NeoStarr

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man either this game has a shit ton of bugs or only some certain paths work, if i choose corruption its like im skipping scenes and story. Like one second im choosing the "wrong" path for asami and boom she friends with the whole family and playing video games.. i didnt even took her to my house or introduce them to the family. And apparently there are multiple paths for the mother but i have "chosen" the love one.. and even if i introduce as a lover to her boss he still addresses me as her son.. smh this game is confusing
It's not clear but the game is extremely linear. You have to do everything in order as it opens up, and if that's not meant to be the case that's how it's been functioning so then yea it's bugged. Though with how it's written I just think it's linear
 

TheDennyGuy

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Feb 2, 2022
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There's no mental gymnastics needed to see the NTR bait, it's clearly there unless you're willingly ignoring it. You can take it as making fun of NTR fans but it's there. One of the main antagonists is literally named Netoru and is a walking NTR trope. The other main antagonist has an entire LI's route dedicated to him almost but not quite cucking the MC. Ofc, none of it has actually happened, but the threat of NTR has been a prominent element or just straight up the main plot of the story for almost every update for a while now
And the Dev has stated it won't happen, If people are so frail a couple naming jokes is enough to send them into a frenzy then they're the problem not the game. It's not "bait" it's a joke poking fun at a trope.
 

mememaster

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And the Dev has stated it won't happen, If people are so frail a couple naming jokes is enough to send them into a frenzy then they're the problem not the game. It's not "bait" it's a joke poking fun at a trope.
I mean I agree with you but I also think the joke just stops being funny after being overused so much. There's also basically no narrative tension for the same reason, which is definitely a problem with the game's writing.
 

TheDennyGuy

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I mean I agree with you but I also think the joke just stops being funny after being overused so much. There's also basically no narrative tension for the same reason, which is definitely a problem with the game's writing.
Yeah I agree with that assessment, It does get over-used later on. I think that just like me, the dev hates people who hate NTR with such a burning passion they throw a fit over every human male that isn't the MC talking to the heroine, so and might have let their hate compromise their writing with some of the plot developments.
 
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Ghotty

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Jan 8, 2018
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Uh.. is this broken? I apparently hit the end of main story like 20 minutes into gameplay? and it seems its really easy to get stuck on routes without knowing what route you're on. This desperately needs an updated walkthrough.
 

angel287

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May 31, 2023
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Uh.. is this broken? I apparently hit the end of main story like 20 minutes into gameplay? and it seems its really easy to get stuck on routes without knowing what route you're on. This desperately needs an updated walkthrough.
You probably didn't hit the end of the main story, you completed the initial set of quests. Check the other character trackers and progress wherever you can until more content opens up.

There's a setting you can turn on that shows when your choices affect routes. There's only a handful that do this. The rest of the game is pretty linear. If you join the creator's discord and check the pinned posts of "questions/wiki" channel you will find everything you need.
 
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Yeah I agree with that assessment, It does get over-used later on. I think that just like me, the dev hates people who hate NTR with such a burning passion they throw a fit over every human male that isn't the MC talking to the heroine, so and might have let their hate compromise their writing with some of the plot developments.
It feels like they didn't really have a start to finish outline for the plot, or at least threw the plans out the window as the development progressed. Saving a woman from getting brainwashed/blackmailed and raped is pretty high stakes and it just seems like they ran out of steam after literally "chapter" 2. It's pretty clear that there will be no NTR scenes, maybe not even anyone getting seriously injured or killed. Every update teases a cliffhanger for something bad to happen but it's just thrown out the window instantly. It's just bad writing, not suited for a work like this, it's not a sitcom.

I remember playing the intro to this game and it the game literally says some shit like: "I'm a loser, my sister was found raped to death in a river and my mom killed herself, this other lady was trafficed and killed herself too" Where did that mood go? I am all here for MC pulling it off but just the constant NTR tease and death threats fall moot if none of the antagonists seem able to do anything. Maybe they need to add those parts in as flashbacks to drive home the point a little bit, or maybe if you don't play it correctly the things happen again.
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Talking about Antagonists. Minato is a huge cuck at this point, having threatened the death of at least 4 people by now and nothing substantial has happened. Next update MC steals his sister and gives her the cock treatment to cure her depression. Meanwhile Mr.IRUNTHEMOBINTOWNANDTRAFFICWOMEN hasn't even revealed any sort of motivation to be involved with the story or the MC at all. The only person that was on the hit list was Nerdman due to sniffing a little hard but even that guy never got hurt in any way shape or form.

