Others - Goodbye Eternity [v0.10.3] [RNGeusEX]

Very nice game. Good plot, interesting characters, with a lot of room for improvement. Sex scenes are hot and very fluid. Can´t wait for new updates.

Only thing I don´t like is there are not so much to do in the main story, Dojo place, for example, is quite useless yet.

It has one of the best art and designs I've ever seen, I'll rate it so high even though it's lacking in content although it has a lot of potential
-art: 9/10 realistically proportioned bodies and beautiful use of color in locations
-story: 7/10 pretty simple, they need money
characters: 8/10 normal but well built although they are under development
-+18: 9/10 excellent scenes with animation and good scenes, more development is needed and the possibility of varying them but otherwise very good

Stunningly beautiful artwork, very sexy animations. I cannot wait for this game to be completed and more stuff to be added. I'm not normally a fan of japanese hentai-style games, but this one is a knockout!

One of the best games in this page in my opinion.

Whenever i find a game like this i always wonder the same thing: "How comes i didnt find this game earlier?!"

The premise is not new at all, i mean this kind of story has been seen in a lot of animes/manga, but the female characters are so freaking cute, the writting in the game is so fun and well done, and also the main character is a cool guy, very easy to like.

At the moment i am loving it and i wish the programmer best of luck.

One of the BEST porn games I've ever played animations were smooth and were pleasing to the eyes, the story and multiple choices were amazing and this game has some most likable and unlikable side characters in any porn game I've ever played and I wish I could I could give a higher rating to this game

It's... fine? Honestly besides the fantastic artwork, there's not a ton of merit to this one.

The writing is by far the weakest thing about the game. It's just a generic story about a guy dying and going back in time to fix his mistakes. All the characters are your standard tropes barring maybe Macumba and they're all pretty one-note. They each have a problem and MC has to fix it because apparently women can't ever fix their own problems and make the worst decisions. Obviously that isn't what the dev intended but when MC has to do EVERYTHING for them, lest they become whores or commit suicide, it... gets a little weird honestly.

It could've been a lot better if some person actually showed initiative to better their situation and helped out MC for reasons other than one time (which was a Yandere plot device). Maybe have a lesson that MC opening up to others allows him to actually be at his best to help others while being good for his own well-being? I mean part of the reason everything went to shit in his original life is because he just kept to himself all the time so it fits and it would also make the girls actually feel like they care about MC and aren't just completely useless.

If the girls feeling like one-dimensional excuses to make a porn game wasn't enough, every male character in the game besides Macumba is a complete piece of shit. It's... very weird seeing this because the dev obviously takes great care to adhere to Japanese culture but they're almost never this outwardly aggressive and scummy. It's not even explained why they're like this either, which makes the whole experience feel even more hollow. Give me a reason why they act like this. Make them at least redeemable in ONE way. Give the characters in general at least a little charm or appeal as characters. Give Yasuka at least one unappealing trait to make her feel like a person besides "doting milf with anime mom hair". Give Noriko some good qualities so she isn't just "bitchy abusive tsundere". Give Asami some trait other than "delicious brown tomboy with tanlines". Christ, even fan-favorite Macumba is too one-note.

The simple act of making the characters actually seem like people rather than cardboard cutouts would help IMMENSELY. Give me a reason to care about them. Let me get close to them and spend meaningful time with them. The game desperately needs more fluff scenes like playing games and chilling with Asami.

Hollow is actually the perfect way to describe this game. It has a beautiful surface in almost every way. Art is top tier, music is good, UI is nice, but at the end of the day, the meat of any Visual Novel is its writing. Yet, there's no meat here. There's no interesting characters, no intriguing plot, nor even a real lesson besides "take control of your life".

As a first draft this would've been understandable, but that's not what this is. The characters need heavy revision because they're all just cardboard cutouts to make MC look good or have sex with. It really is a shame that the writing can't keep up with the quality of every other aspect of the game.

If the dev actually manages to make the girls and MC more compelling going forward, I wouldn't be opposed to giving this four or even five stars. I actually like the game and am a sucker for a lot of the characters *cough*asamiandyasuka*cough*. It's just that I can't really care for them past "wow they're fucking hot and I really like their character archetypes", which doesn't really fly for this game because it's obvious you're supposed to care for the girls when all the focus is on them and their troubles.

Genuinely sad I couldn't give this a higher star rating. There's a lot of potential here still, it's just untapped. Keep this one on your radar.

Gameplay itself felt like pure filler between scenes. I'd rather if it were more back-to-back. Otherwise, the art is great and I like the characters. Clicking around everywhere is a bit annoying, and some scenes are a bit disappointing. I do miss old Natsume and Chiaki, especially now that Steam's out.

Such a shame...

Art is over the top. You can feel the hard work dev is putting in.

Story is anxiety fest. But in the end everything is a nothing burger.

MC is a spineless loser whom is turning his life around. But the progress has been so fucking slow, it kills your motivation to continue.

Nearly every character is a piece of shit. Some change their ways. Some keep being an eye sore.

