VN Ren'Py Grand Duke Valeran - Building a Harem in Another World [v0.3.0-public] [Mr.I.Game]

[S1nsational]

Hehe, it's not an oversight. In the game's world, magic exists, so girls don't need to be pregnant to produce milk. You can try the current version - it actually covers this already.
As for pregnancy, I've considered it, but if it happens, it would be much, much later down the line, so I don't want to add it as a tag just yet.

That's fair, it's just normally the planned tags are meant as general plans not immediate plans.

 

[Davetiger]

I love anime like this, they are my favorite, I can't wait to see the next update hopefully you won't take too long between updates this is a story I can't wait to see what happens next . Also, I really liked that despite being a virgin the MC wasn't afraid of women or stupid of sex.. not very many boys past 13 don't at least have sexual thoughts from time to time and it's so annoying reading stories that make the MC scream and run from a naked woman when if you divert your eyes it's not because your embarrassed it's to show respect for the woman

 

[Davetiger]

Thank you! To be honest, I also feel that sometimes the game looks a bit too bright (Maybe it's because I usually keep my screen dim, so I didn't really notice it during development )

I'll do my best to learn more about lighting and shadow effects to improve the visuals… though I'm still pretty new to this, so it's a bit challenging. As for changing the bed sheet or tile colors, I'm afraid I can't do much there since these are preset maps that can't be edited, and creating new maps is beyond my skills at the moment

Thank you for your positive feedback on the game. I'll keep working hard on it and hope it reaches more players!

Yes it is a bit bright as I stay in usually dark settings and set most of my screens to use dark presets so as to not have white backgrounds on my browsers and stuff, but all and all it wasn't that bad there were 2 that made my eyes strain a bit to read because they were so bright. I just hope you don't make the same mistake as so many other failed VN's... as you learn to do things better don't stop progress to go back and fix the beginning and do a remake before you are even half way through the story it's ok to fix a few scenes from the beginning during each update just don't stop progress to remake just because you learned a new "trick".

 

[darkengeobr]

Isekai'ed by gooning, what a fate

 

[Anjayzz]

I know this gon be story Rich but, can we still get at least one scene every update??

 

[mr.i.game]

I know this gon be story Rich but, can we still get at least one scene every update??

They won't appear very often. I'm currently releasing small updates, so H-scenes won't be in every one, but there should be at least one every 3-4 months.

 

[Giggling Raven]

I liked the story and it has a very grandiose ambition. I wonder how going from a sick young master to the one true god, omnipotent, omniscient and omnipresent is going to work out for the MC and I also wonder about the battle scenes.

Not many choices so far though, making it look more like a kinetic novel. Another thing I need to mention is that, since the story has had a lot of inner monologuing so far, I think it needs a better way of demonstrating when the MC is thinking. Most of the time the text in italics didn't even register on my mind when I was reading the dialogue, so I would suggest either having it all in parenthesis as it's most customary or have it signalized as "Thinking" in the dialogue box instead of MC's name.

 

[mr.i.game]

I liked the story and it has a very grandiose ambition. I wonder how going from a sick young master to the one true god, omnipotent, omniscient and omnipresent is going to work out for the MC and I also wonder about the battle scenes.

Not many choices so far though, making it look more like a kinetic novel. Another thing I need to mention is that, since the story has had a lot of inner monologuing so far, I think it needs a better way of demonstrating when the MC is thinking. Most of the time the text in italics didn't even register on my mind when I was reading the dialogue, so I would suggest either having it all in parenthesis as it's most customary or have it signalized as "Thinking" in the dialogue box instead of MC's name.

Thank you for appreciating my game!
As for the MC's journey, I can only say one thing - it will surprise you
Regarding the battle scenes on the scale of gods... well, we'll cross that bridge when we get there (it's still a long, long way off =]]). For now, I'm relying on AI-generated images for such epic scenes, but hopefully, by then, I'll have the budget to create truly spectacular battles.