Feels like the writer/writers wanted to really ham it up and just made things wierd, instead of sticking to a well executed but nothing new type of story. The art is carrying this project so hard.
 

Ghotty

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Jan 8, 2018
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Thank you for the guy who mentioned the setting to show routes, that is helpful. It turns out, the popup that specifically says you can switch between routes is dead wrong, the game is entirely linear. Not that I'm complaining, but maybe don't put up a popup that's wrong? Also, fucking mother of ntrbaiting. The entire story is written like an NTR game, but its not? And this isn't me complaining about NTR, this is me complaining about getting fucking baited with the prospect with no payoff. That's just... an odd decision. Like one of those really well-made games that only have tickling. Just why?

Finished it. I don't think I've played a story more tonally fucked than this one.
 
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jocoyo

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May 9, 2018
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Sad that we can't creampie noriko yet, no bust animation
I'm not sure why the devs didn't animate a cum scene at all. With all the other non-montage scenes, MC at least finishes either inside or outside, so why couldn't they animate that with the Noriko scenes?
 

HydratedMan

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Story got really confused this update and some scenes seens kinda missing, like some sex scenes with the mom and the sister blowjob...
 

Serw23

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It feels like they didn't really have a start to finish outline for the plot, or at least threw the plans out the window as the development progressed. Saving a woman from getting brainwashed/blackmailed and raped is pretty high stakes and it just seems like they ran out of steam after literally "chapter" 2. It's pretty clear that there will be no NTR scenes, maybe not even anyone getting seriously injured or killed. Every update teases a cliffhanger for something bad to happen but it's just thrown out the window instantly. It's just bad writing, not suited for a work like this, it's not a sitcom.

I remember playing the intro to this game and it the game literally says some shit like: "I'm a loser, my sister was found raped to death in a river and my mom killed herself, this other lady was trafficed and killed herself too" Where did that mood go? I am all here for MC pulling it off but just the constant NTR tease and death threats fall moot if none of the antagonists seem able to do anything. Maybe they need to add those parts in as flashbacks to drive home the point a little bit, or maybe if you don't play it correctly the things happen again.
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Talking about Antagonists. Minato is a huge cuck at this point, having threatened the death of at least 4 people by now and nothing substantial has happened. Next update MC steals his sister and gives her the cock treatment to cure her depression. Meanwhile Mr.IRUNTHEMOBINTOWNANDTRAFFICWOMEN hasn't even revealed any sort of motivation to be involved with the story or the MC at all. The only person that was on the hit list was Nerdman due to sniffing a little hard but even that guy never got hurt in any way shape or form.

Feels like the writer/writers wanted to really ham it up and just made things wierd, instead of sticking to a well executed but nothing new type of story. The art is carrying this project so hard.
I agree with you. At the very least, it would be possible to make an entire alternative storyline. For example - A STRUGGLE WITH SIN. There, the only punishment for failure was just NTR. And I think this is the right decision, because it motivates the player not to make mistakes and make the right decisions.

After all, how much content could have been made and added more non-linearity!

But apparently the developers have their own vision, which they are not going to change, because it is written in the Discord of the developers:

**NOT PLANNED**
Yaoi, Ntr, Loli, futa, femboy, rape, **Incest**

And there is not enough anal. We need more of it!) Asuka and Sakuya also have no scenes.
 

Jumbo

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Feb 2, 2017
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Like always great art and story is just simply bad...
Writer can set-up quite interesting plot points but totally fumbles it at execution.
I dislike just how randomly and out of place Noriko sex happens also because of no rape rule maledom route doesn't really fell like maledom but her trying to seduce you into fucking her lol.
Is the dev the one who actually writing the story or does he actually pay someone for writing this?

Also like you guys mention earlier in the thread Yasuka route has high stakes really early on that's why any hint of NTR and danger just doesn't matter.
Sadly Maccumba a based character is a HUGE problem in the story because he can solve anything for MC and most likely is going to be written off(killed/going on a trip/etc).
 
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