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the_fluff

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Regarding domination, FMC starts with Emily subjugating FMC, but then we plan to introduce MC as either the dominant or submissive; you will get to choose.

My husband and I have a lot of work to do regarding programming, and we hope to finalize all future paths by next week. Unfortunately, the beginning is always very critical for creators, as it’s necessary to understand what the audience likes and dislikes to move forward and provide you with intense emotions.

If I had left the reins to my husband, he would have surely upset half of the F95 community, hahaha! But don’t worry, I’m here!

A big hug from your Luana.
I don't really like that idea with Emily. In my eyes that's the same as a male character doing it. It should be us subjugating FMC not Emily. I think there should be an option where we're either okay with it or not and can put Emily in her place for daring to fuck with us.
 
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Lordroedor

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I like the game but I don't fully understand how everything connects with my choices. Suddenly I lost my ability to talk with Zaira, apparently, because of my route. But I don't understand why. In these cases it's usually intuitive, there's some intuitive reason why I lost my chances with her. But she keeps flirting, I lost nothing, my character just refuses to engage in conversation for no reason.

I suppose it's because the consequence of that choice would conflict later with something already implemented? I don't know but it was frustrating to receive constantly the "content not available in this route" or the "you didn't have that experience". Why leaving me with the choice then?

I feel like the content looks pretty well made at first but once you scratch the surface this is very, very unfinished. It doesn't feel like a 0.88 version once you start trying stuff. More like 0.3 or something like that.

It feels like it has huge potential... but then again, I thought the same about some of his other works... I'll keep watch but I don't know. The way the developer writes implies that there's a very long path for this novel to completed (he is delaying every arc by choice), and I am afraid the chances of he getting bored and starting something else are very high. I would suggest the developer to be less ambitious. Make a short game, something we can finsih in one or two hours, that is truly well writing and it's exciting, and I think you would grow way faster as an artist and entrepeneur. One great way to start making bucks is to finish stuff.
 
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3.70 star(s) 28 Votes