Geez you guys are speedy to shit on the game rly. As everyone is entitled to their opinion, I must say that you should go easier on this subject.
It's only a Hentai game. Does it contain some inconsistency from time to time? Yeah. But saying that writing is just bad is not fair. Each girl is different, it's not Harem Hotel [I like this game TBH] - let's fuck everyone - story. If the game dev makes more writings - so more reading - then you will call this game reading simulator xD. If there were less text - then you would be angry because it's an "image clicker". If you have to click every day on the dumbbells to get stronger and boost statistics, then you would be unhappy with grinding.
Not earning money - the same problem - if you had to do that every day in the game you would be unhappy about it as grinding is simply a bad game mechanic. Asami creampie and pill - well a lot of girls take pills before having sex because they have hormonal problems. Some smaller inconsistency - well it happens as the game evolves. You should write to the developer to put it on his "todo - final release list".
The game contains many choices that matter—even if only for a single story—and it's great. Many characters are written in a great manner—Makumb FTW. Natsume is like a double agent. The Yandere, Tsundere, and Mother figures - are all archetypes. I love it.
It follows the stupid, but lovely convention of "everyone had bad lives I have to change it". It's boring and stupid like there was no happy ending for anyone before MC was reincarnated - but come on! This is a fantasy hentai game!
- "It's only a hentai game" every game is just a game. I don't consider this game worse or better than any other game, just because it's adult oriented, and I treat it just as any other game.
- "Does it contain some inconsistency from time to time? Yeah. But saying that writing is just bad is not fair." It's not that it only has a few small inconsistencies, there are a lot of them, and they're pretty big, enough to ruin the experience from the game or at least make ask yourself "what? why? how?". I'm not just shitting or hating the game, if I couldn't care less, I wouldn't have posted at all, but since I care about the game (and actually liked it, and probably will continue to read it, despite everything) - I left the comment with criticism. The game itself is nice, especially the art, as I've said in my original post, but writing is weak, let's be honest. Moreover, it's dev's first game, so every comment should be useful, even if it's constructive criticism. If people would just say "cool, nice game" - dev won't be able to fix his mistakes.
- "If the game dev makes more writings - so more reading - then you will call this game reading simulator xD" Ackshually it's called a visual novel

And I don't think that it's a bad thing (reading is not bad

), I mean, a lot of great games are "reading simulator". The same goes for other things, it's common mechanics for dating sim games.