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I bet Jane will be riding Farida's pussy until she decides to become a bottom for her instead of Iaabella. 
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this update was great. As a not fan of wrestling it was fun to read all the behind the scene stuff about stuff that is part of the show in Slater's scene. Managing to make a game about wrestling interesting to someone who is not into wrestling is just showing how great the writing is.
On the subject of Jane's body change. My only criticism for the game is that I would have liked to read a bit more about her diet. You can't work to get such a body without controlling your intake. I lied, I have some others but I am not sure they could have been avoided. I can't see anyone, man or woman, growing such muscle mass in only two months even by controlling your diet without using other kind of supplements. I know that it is a game and you need some strong visual change to mark the difference that would otherwise not necessarily be visible without having a side by side comparaison. Anyways I am happy that I don't feel that the underlying skeleton has changed neither did her face making her still feel like the same person. All in all the changes feel like an athlete pushing herself, albeit, for me, with the help of injections sadly. I would say that it feel that the change was a success.
To those wanting her to go back in look to her previous one, I would only say that if Delinquent want to keep some of the setting more realistic that kind of look is unsustainable for a long time unless you make it your routine. For example The Rock has the body he has because of the work he puts into it every day. I don't see Jane sustaining that body long term like Farida is since the two characters mindset differs a lot. I personally see Jane having a body that sits between her previous body and the one she has now and bulking up like she did for her match with Carmen when she does her prep work to enter the ring.
On the subject of Jane's body change. My only criticism for the game is that I would have liked to read a bit more about her diet. You can't work to get such a body without controlling your intake. I lied, I have some others but I am not sure they could have been avoided. I can't see anyone, man or woman, growing such muscle mass in only two months even by controlling your diet without using other kind of supplements. I know that it is a game and you need some strong visual change to mark the difference that would otherwise not necessarily be visible without having a side by side comparaison. Anyways I am happy that I don't feel that the underlying skeleton has changed neither did her face making her still feel like the same person. All in all the changes feel like an athlete pushing herself, albeit, for me, with the help of injections sadly. I would say that it feel that the change was a success.
To those wanting her to go back in look to her previous one, I would only say that if Delinquent want to keep some of the setting more realistic that kind of look is unsustainable for a long time unless you make it your routine. For example The Rock has the body he has because of the work he puts into it every day. I don't see Jane sustaining that body long term like Farida is since the two characters mindset differs a lot. I personally see Jane having a body that sits between her previous body and the one she has now and bulking up like she did for her match with Carmen when she does her prep work to enter the ring.
I could easily see that happening. This update we got quite a bit of backstory for Farida. All she ever has known is oppression and domination. I could see Jane beating her and freeing her from that oppression that is now in her head at the same time. By beating her Jane would take Isabela's place in Farida's mind as top dog. Earning that respect would allow Jane to show Farida an other way of living. Now I could also see Farida running back to Isabela since that kind of oppression is all she ever knew and sometime something new can be scarier than the thing you know even if it is better. Hé, human mind.I bet Jane will be riding Farida's pussy until she decides to become a bottom for her instead of Isabella.
I think her body is fine its the hair that messes it up. Hopefully she was just too focused on training to care about her hair.
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Oh i completly forgot to mention the tittle drop when Jane was watching Slater fighting Cazador, such a nice little detail.
Jane bulked up a lot for her body frame to fight Farida. I agree that it would be dificult to keep that for long without a very rigid regime of training and alimentation. But keep going back and forth between this body and a middle ground in a short span of time because of matches (similar to Carmen) wouldn't be very healthy for her body. But then considering where the story is going those matches may not be happening for long.
From the way i see Farida seems to have been groomed by Isabella, considering the way the sadistic woman talks about how Farida used to be. So yeah maybe she will have a hard time getting free of her shackles.
I love the game it is different thought they would be more choices during the match but over all it is good. hoping they add different matches to it like tag team or a 2 on 1 type match.
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Got around to go through the VN yesterday. Thanks for the hard work DelinquentProductions !
I liked the update. I thought there was going to be an arc where MC could choose to be a more submissive or a dominant personality after this. I like this better. It feels more in-tune with what we have seen in MC till now.
I feel - and this is my opinion, Farida hasn't has much sex yet or maybe at all. She is tall and masculine and I don't assume all the rich perverts are lining up to fuck her. And MC beating her and give her that thrashing is going to finally unlock that in her. She is driven by fear and strength - inner and outer is to combat that. I feel MC gets to break that next match - she already is acknowledged by Farida by breaking her arm, so I feel there might be some fight-time redemptive arc a la deku vs todoroki.
I am not at all worried about Isabella. Why? Because she is a bully - a messed up in the head bully. She might have under handed tactics up her sleeves but not much. I reckon having blackmail over the other girls or bringing in the paralyzed girl to make MC lose her mojo would be more her style. But in-ring? Nothing more than some Dominatrix action. She has some support that I know so MC might have to use some other ways to beat her. IDK it's all guesswork anyways.
I Love your work dev. One of the few VN's that I look forward to play. Shame I can't afford to pay you.
I liked the update. I thought there was going to be an arc where MC could choose to be a more submissive or a dominant personality after this. I like this better. It feels more in-tune with what we have seen in MC till now.
I feel - and this is my opinion, Farida hasn't has much sex yet or maybe at all. She is tall and masculine and I don't assume all the rich perverts are lining up to fuck her. And MC beating her and give her that thrashing is going to finally unlock that in her. She is driven by fear and strength - inner and outer is to combat that. I feel MC gets to break that next match - she already is acknowledged by Farida by breaking her arm, so I feel there might be some fight-time redemptive arc a la deku vs todoroki.
