- Thread starter DoctorMoist
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Canela Skin and Lilith Lust respectively, I’ll add credits at the beginning for the next update
Hello.
The samples and summary made me come. And I don't know what to think.
The worldbuilding is good.
The characters are few and different. Some of their description could be better developped.
The plot seems interesting and borderline to have enough variety.
The photos/gif are well chosen but not always balanced (sometimes too much, sometimes just enough).
So I did some playthroughs and I'm lost. I wanted to stay neutral but it doesn't seem to work that way.
The end of content is strange, outside the bad endings or the not implemented ones. On the dealer path, after triggering all available events, we can endlessly visit the house. On the mafia path, the luck mission never disappear. The same with the "Flashback achieved" appointment.
There are many choices but does they have any consequences outside money and sex scenes? For example, in the dealer path, we can give 2 drugs , sometimes 3, which change what happens in that scene. What I want to know is : does it have further repercussions on the long run? Does our relation with Troy, his girl or the second jock evolve or are they just customers with some extra? The same at the garage : are we just greedy jerk or accommodating sex obsessed or just honest mechanic? Will they never come back if it isn't to their taste? I'm wondering if I'm makin any sense
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The indic path doesn't seem to have any real impact yet, outside a bad end.
The humor was nice but sometimes too much.
The phone doesn't seem functional yet.
The clients in the waiting room aren't targets to be eliminated (it could be amusing if they were related to the underground).
There some spelling and punctuation errors left.
Good continuation.
The samples and summary made me come. And I don't know what to think.
The worldbuilding is good.
The characters are few and different. Some of their description could be better developped.
The plot seems interesting and borderline to have enough variety.
The photos/gif are well chosen but not always balanced (sometimes too much, sometimes just enough).
So I did some playthroughs and I'm lost. I wanted to stay neutral but it doesn't seem to work that way.
The end of content is strange, outside the bad endings or the not implemented ones. On the dealer path, after triggering all available events, we can endlessly visit the house. On the mafia path, the luck mission never disappear. The same with the "Flashback achieved" appointment.
There are many choices but does they have any consequences outside money and sex scenes? For example, in the dealer path, we can give 2 drugs , sometimes 3, which change what happens in that scene. What I want to know is : does it have further repercussions on the long run? Does our relation with Troy, his girl or the second jock evolve or are they just customers with some extra? The same at the garage : are we just greedy jerk or accommodating sex obsessed or just honest mechanic? Will they never come back if it isn't to their taste? I'm wondering if I'm makin any sense
.The indic path doesn't seem to have any real impact yet, outside a bad end.
The humor was nice but sometimes too much.
The phone doesn't seem functional yet.
The clients in the waiting room aren't targets to be eliminated (it could be amusing if they were related to the underground).
There some spelling and punctuation errors left.
Good continuation.
- Apr 11, 2023
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Thanks, I get what you mean with having impact. In the long run things will connect more like Inner Bimbo if you've ever played it. The phone is also for a specific path, there should probably be content for both. There will also be more relationship content in the next update, I set up the framework and stopped. Aside from that I just didn't know you could visit the house again
- Jan 16, 2022
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Use gamcore, for HTML games its more efficent to try new games.
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I didn't know about that, I thought you had to apply. I'm currently in the process of rewriting the whole thing for continuity's sake, but I'll do that after, thank you
Thanks for the share DoctorMoist.
Your setting, world, and story set up seemed good.
Interface was usable, better than many rev 1-2 HTML games.
I like the humor.
The player gets to make a choice with consequences right away (to stop the guy in the hallway).
That being said, I did not play all they way through the current content because of the amount of scrolling and images. It was just too much. Having to scroll through multiple animated images while trying to read a passage was off putting. It was like looking at an old myspace page with too many animated gifs going all at once. You have a good start here, please exercise more restraint. Limit each passage to 1-2 images, and be careful how many are animating on the screen at once. Let your story do the talking instead of a barrage of references and animations. You have a solid enough foundation to carry the player into your world without needing a bunch of flashing jokes and references. Its like a cake with too much sugar. You have a solid cake flavor and bake, ease up on the sugar/frosting and let people taste the cake.
Thanks for sharing and thanks for being open to feedback.
Your setting, world, and story set up seemed good.
Interface was usable, better than many rev 1-2 HTML games.
I like the humor.
The player gets to make a choice with consequences right away (to stop the guy in the hallway).
That being said, I did not play all they way through the current content because of the amount of scrolling and images. It was just too much. Having to scroll through multiple animated images while trying to read a passage was off putting. It was like looking at an old myspace page with too many animated gifs going all at once. You have a good start here, please exercise more restraint. Limit each passage to 1-2 images, and be careful how many are animating on the screen at once. Let your story do the talking instead of a barrage of references and animations. You have a solid enough foundation to carry the player into your world without needing a bunch of flashing jokes and references. Its like a cake with too much sugar. You have a solid cake flavor and bake, ease up on the sugar/frosting and let people taste the cake.
Thanks for sharing and thanks for being open to feedback.
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but even that leads nowhere Good luck o7I tried playing this on linux but when I get to the garage it seems there are some fonts missing.
No sure if this is a game for me but thought I would give it a try. Seemed okay the little I played.
No sure if this is a game for me but thought I would give it a try. Seemed okay the little I played.
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Thanks for trying though. I’ll make sure to change that to a more universally safe font for next update, thanks
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Was that a joke?
If not, then I have to tell you that is classic vampire cosplay. A lot of "models" did that. I think even some Vampire movies had similar scenes where Vamps were bathing in a "human blood".
Also the girl on pic is called FrannyFreckles and she does some kinky cosplays. For example her pictures together with The Halloween Killer and his mask are funny.
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. Downloading issues? Look here.You forgot the missing part:Elizabeth Bathory. She's who inspired that bit of vampiric mythos. Truth's stranger than fiction sometimes.
Game's coming along alright, but it's still a bit light in content for me. I'll be back in a few updates.
Another great concept executed horribly!!! people are here for sex not story...Less Textual MORE Sexual, i'm tired of saying it
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Thanks for giving it a try though, but are you talking about not enough sex scenes? Or adding more images/videos to sex scenes?