As usual, I appreciate the feedback as usual! I'd say, and I know it's difficult in your case, to truly try to suspend disbelief in the bad ends, probably even more so on the commission ones. Even the ones that I make myself are non canonical, but the commissioned ones I do what the person paying me the $250 wants. I will take some design liberties, and obviously I'm the one that's still creates it, but I created around anything specific that they ask for which can obviously make for some out of character or seemingly odd decisions.
Otherwise I think for the most part, most of the questions and things that you mentioned will be addressed as The story goes on. But, like I said, I'm grateful for the feedback and I appreciate having such a fan devoted to specific information. At the end of a novel it really comes in handy because I can go through and address a lot of the things that you notice. And as this is going on, I'm going to make sure I look through your notes at times just to make sure.
An example might be how you mentioned that regular police are able to handle the giggled people, but they are almost impossible to kill because of their ability to heal, and they have strength close to on par with Trixie herself. So, it's an example of something I might add to the first chapter to help explain not only why they are told to just kill them all, but also, why they are feared. Another example might be going into greater detail as to why even Terrorbyte would be fearful of him. His intellect is actually greater than anyone else sitting at that table.
Anyway thanks again!
Otherwise I think for the most part, most of the questions and things that you mentioned will be addressed as The story goes on. But, like I said, I'm grateful for the feedback and I appreciate having such a fan devoted to specific information. At the end of a novel it really comes in handy because I can go through and address a lot of the things that you notice. And as this is going on, I'm going to make sure I look through your notes at times just to make sure.
An example might be how you mentioned that regular police are able to handle the giggled people, but they are almost impossible to kill because of their ability to heal, and they have strength close to on par with Trixie herself. So, it's an example of something I might add to the first chapter to help explain not only why they are told to just kill them all, but also, why they are feared. Another example might be going into greater detail as to why even Terrorbyte would be fearful of him. His intellect is actually greater than anyone else sitting at that table.
Anyway thanks again!