As for the inner monologues, I'm considering adding a few options in the References menu so players can choose how they prefer the inner thoughts to be displayed, of course, if implementing this feature doesn't require too much effort...

 

[TheNowhereWolf]

Really enjoyed the game so far, I like the characters a lot, Eleanor is by default my favorite because red head supremacy is just a fact! The humor is pretty good as well, definitely interested to see how all this continues. Just as my opinion, it is nice that even if only for now, there is harem game without a lesbian tag. I will follow the Supreme God of Fapping's adventure with great interest.

 

[mr.i.game]

Hi everyone!
I’ve just released version 0.3.0 on Patreon:

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[RexGenocide]

Hi everyone!
I’ve just released version 0.3.0 on Patreon:

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Can ypu provide changelog so i can decide if i want to subscribe for a month?

 

[mr.i.game]

Can ypu provide changelog so i can decide if i want to subscribe for a month?

Not much, just added Chapter 6 (over 6k words), and.... no H-scenes

 

[RexGenocide]

Not much, just added Chapter 6 (over 6k words), and.... no H-scenes

maybe next time then, but keep going, i'll be waiting

 

[mr.i.game]

Hey guys, I've uploaded version 0.3.0!
Lately, I've been releasing new updates chapter by chapter, so if it feels too short, you can wait a bit and play after a few chapters stack up

 

[darkengeobr]

I really like this and i know it's story focused but i have to say, there's so much information i had to skip some of it because i was starting to get bored, at the start of the game we're told the entire history of the world all at once with no build-up and it's all just background(for now?), there's almost no 'screen time' for mc and other characters, at least it was like that the last version i played, dunno about this one yet. It might just be a me thing though so i don't know, feel free to ignore this.

 

[mr.i.game]

I really like this and i know it's story focused but i have to say, there's so much information i had to skip some of it because i was starting to get bored, at the start of the game we're told the entire history of the world all at once with no build-up and it's all just background(for now?), there's almost no 'screen time' for mc and other characters, at least it was like that the last version i played, dunno about this one yet. It might just be a me thing though so i don't know, feel free to ignore this.

Thank you for your feedback!

I'm really sorry about the overwhelming amount of information you experienced. Honestly, it's because I've been influenced by the writing style of the stories I read, where they often describe the world's background in detail before diving into the main story.

I did consider slowly weaving the world-building into the narrative, revealing it bit by bit, but... I couldn't pull it off (I'm still new to writing, and my skills aren't great yet )

Please bear with it for now - once the world-building is out of the way, the later chapters will focus solely on the story!

 

[Juerhullycin]

Thank you for your feedback!

I'm really sorry about the overwhelming amount of information you experienced. Honestly, it's because I've been influenced by the writing style of the stories I read, where they often describe the world's background in detail before diving into the main story.

I did consider slowly weaving the world-building into the narrative, revealing it bit by bit, but... I couldn't pull it off (I'm still new to writing, and my skills aren't great yet )

Please bear with it for now - once the world-building is out of the way, the later chapters will focus solely on the story!

really liked the update, especially that MC took up the mantle and accept his destiny.

 

[Prim.]

any idea for how long the playtime is? like 4hrs or so?

 

[darkengeobr]

Thank you for your feedback!

I'm really sorry about the overwhelming amount of information you experienced. Honestly, it's because I've been influenced by the writing style of the stories I read, where they often describe the world's background in detail before diving into the main story.

I did consider slowly weaving the world-building into the narrative, revealing it bit by bit, but... I couldn't pull it off (I'm still new to writing, and my skills aren't great yet )

Please bear with it for now - once the world-building is out of the way, the later chapters will focus solely on the story!

Hey it might just be me though, i'm not used to this kind of story telling. It's still a great game, keep going man you got peak material on your hands.

 

[mr.i.game]

any idea for how long the playtime is? like 4hrs or so?

Honestly, I have no clue, even though I'm the dev ^^
I'm super bad at judging playtime (like, I spend all day on games that are supposed to be "2 hours" because I get stuck on the H-scenes =]] ).
So, someone else, help me out here