11.0 thoughts:
All story. We meet three new characters (targets), get a lot cat vs. mouse as they try to find Asami, some development for Sakuya, some closure as to how events played out in the past life and MC whooping some ass (about damn time).
Sadly though, a few things still don't sit right with me (some of it from previous versions)
Noriko: Basically no real choice regardless of which route you pick for her. The only difference is which limited H scene do you want. Rejection/Blackmail circle back into Male/Femdom anyway, you can't deny Noriko from getting that D. Why would you anyway but still.... I would have blackmail route to offer more before you're strongarmed into MD/FD.
Yasuka: One of the only two where it feels choices matter. Her Love vs. Corruption paths actual has long standing differences between the story. A bathtub scene would have been nice, wasted opp. Another wasted opp is not progressing you choosing to sleep with her on Love route. A quickie at the tea shop would be nice too.
Asami: Storyline has honestly went on far too long, thankfully it's interesting or it would have felt like torture. Missed opportunities on Love route you'll only see if you go down the Friend route. Could have made a great prone scene while she's playing games at your house. Can still do it though. Second of the two where it feels like your choices matter. Just from an H standpoint, Love route feels lacking compared to Corruption. Would love a certain Friend route CG to pop up in Love route, great for a romantic touch.
Sakuya: This poor girl. Undercooked, underused. No reason I can think of that she didn't get at least one new scene. Would love to see at least one maledom scene with her. She does have the benefit of being the only girl with a titjob scene but overall she barely has anything. Has more plot armor/weapons than main character, as expected of a yandere. Use her more in H!
Sayuri: Wanted a H scene with her in her date outfit, the perfect chance was in the alleyway middle of the rain. Divided about how I feel about her not being available if you're on Asami's Love/Corruption routes but overall not a bother, it promotes some replay value. A behind the counter scene at the konbini would be nice too...
New girls! in order of appearance: Tall queen and glasses!? Oh you're spoiling me! Mechanic chicks are just universally hot and she's easily the cutest mom. No notes on the GF, I just want to steal her because I hate that trio. Would have been funny if after you beat the shit out of him you went up to the room and got with her in front of him. Consensually, of course.
H scenes in general: More clothed sex. I only now realized that the only sex scenes done clothed is one with Asami and one with Sakuya. There's Sayuri in her sleep wear, but that's basically underwear anywho. Cum shots. Time Lapse scenes aside, every scene besides those that don't transfer directly into another scene should have a finisher shot. Final, more variation between different routes. Sure, story is a good reason to try out different routes but give more H incentives to replay and go down the others. Add a H scene for Sayuri in her date outfit.