miecchiyu
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- Apr 3, 2025
 
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The way you are trying to make it 'date or not' argument explains the latter part and that you just don't get it.
Regardless of context, making a story protagonist clueless about a bad thing that's happening while revealing it to player and not giving him an option to make impact in the story is a huge no-no. It completely ruins immersion and creates this unwanted dissonance. And that's a narration writing issue of someone that is not...
If I cook a dinner for you and it taste like shit, go ahead, force yourself to swallow it and tap me on my back.
But hopefully others will tell me that my cooking sucks and treat the dogs with the food. And hopefully it will be better next time.
	
		
			
		
		
	
								Regardless of context, making a story protagonist clueless about a bad thing that's happening while revealing it to player and not giving him an option to make impact in the story is a huge no-no. It completely ruins immersion and creates this unwanted dissonance. And that's a narration writing issue of someone that is not...
Which is not only condescending for the game author, but also lack of self respect.an author of many novels, which I rarely expect in these games.
If I cook a dinner for you and it taste like shit, go ahead, force yourself to swallow it and tap me on my back.
But hopefully others will tell me that my cooking sucks and treat the dogs with the food. And hopefully it will be better next time.