VN Ren'Py Girlfriend [v0.91] [By Paola]

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luxury1970

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♂Brout&Minou♀ said:
The big problem with this game, apart from the grammatical errors, spelling and the like, is the inconsistency in the dialogue.
For instance:

Katrin to MC: You're sweet, thoughtful, I could fall in love with you, but Brian's a pig, with him it's all about sex.
1/2 hours later...
I'm going to ask Robert for a divorce, and marry Brian... :cautious:

I think a proofreading would be welcome before publishing a release.
Now, as far as the story is concerned, I find the fetishes a bit too idealized, but I can only rely on my own extreme experiences. I mean, crossing the line of certain taboos isn't as trivial and easy as it seems to be in this game. But well, Who am I to tell the Dev what to do?
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We have a dear friend who takes care of proofreading. If there are a few mistakes, it’s no big deal—after all, it’s an adult game, and I’m sure no one minds.
As for the story, it’s not finished yet, so I’d rather not jump to conclusions. You’re absolutely right that, in real life, certain fetishes aren’t so easy to encounter so quickly. However, our goal is to emphasize some situations to make the game more engaging. That’s why we started with an MC fantasy and a conversation between MC and FMC, where it’s hinted that certain topics had already been discussed. This allowed us to tie everything you’ve seen so far together.
Regarding the line you mentioned in your post, I’d like to say that Stefano (my husband) is also thinking ahead to future episodes. As you’ve probably noticed, the dialogue for each path you take is consistent. This means that sometimes there may be small mistakes, or certain choices are deliberate and will make sense later on.
Big hugs to everyone,
Luana
 
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Dessolos

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HugoLivemoreSA said:
so you rather MC to be an cuck more that break up with her
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only a cuck if you play it that way.... you know that is optional.... Besides the idea of the break up made no sense imo. It was like playing 2 separate games from what I understand from the idea and poll. As the MC would of gone to live with his mother and meet and new cast of characters while we would still get the option to play as the FMC. There is to many character as is just didn't make sense imo when you take game deveolopment into account. Yeah could of been an interesting idea with a larger team or something but it just wasn't realistic
 
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Dessolos said:
only a cuck if you play it that way.... you know that is optional.... Besides the idea of the break up made no sense imo. It was like playing 2 separate games from what I understand from the idea and poll. As the MC would of gone to live with his mother and meet and new cast of characters while we would still get the option to play as the FMC. There is to many character as is just didn't make sense imo when you take game deveolopment into account. Yeah could of been an interesting idea with a larger team or something but it just wasn't realistic
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oh okay
 
DIRTY FILTHY Animal

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Dessolos said:
only a cuck if you play it that way.... you know that is optional.... Besides the idea of the break up made no sense imo. It was like playing 2 separate games from what I understand from the idea and poll. As the MC would of gone to live with his mother and meet and new cast of characters while we would still get the option to play as the FMC. There is to many character as is just didn't make sense imo when you take game deveolopment into account. Yeah could of been an interesting idea with a larger team or something but it just wasn't realistic
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Plus, don’t need to breakup with her if she is willingly going to push her mother in our bed and let us swing if you want to. Just don’t like how she gets mad that we’re hanging out with Brian’s wife but she can bang everybody right?
 
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