Sandbox elements aren't a turnoff but there is not much sand here, YET.
So i would take my time before playing this again. Maybe nearing its end idk.

Story is all over the place. Shit happens sometimes so fast, with no explaination. And sometimes you expect something to happen but nothing changes.

Its been a while but the game is still on its early stage, so it makes you wander around aimlessly. It gets boring quite fast.

But lets see how this journey ends. Maybe next year.

Honestly this is a really solid package and well worth the time and admission price if you get it through Patreon. Good art, good writing, decent branching paths and pretty good characters (Macumba being obviously the best one) hell, even the MC has some personality going for him which is something really rare in hentai VNs. My only real criticisms would be that:

1.- The placements of the secret stashes are kinda arbitrary and nonsensical sometimes so trying to get them all quickly turns into you frustratingly clicking every pixel on your screen.
2.- The whole stats system is completely useless and honestly feels like wasted potential for some fallout-esque skill checks on dialogue and routes which would fit perfectly into this whole "you got one try so make the most of it" feel that the game is going for.
3.- There's no incentive to keep playing even a minute after you complete the main story (which, again, is pretty linear despite what the game tells you) money is completely useless with no shops or things like that to be seen, no unlockable scenes or even dialogue after the credits roll and even the cheats that you unlock after getting all the stashes feel pretty underwhelming.
4.- Gameplay gets a bit repetitive after a while, I know it's a VN but if you're gonna put some days in between story sections where you only go to work and skip the rest of the day (which I understand is done for the sake of pacing) I think it wouldn't hurt to add a bit of something there, I don't ask for any mini games or such since I'm well aware of the limitations of renpy as an engine but maybe some dialogue or little inconsequential scenes in the restaurant or with other characters in other places, just something that will keep monotony at bay.

But besides my somewhat petty grievances I think this game is good, specially considering it still is on it's v0.6 release and it's pretty hefty in terms of content for the first and second time around so I'm really excited to see the direction it goes next (specially looking forward to Natsume's and Chiaki's routes) so, kudos to you dev!

story is good. characters are good. different paths are good. But the most good thing is drawings. Its so warm and hot at the same time! My eyes feel joy, as well as my 3rd eye (not joking). Music is good. Played it on android and pc, no problems anywhere, no buggs. I just wish to have more to play sooner!

This game is amazing, hands down one of the best. It's not perfect, but it's close.

Pros:
-Arts.
-Animations.
-H-Scenes.
-Stories/Routes (This one is more subjective, but it's good enough to be put here)

Neutral:
-Drama (It can be cliche sometime)

Minor Con:
-Unlocking Route (Sometime unlocking a route can be confusing, but it's a minor thing really)

This game is worth your time. If you love drama, harem, and/or a story where it seems like the world (or the people around you) is going against you, then you'll like this, if not at least enjoy it.

A game with excellent art and good potential.

Art wise, really good. Probably some of the best 2d animations I've seen, and the static drawings are very good as well. The backgrounds and great and the world map also feels much more dynamic than most games.

As of 0.6.1 there is a fair amount of content but there's quite a bit of clicking around with nothing happening, or just skipping time because there seems to be nothing to do. This will likely change once more of the characters' interactions are added.

In terms of the story, I can see the potential for something good, although the signals seem to be very much in the vein of corruption, although it does seem possible to avoid if you want to.

The introduction is very abrupt. Start the game, get a couple of lines of text, and you're in a sandbox. It would be nice if there was some more significant introduction at the start.

Let’s start with the obvious, the game is beautiful, and not only the characters, but the backgrounds and interface is too... so if you care only about that... go ahead and enjoy

Now about the deal breaker…

I CAN’T PLAY THIS WITHOUT INCEST...

OK, OK… Let me explain… I'm not an incest afficionado, but much like that famous game with father’s debt that had to be censored cuz of Patreon, the story doesn’t make much sense without it, since it seems like it was built around it.

I may sound like a broken record as some people probably pointed it out, but the game “flirts” around incest too much and takes a HUGE hit cuz it tries to make them closer than strangers, but without any prior relation...

Living for free with another COMPLETELY UNRELATED altruist single mother that assumed responsibility for you AND your father’s debt because of reasons!!!? F.F.S.!

Sry but my suspension of disbelief is not that high

That's kinda sad cuz i liked the art

Extra life is a great project filled with passion. Multiple routes planned for multiple characters, lots of choices and beautifully animated scenes. On top of that great music distinguishes this game. Although new music isn't as good as the old one it's still way better than most games. I'm hoping for way more content in the future (especially more Noriko).
Art 4.5/5
Story - 4.5/5
Gameplay 4.5/5
Fapability 5/5
Originality 5/5
Music 6/5 (old) 5/5 (new)

I don't think I've ever experienced a higher level of discrepancy between the quality of the art and... well, everything else.

Every scene has an outline of immediately recognizable fetishism to it yet the absolutely braindead nature of the writing and dialogue and the pitiful amount of effort put into characterization drains them of all the possible eroticism.

