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Joshy92

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I don't find it uncommon that young girls choose an older man, often the reasons are financialy stable, had bad experience with young studs that saw her more as a trophy. Or simple they want their first time with a more experienced guy that give them the best time of their life.
I think it would be hot seeing her with some ugly dude who can give her lots of orgasms.
 
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Damn! Looks intriguing. Going to try it out and letting you guys know.
Edit1: Start of the bat, so the FMC just turned 18 right? The MC and FMC got engaged 3 years ago which puts her at you know what age. Moreover, you also said she is now looking for a job after they went to the same college. How did she get into college and is looking for a job when she just turned 18 recently? You need to fix this age related problem if you want the plot to be accurate. I hope you see this as I do not know who to tag as I do not know which Paola you are.
They were both 15 when they got engaged, and presumably started having sex. This is a legal thing in MANY places, imcluding many states in the US. The age of consent is only 18 in 11 out of 50 states. If one of them was below whatever the age of consent is where they were, this STILL might not matter because most of those states also have "close enough" exceptions of sometimes as much as 4 years. Other places around the world have similar outlooks on sex. Hell, France doesn't even bother quibbling with details. If you're 13+ have at it.

The hard 18+ thing many confuse with the age of consent is the age of adulthood at which one can engage in pornography or purchase it. So any pics, films or other media containing anyone under 18 is considered a sex crime and child pornography. So as long as the MC and FMC are in an appropriate location and didn't film it they're good.

And lots of kids go to college at 18... what's so strange about that?
 
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Pr0GamerJohnny

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I can't figure out how to remove them.
Unfortunately, as a programmer, I am a landslide.
Anyway today I fixed the saves from the next updates A Wife in Venice and Girlfriend will be separated.
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Which program are you using to type the script? If you type it in notepad++, there are a bunch of resources to set it up as a python-renpy setup like

In mine, when you press tab, it automatically produces 4 spaces instead of this - since as others have pointed out, tabs wont be recognized as characters.
npd.jpg
You can brute force change it with a mass replace all expression \t to 4 spaces like this
npd2.jpg
but I'm not sure what effect that will have on the odd shortened tab segments....
 
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They were both 15 when they got engaged, and presumably started having sex. This is a legal thing in MANY places, imcluding many states in the US. The age of consent is only 18 in 11 out of 50 states. If one of them was below whatever the age of consent is where they were, this STILL might not matter because most of those states also have "close enough" exceptions of sometimes as much as 4 years. Other places around the world have similar outlooks on sex. Hell, France doesn't even bother quibbling with details. If you're 13+ have at it.

The hard 18+ thing many confuse with the age of consent is the age of adulthood at which one can engage in pornography or purchase it. So any pics, films or other media containing anyone under 18 is considered a sex crime and child pornography. So as long as the MC and FMC are in an appropriate location and didn't film it they're good.

And lots of kids go to college at 18... what's so strange about that?
I'm guessing you just skipped through and didn't read the dialogue very well.

The MC was 21 and the girlfriend was 15 when they got engaged. That makes the MC an adult and the girlfriend a minor. That's illegal and makes the MC a pedophile.

The game takes place in New York. The age of consent in NY is 17. The girlfriend is two years under that. And to top that off, you don't propose to someone after just the first date. So, they were together a year or two before the MC proposed at least. That means the girlfriend was either 13 or 14, while the MC was 19 or 20, when they first got together. That is still illegal.

But apparently this is being changed in the next update (dev messed up on the calculations), so this is all going to be a moot point when that happens.
 
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Joshy92

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What does everyone think of Robert not caring if he dies?
I can't believe he would talk like that he has a beautiful daughter and wife he should never think like that.
Hopefully I can show him how precious everything is.
 

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I'm guessing you just skipped through and didn't read the dialogue very well.

The MC was 21 and the girlfriend was 15 when they got engaged. That makes the MC an adult and the girlfriend a minor. That's illegal and makes the MC a pedophile.

The game takes place in New York. The age of consent in NY is 17. The girlfriend is two years under that. And to top that off, you don't propose to someone after just the first date. So, they were together a year or two before the MC proposed at least. That means the girlfriend was either 13 or 14, while the MC was 19 or 20, when they first got together. That is still illegal.

But apparently this is being changed in the next update (dev messed up on the calculations), so this is all going to be a moot point when that happens.
Yes, you are right, we messed up the dates of birth.
We have already changed the age of the female character. It was not our intention to be naughty types.
Thank you for pointing that out
 
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The ArcKnight

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Wow, the comments section on this one is wild.

I will say to the developers, if you want to have a harem route, you should completely divorce it from the NTR/Cuck route. Make NTR completely avoidable, not just skippable.
Most guys not looking for cuck/ntr don't even want their character's thinking about that in a positive light.

But having said that, if you want to make a NTR/Cuck game, do that. Just make sure you're upfront about it (That the game is primarily about that) and then no one can complain.

