VN Ren'Py Girlfriend [v0.99] [By Paola]

[Willy1975]

Whoever the developer is for this game, I'm sure he/she/they are here on this forum.

Here are some thoughts:

You really, really need to change the font used. No, seriously. The strength/boldness is way to much, and the outline makes it even worse. The letters literally melt into each other. I'd also suggest you stick to the same color for dialogues. It's a pain to read. Character names can be in different colors though.

I also suggest you implement a dialogue box opacity slider in the preferences to make the scenes easier to read, and to look at.

As I mentioned on page 39 about the translation. Keep it simple and stick to the working formula that other games use when it comes to what characters are thinking or doing, just use a cursive font or quotes. "Your thoughts" when in some different color that you are used to when talking to others, is really confusing.

Please don't take this as a bashing on your game, but rather constructive criticism. You have a very cute looking LI, that's why I decided to play your game.

Good luck

 

[luxury1970]

I forgot who is Ronny again? And if we already have mark living with us and told Katrin about him and mc, what will happen to him? Does he just leave the house and the story for good or just temporary?

That's Ronny.

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Katrin doesn't know Mark at the moment. But I assume she will get to know Ronny.

 

[Joshy92]

That's Ronny.

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Katrin doesn't know Mark at the moment. But I assume she will get to know Ronny.

I can't remember that scene.

 

[luxury1970]

I can't remember that scene.

This scene is in the next episode.

 

[Joshy92]

This scene is in the next episode.

Oh, then no wonder I can't remember it
I'm already getting excited.

Also, here's a hug for two of the nicest devs I talk to on here


I'm looking forward to seeing what stories you come up with as we start the journey to season 2.

 

[MagicMan753]

Oh, yay, look at that probably forced scene with Ronny, just so we can be forced to forgive her(poll), and let's add Katrin to mix cause why not. Really cool, so excited.

Why not just make full Ntr/Nts game at this point, and just scrap the Harem path, cause clearly that path is pointless and gets no love, the devs don't care about it, with how they force scenes like Brian (interpretation is same thing to me) and now looks like Ronny.

 

[Dessolos]

Oh, yay, look at that probably forced scene with Ronny, just so we can be forced to forgive her(poll), and let's add Katrin to mix cause why not. Really cool, so excited.

Why not just make full Ntr/Nts game at this point, and just scrap the Harem path, cause clearly that path is pointless and gets no love, the devs don't care about it, with how they force scenes like Brian (interpretation is same thing to me) and now looks like Ronny.

yeah honestly I was kind of surprised when I found out about the harem it always felt more like a NTR and NTS game to me with a sprinkle of the MC able to have fun on the side but not a harem

 

[MagicMan753]

yeah honestly I was kind of surprised when I found out about the harem it always felt more like a NTR and NTS game to me with a sprinkle of the MC able to have fun on the side but not a harem

Yeah. I get that about not knowing. I personally would be OK if it was never in plans or they said they would scrap it and lean more into swinging, nts, ntr, etc.

But that's not they are doing or did. Then they have the whole Brian whole thing, interpretation or not its not good, Katrin continually sleeping with Brian while we are pursuing her, Mark being brought up even when we haven't met, feels like they are pushing us into something, and now Ronny who will do something, since a poll voted for forgiveness.

If they have no intention of giving fair and equal treatment to the Harem path, either don't include in first place or just scrap it all together. I just want fairness in the paths.

 

[Dessolos]

Yeah. I get that about not knowing. I personally would be OK if it was never in plans or they said they would scrap it and lean more into swinging, nts, ntr, etc.

But that's not they are doing or did. Then they have the whole Brian whole thing, interpretation or not its not good, Katrin continually sleeping with Brian while we are pursuing her, Mark being brought up even when we haven't met, feels like they are pushing us into something, and now Ronny who will do something, since a poll voted for forgiveness.

If they have no intention of giving fair and equal treatment to the Harem path, either don't include in first place or just scrap it all together. I just want fairness in the paths.

yeah man I really hope the Ronny render is from a choice and not forced for a poll idea they had cause that will ruin certain saves for me. I have no problem with Ronny other than he is getting some before his brother, that feels real shitty to me with how much time we have spent with Mustapha in comparison. But out of all the saves I play I would probably only want or let her sleep with Ronny on 2 maybe 3 saves and the rest it would be ruined.

 

[Eleanorduval]

yeah man I really hope the Ronny render is from a choice and not forced for a poll idea they had cause that will ruin certain saves for me. I have no problem with Ronny other than he is getting some before his brother, that feels real shitty to me with how much time we have spent with Mustapha in comparison. But out of all the saves I play I would probably only want or let her sleep with Ronny on 2 maybe 3 saves and the rest it would be ruined.

