HTML Abandoned Girl in the City [v0.1.5a] [BK Games]

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Girl in the City is a life simulation adult game about a girl who just moved in a new city. You can choose why she moves there and her initial goals which will also set the difficulty of the game. Then it's up to you to control her actions and see how her life will turn up to be. The development of the game only started and many more updates will come in the future.​

Thread Updated: 2019-03-28
Release Date: 2019-02-18
Developer: BK Games
Censored: NO
Version: 0.1.5a
OS: Windows
Language: English
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[User_23654]

Edited and moved.

 

[xt2021]

the link is Public version 0.1.0 , not Patron version 0.1.5

 

[Shadowhunter9]

Another girl life simulator? It looks a lot like Life Choices. Don't know yet if there's a lot of stuff there, but kind of interested to see where this game will distinguish itself from the other simulators.

Edit: So after checking the image folder file, it seems a lot of the same images are used for this simulator as in Life Choices, Girl Life and a couple from Therapist. Then started up playing the game. This version is VERY experimental, I would say. The text has quite some spelling errors. It's not machine translated, but there seem to be a lot of typos.
The game itself isn't running like a simulator yet. You have only four or so actions you can do per day, before your energy drains already. I've tried the debt (not dept) route and the university route, both for about 5 minutes.

1. The debt route is impossible to start with, as your morale is 0 and isn't raisable with anything I've found in the game (walking raises it a bit, but sleeping outside just drops the morale back to 0 again). Without morale, you can't do anything but beg. It's not realistic to beg until you get a 1000 bucks so you can rent a room.
2. The university route is unclear. I have no idea what I'm supposed to do. Yes, you get a room on campus, but you still have to pay for courses? So what am I doing there? So then I decided to get a job as a nurse. Tried to go to the hospital to start my shift, but apparently at the moment you can only go to work from your own living room. Also a major game breaking bug, you can't get money from work (at least as a nurse). It will give you $tmpmoney which the game thinks is 0.

So in short it needs a couple of things: bughunting first, balancing second and then spelling.
On a side note, I'd advise getting some new images as well because at this point, it's not standing out from the others.

 

[BlackKnight6666]

the link is Public version 0.1.0 , not Patron version 0.1.5

I apologize for this. My mistake.

 

[BlackKnight6666]

Another girl life simulator? It looks a lot like Life Choices. Don't know yet if there's a lot of stuff there, but kind of interested to see where this game will distinguish itself from the other simulators.

You can tell me what do you want in the game and I'll do my best to implement the changes you want in the future.

 

[baconater1234]

awesome, love these type of games, please can you do continuous development .

 

[Landladies & Tenants]

You can tell me what do you want in the game and I'll do my best to implement the changes you want in the future.

Generally like these types of games, but there's many "young woman becomes a slut because of life." That ignores all the mature/MILF porn out there. You might consider doing one from the perspective of an older woman where 1) she's divorced and needs to make it on her own in a new city or staying with relatives (opens up incest route with nephews) or 2) she's in an unhappy marriage and wants to explore her sexuality

Just an idea but no one has taken this approach with HTML real porn games yet and this would use of all the MILF porn out there.

A few other suggestions:

1) Use longer, higher-quality clip cuts. Son of a Bitch is a great game because uses a lot of 20 second+ clips that mesh well with the scene, and uses a series of these clips to show progression in the scene or with NPC relationship over time. We don't need more grainy, 2-second gifs of 90s-era porn when there's so much HD stuff out there.

2) pregnancy/having to raise your kids. This adds the dimension of having to raise your kid(s) and trying to hide your life from them...and the lengths you are willing to do so.

3) Please make the interface simple. I know some grinding is necessary since it's supposed to show the woman "falling," but I don't want to have to click through 5 things just to go to the shopping center.

4) A range of paths for the MC to choose from. She shouldn't be "doomed" to become a slut, or at least open up the possibility for her to be "saved" from her lifestyle (while still retaining elements of her past slut life). Of course, she can always fall back.

Hope this helps.

 

[CreepyGhost]

You can tell me what do you want in the game and I'll do my best to implement the changes you want in the future.

First of all I want to wish you good luck with the game (I take it you are the dev). It's good to see people who are willing to listen to players and not only the patrons.

I will get the game and play it, then let you know my opinion too.

 

[Doruna]

Hi BlackKnight,
I tried your game a little bit, or at least tried to try, since I like the genre a lot. Unfortunately I couldn't really get into it because of the writing. I understand that english is probably not your first language, and that's fine especially when a lot of the games here are based on artwork/visuals, but when the game is supposed to be heavily relying on text, I would advice you to work on that a lot more. Reading the text in the game is kind of turn-off right now, not only because of all the misspellings and issues with grammar, but also because the wording and the prose in general has a bit simple and childlike feel to it, probably because of the language barrier.

BUT, I'm sure that's something you can improve and work on, and I wish you luck. This is my favorite genre of adult games, and I enjoy following these projects.