It's all about being upfront and honest about what people should expect. When it comes to sex, very few people want to be surprised in a way they don't like. "kinky twists" need to happen within audience expectation.
 
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luxury1970

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I'm guessing you just skipped through and didn't read the dialogue very well.

The MC was 21 and the girlfriend was 15 when they got engaged. That makes the MC an adult and the girlfriend a minor. That's illegal and makes the MC a pedophile.

The game takes place in New York. The age of consent in NY is 17. The girlfriend is two years under that. And to top that off, you don't propose to someone after just the first date. So, they were together a year or two before the MC proposed at least. That means the girlfriend was either 13 or 14, while the MC was 19 or 20, when they first got together. That is still illegal.

But apparently this is being changed in the next update (dev messed up on the calculations), so this is all going to be a moot point when that happens.
Yes, however you are right we made a mistake. Fortunately we have already changed it.
 
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SpyderArachnid

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You can avoid it of course.
The only thing that MC is touched by is a fantasy he had in a park. But that serves to tie the story together.
It is up to you to decide to carry it on or immediately erase it from your mind.
That's not quite true.

The MC fantasizes about being cucked, and even has a conversation with the girlfriend (several times) about her cucking him. You don't have a choice in that matter.

Even if you choose the first time to not bring it up and forget about it, it keeps coming up over and over again. You have to constantly keep turning it down, and the MC will keep fantasizing about it and having multiple conversations with the girlfriend about being cucked.

So yeah, you can't "immediately erase it from your mind", as it keeps coming up whether you stop it or not.
 

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That's not quite true.

The MC fantasizes about being cucked, and even has a conversation with the girlfriend (several times) about her cucking him. You don't have a choice in that matter.

Even if you choose the first time to not bring it up and forget about it, it keeps coming up over and over again. You have to constantly keep turning it down, and the MC will keep fantasizing about it and having multiple conversations with the girlfriend about being cucked.

So yeah, you can't "immediately erase it from your mind", as it keeps coming up whether you stop it or not.
This.

If you are going to present a choice for NTR, let the player make the choice and then don't bring it up again. Having to be reminded about a girl potentially cheating on you (or you willingly encouraging it) after already saying no is bad.

Maybe look at the script again and make a edit so that if the player says "No' to cucked, the lines in those future dialogues are changed to something else.

Again, if you want to do harem, its probably best to do it as a fully self contained route, not an added on fetish as most of those who enjoy harem will not enjoy NTR. (with few exceptions.)
 

Freedom9555

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Damn I hate play as the female character and choose options for her, that break the inmersion totally for me :(
You are totally right, it breaks that illusion.
It would have been better, if she saw the MC making out with the mother and this would trigger her cheating or NTR behavior.
 

luxury1970

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This.

If you are going to present a choice for NTR, let the player make the choice and then don't bring it up again. Having to be reminded about a girl potentially cheating on you (or you willingly encouraging it) after already saying no is bad.

Maybe look at the script again and make a edit so that if the player says "No' to cucked, the lines in those future dialogues are changed to something else.

Again, if you want to do harem, its probably best to do it as a fully self contained route, not an added on fetish as most of those who enjoy harem will not enjoy NTR. (with few exceptions.)
I also share your opinion but my husband likes both. So what should I do? Divorce ahahah
 

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As I wrote earlier, it was interpreted by us as a hidden but not yet developed thought.
It can happen to any one of us at times to think something...
Can it really happen to any one of us to fantasize about being cuckolded and get hard from it?? Ermm...no, definitely not.

I can see that being annoying even to some ntr fans who aren't into willing cuckolding. In order for the whole hidden cheating thing to work, the dude has to be against it. As it is now, the dude would probably cum in his pants the moment he found out his fiance is getting some dick behind his back...
 
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or luxury1970
Which program are you using to type the script? If you type it in notepad++, there are a bunch of resources to set it up as a python-renpy setup like

In mine, when you press tab, it automatically produces 4 spaces instead of this - since as others have pointed out, tabs wont be recognized as characters.
View attachment 3539297
You can brute force change it with a mass replace all expression \t to 4 spaces like this
View attachment 3539301
but I'm not sure what effect that will have on the odd shortened tab segments....
Hello friend, your help was actually the spaces.
The strange thing that had never happened to me that's why I hadn't paid any attention to it.
However you can remove them directly from Atom.
Doing the transfer from my writing program into Atom created those annoying Tabs.
Thank you very much.
 
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luxury1970

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Can it really happen to any one of us to fantasize about being cuckolded and get hard from it?? Ermm...no, definitely not.

I can see that being annoying even to some ntr fans who aren't into willing cuckolding. In order for the whole hidden cheating thing to work, the dude has to be against it. As it is now, the dude would probably cum in his pants the moment he found out his fiance is getting some dick behind his back...
Yes, you are right, but it was just to bring the story to life. Honestly, we didn't think it would bother so much.
We'll consider whether we can fix it so that we don't offend people who hate NTR so much Also because it's okay to respect everyone's tastes a little bit or at least their own thoughts.
 
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