- Sep 13, 2017
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This doesn't make any sense:
"They tried to stop and calm me down, but I kept running. My brothers started running after me, trying to keep up. I could hear my oldest brother shouting to run towards the kolkhoz. You saw Sveta a long time ago. Your grandma explains that we had central collective farms called kolkhoz."
Was it supposed to be:
"You see Sveta, a long time ago," your grandma expains, "we had central collective farms called kolkhoz."
"They tried to stop and calm me down, but I kept running. My brothers started running after me, trying to keep up. I could hear my oldest brother shouting to run towards the kolkhoz. You saw Sveta a long time ago. Your grandma explains that we had central collective farms called kolkhoz."
Was it supposed to be:
"You see Sveta, a long time ago," your grandma expains, "we had central collective farms called kolkhoz."