In general im not fan of polls,it is deviate the plot and ruin them in most case.Anways hope mc harem stay unchanged,don t care of brian and others paths

 

[larsalexanderson]

Is there non-NTR Mustapha content?

 

[sagerock820]

No.

 

[Eleanorduval]

Is there non-NTR Mustapha content?

The non is vanilla sex with the fmc,or a harem with (zaira,sophia,emily,melissa..)

 

[Prokopije]

Hello. Does player have complete freedom to choose who MC and/or his wife fuck?

 

[Nafig]

Hello. Does player have complete freedom to choose who MC and/or his wife fuck?

Hello. Does player have complete freedom to choose who MC and/or his wife fuck?

No. The player does not choose events, they are forced upon them. The player does not control events. The player does not choose characters, they are forced upon them. The player does not choose relationships with characters. If the player tries to reject a character, the game will force those characters upon them again and again. The player does not control relationships with the FMC.

 

[luxury1970]

Hello. Does player have complete freedom to choose who MC and/or his wife fuck?

Hi!

The game offers multiple paths, weaving a story that connects all the characters.
In the first season, we wanted to explore a couple moving in together—a turning point that inevitably brings hidden truths and unspoken fantasies to the surface.

As good old Nafig says, if you're looking for a classic harem where the MC is an alpha male who effortlessly sleeps with every woman he meets, then this game might not be for you—at least not in the first season. We focused on more complex dynamics, with a protagonist facing realistic situations and layered relationships. However, things will shift in the second season, as MC and FMC open a photography studio, leading to new experiences and developments.

My husband and I want to explore various fetishes (all of them skippable), but to do so, we needed to establish a strong foundation by showcasing FMC’s past and the mistakes that made the couple weak and vulnerable in the first season. MC, on the other hand, was written as an ordinary guy with emotions and reactions that feel authentic. In some paths, he’ll explore unusual fantasies, and the game will realistically portray how certain emotions can shape a person.

In the second season, MC's personality will open the door to many fetish scenarios, which I’ll list below without leaving anything out:

• PURE NETORASE – MC gets aroused by watching or knowing that FMC sleeps with other men.
• SHARING – You can experience moments with FMC and other men or women. In some cases, a ladyboy will be involved.
• HAREM – MC will have the chance to meet and seduce multiple women, including married or engaged ones, following the path of an alpha male.
• INCEST – FMC will have a relationship with Mother and Dad.

These paths can intertwine, allowing for a wide variety of experiences and developments.

 

[larsalexanderson]

In some cases, a ladyboy will be involved.

Will MC be able to have sex with her as well?

 

[Joshy92]

Hi!

The game offers multiple paths, weaving a story that connects all the characters.
In the first season, we wanted to explore a couple moving in together—a turning point that inevitably brings hidden truths and unspoken fantasies to the surface.

As good old Nafig says, if you're looking for a classic harem where the MC is an alpha male who effortlessly sleeps with every woman he meets, then this game might not be for you—at least not in the first season. We focused on more complex dynamics, with a protagonist facing realistic situations and layered relationships. However, things will shift in the second season, as MC and FMC open a photography studio, leading to new experiences and developments.

My husband and I want to explore various fetishes (all of them skippable), but to do so, we needed to establish a strong foundation by showcasing FMC’s past and the mistakes that made the couple weak and vulnerable in the first season. MC, on the other hand, was written as an ordinary guy with emotions and reactions that feel authentic. In some paths, he’ll explore unusual fantasies, and the game will realistically portray how certain emotions can shape a person.

In the second season, MC's personality will open the door to many fetish scenarios, which I’ll list below without leaving anything out:

• PURE NETORASE – MC gets aroused by watching or knowing that FMC sleeps with other men.
• SHARING – You can experience moments with FMC and other men or women. In some cases, a ladyboy will be involved.
• HAREM – MC will have the chance to meet and seduce multiple women, including married or engaged ones, following the path of an alpha male.
• INCEST – FMC will have a relationship with Mother and Dad.

These paths can intertwine, allowing for a wide variety of experiences and developments.

It's an excellent idea to do a second season. It can be sort of like a reboot or a trimming of stuff that doesn't work while allowing new and old storylines to get a boost.

A chance to start fresh.

 

[luxury1970]

Will MC be able to have sex with her as well?

Of course there are options.

 

[luxury1970]

It's an excellent idea to do a second season. It can be sort of like a reboot or a trimming of stuff that doesn't work while allowing new and old storylines to get a boost.

A chance to start fresh.

Exactly.