I am not at all worried about Isabella. Why? Because she is a bully - a messed up in the head bully. She might have under handed tactics up her sleeves but not much. I reckon having blackmail over the other girls or bringing in the paralyzed girl to make MC lose her mojo would be more her style. But in-ring? Nothing more than some Dominatrix action. She has some support that I know so MC might have to use some other ways to beat her. IDK it's all guesswork anyways.
I Love your work dev. One of the few VN's that I look forward to play. Shame I can't afford to pay you.
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Almost all LI are avoidable. I personally tried to get them all despite some being less interesting to me. I should sue Pokémon for having gifted be bad habits. The males certainly are. You don't get to choose to be a top or bottom with the different LI I can say there is definitely one futa you dominate throughout and an other where the roles switch at some point. Also there are way less scenes with males than the others so you wont feel like you are missing much. I encourage you to try it. I found it interesting even when I find normal wrestling uninteresting as a media.
males are rare and 100% avoidable, usually there are multiple options and at least one is not a male, so you're not losing on a scene
nah im not downloading a whole separate program to play a game that already has a mac version
DelinquentProductions
When is the final version planned for? I'm not asking about the next release, just the final version, or eventually a complete season. Is it a matter of half a year, a year or years?
How many chapters/acts/episodes are planned in total? What's the current percentage of completion? Are we halfway there or is this just the beginning?
Is there a long-term roadmap? If not, maybe you could consider creating one on Trello or similar site?
When is the final version planned for? I'm not asking about the next release, just the final version, or eventually a complete season. Is it a matter of half a year, a year or years?
How many chapters/acts/episodes are planned in total? What's the current percentage of completion? Are we halfway there or is this just the beginning?
Is there a long-term roadmap? If not, maybe you could consider creating one on Trello or similar site?
the story has been quite straighforward so far, each chapter leading to a match
i'd be very surprised if there were more than 2 chapters left, considering there's only farida and isabella left
Nine parts currently planned, that may turn into ten as we get closer to it depending on what I'm trying to fit in. So far each part has taken me four or five months and I've just started part seven, so at least a year or so until the end.
When I hit that point I want to move on to a new game, but I might end up polishing up earlier parts or adding bonus matches before then. It will just depend on how eager I am to move on at that point, and how much people are interested.
I want to keep making games forever if possible, I've really fallen in love with it. It's difficult to plan super far ahead though since it currently doesn't pay my bills, there's only so much time in the day, and life has a way of throwing curve balls.
Really liked last update, Carmen is just the best character in the story, I want more of her. Would like for her and Jane to watch Carmen fight against Farida in preparation for Jane rematch. (I just really want another sexy fight without MC, the first one was too long ago). Or just any scenes with Carmen/Harper/Farida/Cindy (if I remember pink hair girl name correctly) with Jane just watching or not even present at all.
I like new muscles on Jane but hair is too strange for me, older variant was more enjoyable.
I like new muscles on Jane but hair is too strange for me, older variant was more enjoyable.
Quickly becoming one of the top futa games around.
I like Jane's new ring gear, but liked her old physique/hair more. But it's not a big deal.
I like Jane's new ring gear, but liked her old physique/hair more. But it's not a big deal.
Poor Jane, one of the smallest "weapon" in the game, even though she's the MC, while the DEV was very generous with Carmen. Cruel world we living here.
I like the new muscles on Jane, she looks more badass like that, the only thing that actualy anoys me is the dick size, sorry guys, but thats how i feel, is just that my dominant side is too big, and in my mind if the game have Futa/Trans protagonist, she's the one that has to have a monster on her pants and conquer the world. Don't pay atention to me though, that's just me.
Can't say that i like the new hair, the old one, while not being perfect, gave Jane her own personality, and if you change that, it better be for perfection, and was not what happened here. Hope the DEV changes that in the future.
Loving the game so far, besides my own tastes.
I like the new muscles on Jane, she looks more badass like that, the only thing that actualy anoys me is the dick size, sorry guys, but thats how i feel, is just that my dominant side is too big, and in my mind if the game have Futa/Trans protagonist, she's the one that has to have a monster on her pants and conquer the world. Don't pay atention to me though, that's just me.
Can't say that i like the new hair, the old one, while not being perfect, gave Jane her own personality, and if you change that, it better be for perfection, and was not what happened here. Hope the DEV changes that in the future.
Loving the game so far, besides my own tastes.
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DelinquentProductions While playing the game I noticed that Farida was excited for this match since MC broke her wrist(arm?) and she wanted payback and has had to grow up through a rough childhood/early adulthood.
Are the abuses and trauma from her early years the reason for her sadistic personality or is it just a facade to hide the scared Farida in her heart who is still vulnerable from those abuses? Or am I just reading too much into it and she's just competitive?
Will we see a change in her heart after MC wins? Does MC win?
Also, is Farida natty? Is she a Virgin?!
Sorry, asking too many questions - I'll shut up now.
Are the abuses and trauma from her early years the reason for her sadistic personality or is it just a facade to hide the scared Farida in her heart who is still vulnerable from those abuses? Or am I just reading too much into it and she's just competitive?
Will we see a change in her heart after MC wins? Does MC win?
Also, is Farida natty? Is she a Virgin?!
Sorry, asking too many questions - I'll shut up now.