VN Ren'Py Girlfriends In Outer Worlds [v0.2] [Stellarky]

[Chimba]

this needs the Kinetic Novel tag, there is no choice, Mind Control tag, the MC receives a power to manipulate people, and rape tag (that scene is not sleep sex, the character is awake), leaving that aside, dev you should think about opening an account on SS (subcriberstar) the scene with Sara is rape, the MC uses the powers to achieve it (she even wakes up crying during the scene) and Patreon is not very friendly with that type of content.

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Anyways, good luck.

 

[JennaJJ]

... Thx 4 the share ...

 

[Badboll]

this needs the Kinetic Novel tag, there is no choice, Mind Control tag, the MC receives a power to manipulate people, and rape tag (that scene is not sleep sex, the character is awake), leaving that aside, dev you should think about opening an account on SS (subcriberstar) the scene with Sara is rape, the MC uses the powers to achieve it (she even wakes up crying during the scene) and Patreon is not very friendly with that type of content.

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Anyways, good luck.

well regardless of what happens in the scene what patron will look down on the most is how the character looks and acts.
I'm suprised the game was allowed here to be honest. I don't personally care since fiction doesn't bother me no matter the content.
Patron and their payment services care more about fiction than reality so this is where we are.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

Good luck with your game.

 

[user9000]

Dude jumps in with both feet.

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[Nuclear Winter]

Uhh.. she missing some digits here chief


& some autonomy.. I'ma be back with my flamethrower.

 

[Balpheron]

Consider working with negative prompts since you're very likely using stable diffusion. Use them to tag what you do NOT want to have appear in your renders. Such as the girl only have 4 fingers and no, the index finger wouldn't be concealed without the knuckles being visible.

 

[daedilus]

Oh, I realized it! In fact, the left hand was upside down, with the palm facing up. And I fixed it. But I don’t know, the pose seemed correct when I saw it. The left leg could be pulled back, and he could be sitting on top of her, with his arms supporting him to keep from falling.

Either way, I'll take another look to make further corrections. Thanks for the feedback!

I think if the man's left leg went away, and his left hand moved to her left arm or shoulder, it would seem better anatomically.

 

[user9000]

Actually the hand was correct, it just should have been the girl's hand. Not the man's.

 

[Slayerz]

Darn this was starting to get good. Love the reactions of these girls lol

 

[Griffenbeard]

I don't mind AI art, but at least make sure there aren't any blaringly obvious mistakes. Even in the curated pictures on display hands are either completely fucked up, have too many fingers, or too few fingers. One of them even has an entire addtional arm, or maybe it's the woman who just has a man arm.

 

[DarkLink]

A decent start, I like the general concept and the "ice cream" scene, hope you continue to improve the AI art and flesh out the story with choices at some point so it's an actual VN and not just kinetic. Also, I liked that you added sound, but try to not overuse things like the "slap" SFX.