Someone also already mentioned Life Choices. If you want my opinion, something that you could improve from Life Choices, is the way too fast development of corruption (at least for my tastes). I like Life Choices, but I felt like the character was WAY too easy and quick to turn into a complete prostitute. I understand that some developers probably feel pressured to offer their patrons and players some sexy content to play with, but I feel like the gradual journey with the game is a lot more satisfying, instead of having a pre-alpha stage build where all the excitement has already been taken away.

Good luck

 

[kevz612]

Almost choked on my oatmeal. I always wanted a Life Choices alternative because i love innocent girls getting corrupted into sluts

 

[Rexana]

So many girl life games....

 

[Shadowhunter9]

Someone also already mentioned Life Choices. If you want my opinion, something that you could improve from Life Choices, is the way too fast development of corruption (at least for my tastes). I like Life Choices, but I felt like the character was WAY too easy and quick to turn into a complete prostitute. I understand that some developers probably feel pressured to offer their patrons and players some sexy content to play with, but I feel like the gradual journey with the game is a lot more satisfying, instead of having a pre-alpha stage build where all the excitement has already been taken away.

Good luck

From what I've seen, this game takes it even a step further than LC. Pick one of the darker roads and you're essentially already a prostitute. I don't really agree with you on the topic of Life Choices though. I think @BurningSun did a great job with taking out the grindier parts of the classic Russian QSP simulators while still having a corruption process. Also, I think you may be underestimating the amount of work would go into making a slower gradient in an HTML game. That's the reason why most developers don't do it, is my guess

 

[Doruna]

From what I've seen, this game takes it even a step further than LC. Pick one of the darker roads and you're essentially already a prostitute. I don't really agree with you on the topic of Life Choices though. I think @BurningSun did a great job with taking out the grindier parts of the classic Russian QSP simulators while still having a corruption process. Also, I think you may be underestimating the amount of work would go into making a slower gradient in an HTML game. That's the reason why most developers don't do it, is my guess

For sure, it's just a matter of preference and taste.
I really enjoyed LC. I don't know much about other games made on this format, so I can't really comment on that, or the making of an HTML game. Either way, LC, like many other corruption games, advanced a tad bit too fast to my liking, taking some of the suspension out of it. Whether that's due to difficulties in development or something else, I wouldn't know, I'll just have to take someone's word for it, and it doesn't really make a difference either way.

 

[Linger_Dinger]

Generally like these types of games, but there's many "young woman becomes a slut because of life." That ignores all the mature/MILF porn out there. You might consider doing one from the perspective of an older woman where 1) she's divorced and needs to make it on her own in a new city or staying with relatives (opens up incest route with nephews) or 2) she's in an unhappy marriage and wants to explore her sexuality

I really liked the idea of the Milf part, it's quite good.

You can tell me what do you want in the game and I'll do my best to implement the changes you want in the future.

We have seen many games that have kind of the same theme, you have a young pure innocent girl that turns into a full-blown slut because of her surroundings. I would recommend trying to explore into it but not having the player turn into the slut so fast. Put some realism to it, like feelings. Such as having too much sex in the week, can take away the desire of having sex for a while. Or have something like getting STD having unprotected sex which will lead to having your whole rest of the game has to take care of it by spending money on medical expenses. They are a lot of possibilities to explore.

I do one thing before starting on any projects is have a brainstorm and create a flowchart and see what I can do and what it can lead into. Create a flow chart and explore through it.

Good luck with the development and hope you succeed in this project!

 

[GunLinser]

0.1.0 is pretty broken

 

[Banschi]

Mi utterly pointless advise would be :

Make it a Male + Female + trans simulator
There are a bag full of female sim games (some good )
There is not male simulator games (no good ones)
There are a few trans simulators (one or two good ones , rest meh)

Try to make it around Prey (like most do) and Predator (wery feew do)
Example if u get cornered by 2 aggressors , let MC stats handle it ,and not just drop on flor and spread legs.
Stats to use would be Fight expirience/strength if lazy , talk ur way out of it , drop on back and spread legs , and RUN for it.

What i mean to say is more choices , there is newer too many choices

Also i played it and u seem to hawe meny bugs in the game right naw :/
Making it basicaly unplayable.

P.S: Additional useles advise would be , drop corruption requirements to do stuff .Leave it more to player choic not MC.
Punicsment for not meeting certain requirements could be morale inpact . Its better to show ppl what they can do instead of locking it away until u are a complete whore to use stuff/interactions :/

 

[Banschi]

One more thing .
I lookt at ur Patreon and :

Updates at least one every six month with new or updated content (major version).

Are u for real? In that case , just drop it... It shoult be a passion project .This just looks bad. 2 updates per year meh...

 

[Deleted member 451676]

In what world do these girls live where they're being undressed left and right on the street for no reason.

 

[Livididi]

Hey Dev, could you please fix some bugs?
Like replace $maxIntelligenceRand to $mediumIntelligenceRand ?
And set as starting attribute intelligence, charisma and fitness to 1 instead of 0 ? Else the work jobs wont produce money because the code is based on the given attributes and produces a random on top of it.
Otherwise is the game idea nice.
Kind Regards, Lars