The art is glossy and nice to look at but everything else isn't even an afterthought -- it's significantly worse than that.

Really, not much else to say about this game. An utterly hollow experience.

Solid 4.5 (I'll give 5 because it's just really that good).

The plot itself is pretty straightforward except it's really not, you thought this is just gonna be revenge porn game but there're a lot of story that has been built so yeah don't just expect for a fast porn game. Every side character (or i guess girls) has their own story and it sometimes connected with each other.

The control is simple imo but somewhat minimalistic to the eye with how it's placed, take regular cliche renpy game and got furnish to the top and you'll get this game. Sadly there's no scrolling back but at least saving/loading is easy.

The art is top tier (for this type of game), from the interface that has cute and fancy design that don't really make you confused playing it. Each character don't really look the same and their design to their clothes is really well made. Even the porn is really good, it's lewd but not too overbearing and imo the body proportion is almost realistic as in they make it not strangely sexy.

Lastly the current thing that they can try to improve is the sound, some bgm is really repetitive to the point even when fucking is the same music. Regardles they used some really good quality music. Also character don't really feels alive without some voice (at least make it just one voiceline for some chars) and maybe add some moans to the porn and you're good to go.

While I have enjoyed what the developers have done, I'm hoping that more story and more options will only flesh out a high quality game. Some twists with corruption, betrayal, fetishes, etc would add significant value.

Art are totally nuts, UI very fine. A lot of game could inspire from this one !
Also character are well work, just waiting tohave some things to buy with money we are grinding.

Can't wait for next updates !

I'll start with my overall rating and impressions of the game:

I'd give this game an overall rating of 8/10 which I think is better than many games available at the moment.

Story: 7/10

I feel as if the story is one of the weakest aspects of the game so far but it's certainly not bad. It could be that the story is just beginning and that we haven't seen much of it but I'm going to judge based off of what there currently is.

The whole 'retry' theme of the story certainly isn't new in fiction but I have played a few games with that theme. It's certainly not oversaturated, and I am looking forward to how our MC will stop the yakuza-like threat.

I do feel like the whole "your father left his debt with us, and we took you in" trope is overused, especially in other H-games (no need to name any) but, once again, it isn't bad. It's just oversaturated.

The only thing I am slightly worried about is that we're currently in 0.5.9 and it feels as if though the story has yet to get anywhere with the gangs and Sakuya. However, I trust that this is your story and that you will do it justice so I'm not too worried (I've also seen what you've planned on your Patreon as well). Also, I see that you're planning to add more choice paths in the game which I am quite excited for.

Characters: 7.5/10

The characters are by no means unique and deep, but they're not based upon oversaturated tropes either. The only character I dislike would be Macumba and it's just because he has no depth to his character beyond exercise and music. Then again, we may see more of him in future updates and if so, I'll gladly take back what I said about him. I absolutely love the other characters though. I do think the character design is good for all of the characters (even the new Chiaki model though I preferred the old one).

Art Style and Animation: 9.5/10

This is one of the best aspects of the game and I remember first playing this game and being blown away by how beautiful it is. I didn't want to give this a 10/10 as I'm sure some idiot would start bitching about how this game has better art and whatnot. Nevertheless, I gave it a 9.5. I shouldn't need to explain further; just play the game if you don't understand why I gave it such a high rating.

UI and Interface: 9/10

This game has one of the best and most unique interfaces and UIs I've seen. Most other games, especially RPGs, have that same bland interface and this is definitely a breath of fresh air. It seems so clean, and fluid and I have no issues with it except it can be a little bit slow on my low-end pc (but nothing too major).

Music (and SFX): 8.5/10

The music is great and does a good job of portraying the mood. I hope that we get more tracks in future updates. In terms of SFX, it seems quite lacking, however you may have done that on purpose, and it isn't a big issue (especially when the music makes up for it).

Money System: 5/10

I'll be plain and simple with you - money seems useless in this game except for the end goal of getting rid of the debt Yasuka is dealing with. I would suggest being able to spend it at the Konbini and being able to purchase toys to spice up the bedroom scenes but it's entirely up to you and I hope you have a plan for it. I also dislike the aspect of finding money as it's very tedious and annoying.

Developer: 9/10

I think you are one of the most active developers in engaging with what your community is saying, especially on this site and it's very pleasing to know that you actually care about your fans instead of just taking our money. I'm glad that you're able to work on this full-time and I am very happy with how frequent the game gets updated.

Final Comments:

I apologise for the long review, but I wanted to give reasons for everything and explain them. Overall, the game has its short-comings, but I do believe that they can (and most probably - will) be fixed in future updates. Even then, there are very few bugs and it's generally a really fun game to play. I do stick by my 8/10 overall rating, but I do believe that this game has the potential to be a 9/10 or even a 10/10 game once it has finished. I do also believe that it's one of the best games on this site and an underrated, hidden gem.

-The Devil

The art and story are both top notch. No technical issues. I can only speak for the English translation but it is very good. The amount of content is not amazing but two of the girls have very good routes already and there are a few other scenes. The game also receives regular substantial content updates.