to mention that I would prefer sister/brother relationships and not step-sisters, but whatever, that's just personal preference.
Finally, it would be nice to name your house and your family members, at least it would help a lot to understand some plot.
How much content for the first release or should I just put this on the burner and wait a couple release?
Other then that, call me intrigued.
Other then that, call me intrigued.
Waiting on the text to slowly load is mind numbing. Please, just put in a 'next' button or 'load scene' button or something so we don't have spend time being bored waiting for text to pop.
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Too Lazy to tell someone which ones aren't there XDYou can report the OP and tell mods which tags shouldn't be there. Will help future players
Haven't played yet or I'd do so
Lucky you, i don't even know how to trigger that scene XD
I like the vision of this, a weak king trying to maintain a grasp
I'd recommend getting a beta reader or something - I realize you're not writing a term paper or anything like that, but the text mistakes in spelling, grammar, etc, they can become really distracting if there are too many of them. Shouldn't be too difficult to clean up, though. Language barrier issues are expected and having someone to look over it and make the corrections needed probably will save you time trying to fix machine translation or use phonetic spelling.
I'd recommend getting a beta reader or something - I realize you're not writing a term paper or anything like that, but the text mistakes in spelling, grammar, etc, they can become really distracting if there are too many of them. Shouldn't be too difficult to clean up, though. Language barrier issues are expected and having someone to look over it and make the corrections needed probably will save you time trying to fix machine translation or use phonetic spelling.
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