VN Ren'Py Give Me a Sun [v7.0] [Namco15]

[Namco15]

Give me a sun... Updates

Nashira flashback still has a couple of scenes to finish... this covers "Celeste's" happiest years in the city ... her childhood home and her closest circle of people... more clues to one of the main plots of the story...

This will be the last long update for a while as the flashback of "The Princess" will come in parts... I hope to make shorter updates in time.

Thank you all for your patience : )

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You should reply more often, as we want more hot pics! haha

 

[JeepersCeepers]

Nice Game.

 

[Edok2525]

Requested by, Namco15


I'm the cat

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Avaron1974

very happy cat

 

[ben akeba]

when i saw the statue of clare and theresa in the screenshot i wanted to play, but the review speak of naruto and the general quality seem subpar at best :/ any reason to play or avoid ?

 

[Namco15]

speak of naruto

there are more historical, science and music references, but it seems that naruto is more famous.

it's a "coincidence" that the bad reviews only mention naruto when in that scene there is a reference to Zoolander too...
shit naruto is not even mentioned... you have to know about the series to understand those couple of lines...



Zoolander

avoid

don't waste your time.


random pic...

 

[Avaron1974]

reason to play or avoid ?

People that enjoy it will tell you to play while those that don't will tell you to avoid.

When it comes to any sort of entertainment only you know what you like so that you'll have to decide for yourself.

 

[rafa30]

I like

 

[Blueshadow14]

How do you gonna get SUN when both side have MUFF.... CURIOUS

 

[muschi26]

How do you gonna get SUN when both side have MUFF.... CURIOUS

Search for “science babies” on your hentai site of choice.

 

[Thereisnofuture]

An honest to God lesbian harem game?. My bastard eyes deceive me do they not?.

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

An honest to God lesbian harem game?. My bastard eyes deceive me do they not?.

Wipe your contacts and try again

 

[Dragon59]

How do you gonna get SUN when both side have MUFF.... CURIOUS

Well, you may have noticed that it said SUN, not SON. That homophone really only exists in English, as far as I've seen.

 

[ike314]

"La puta madre, estan sacando fotocopias"

As your resident mexibro, I find this funny. This translates to something like "Holy fucking shit, they are printing document copies" not 100 percent accurate but it kinda sends the same vibe. The swear part literally translates to "The whore mother" or "The whore nun"

 

[ike314]

"La puta madre, estan sacando fotocopias"

As your resident mexibro, I find this funny. This translates to something like "Holy fucking shit, they are printing document copies" not 100 percent accurate but it kinda sends the same vibe.

Here's what the other signs say:

"Decidite, la concha de tu madre" / "Just pick something, fucking shit" (But in an Argentinian accent. The swear literally translate to "Your mother's pussy")
"No se fia" / "We don't offer credit" or "You can't pay another day" (I'm not sure how to translate this, the idea is you don't have money so you ask if you can pay another time but still get the good of service)
"Hoy no se fia" / "Today we don't offer credit"

 

[Maviarab]

Finally got arond to this. I have no idea where this heading, sure I'm missing a lot of references...but love it all the same. his should be far more popular.

 

[Avaron1974]

Finally got arond to this. I have no idea where this heading, sure I'm missing a lot of references...but love it all the same. his should be far more popular.

Some people aren't big on flashbacks and are waiting for the main story to carry on.

As much as i'm loving the flashback, cos I love the game ... which is kinda obvious considering the big pic in my sig but NAm did leave the main story on kind of a cliffhanger so I wanna know what happens next.

Regardless, i'm patient and loving what I get but I still wanna know whats gonna happen in the story.

Also cliffhangers make me sad cos I have to wait for them to get resolved.

 

[Maviarab]

Some people aren't big on flashbacks and are waiting for the main story to carry on.

As much as i'm loving the flashback, cos I love the game ... which is kinda obvious considering the big pic in my sig but NAm did leave the main story on kind of a cliffhanger so I wanna know what happens next.

Regardless, i'm patient and loving what I get but I still wanna know whats gonna happen in the story.

Also cliffhangers make me sad cos I have to wait for them to get resolved.

Hey you! Yeah I get that...story seemed to be going...somewhere...then bam....like..wtf...heh. Interesting though and will certainly be sticking with it.

 

[turbojoe]

Some people aren't big on flashbacks and are waiting for the main story to carry on.

As much as i'm loving the flashback, cos I love the game ... which is kinda obvious considering the big pic in my sig but NAm did leave the main story on kind of a cliffhanger so I wanna know what happens next.

Regardless, i'm patient and loving what I get but I still wanna know whats gonna happen in the story.

Also cliffhangers make me sad cos I have to wait for them to get resolved.

Exactly what I´m thinking about this game

I like it, but somewhere got lost belonging the main story.
I´m still waiting what happens to Celeste after her arm was chopped off ............

 

[MOAR Cowbell]

All I know is after the flashback's have finished, I for one can't wait to see the redhead twins again.

 

[Dehlaz]

I really like the idea of a polyamorous lesbian harem-ish game. And the art is very nice. The one sex scene that's there is very good imo. But I do have some criticism: the pacing is, well, excruciating. These characters seem to talk in circles, doing lots of name-dropping and exposition that I know I'm not gonna remember by the next time the game updates. Part of this is setting the story and telling it from flashbacks within a flashback, which is a stylistic choice and personal taste, just definitely not something I would've chosen.

It gets better in the later part with "Megumin". I like her arc. But most of the stuff that came before that really dragged, and even it isn't as tight as I think it could've been. And I'm sympathetic, it's hard as a writer to know when to cut stuff. Small projects like this don't have editors after all. But maybe, if I could offer some constructive feedback (and I'm trying to be succinct and polite here), maybe let the story progress at a bit more of a brisk pace. I like character dialogue, and I like it when characters develop through how they interact with others, but I'd try to make it more snappy. To give an example, the early scene where the character gets their arm chopped off felt like it went on forever.

Still, there's enough good in here that I'm interested in following. I just hope that it develops in the direction of the later scenes and the early rough spots are behind us.