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A thorough and deep work.... Nothing less for Mama MabelThe Pool Needs Cleaning
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couldn't put it better about the situation with mc's 1st time with Jamila - the built up anticipation on both parts could only result in that sex marathon - they simply couldn't have enough of each other.MoonBox :
Caught a couple of typos, or rather, the same typo, but in two different places. First in the scene with Kitty Cat and the bowls, and then at the end card ("You're reached the end of the update"). Both of those have an instance where it says 'You're', when it should be 'You've'. Because 'You're' means "You are" for short, and 'You've' means "You have" for short. Figured I'd let you know, and keep up the good work.
As for what I said last time, since I love Jamila, I didn't have too much of an issue with their first time together taking some time to go through. But, with that being said, I can see that for someone who maybe doesn't care for Jamila, that scene might have been a bit dragged out. And for me, as well as the MC, things would probably have been like that, due to the build-up of anticipation, and then its final release upon eachother, and in my opinion makes it more realistic, but I can also see how for some, it went on a bit long for their taste. Hope you're doing alright, and like I've already said, keep up the good work, bro. Best regards, from Tico.
Hmm... How tf did we miss that? Probably because we're mainly proofin the dialogue of the game and didn't even think about that part.MoonBox :
Caught a couple of typos, or rather, the same typo, but in two different places. First in the scene with Kitty Cat and the bowls, and then at the end card ("You're reached the end of the update"). Both of those have an instance where it says 'You're', when it should be 'You've'. Because 'You're' means "You are" for short, and 'You've' means "You have" for short. Figured I'd let you know, and keep up the good work.
Hmm... How tf did we miss that? Probably because we're mainly proofin the dialogue of the game and didn't even think about that part.
HornyyPussy we need to step up our game. Kind of like the 'of' and 'off'.
Yeah... why bother, if when you hit it, you instantly goOn a more "serious" note, fairly certain MB is aware of the typo on the end card, he just doesn't give a crap
I thought you wanted some classical music for a second there.....Yeah... why bother, if when you hit it, you instantly gobach* BACK and save.
Peace
* This keyboard is pissing me off... H and K look exactly the same and since I'm mostly Mr.Magoo here... I edited the fucking H 4 times... grrrr
Thats OK. Don't be ashamed of it. We just know you get drunk sometimes. But let me reassure you, I think most of us are the sameYeah... why bother, if when you hit it, you instantly gobach* BACK and save.
Peace
* This keyboard is pissing me off... H and K look exactly the same and since I'm mostly Mr.Magoo here... I edited the fucking H 4 times... grrrr
I don't drink alcohol, what does that say about me then.........Thats OK. Don't be ashamed of it. We just know you get drunk sometimes. But let me reassure you, I think most of us are the same
It's just that you have to find something else to blame your mistakes on.I don't drink alcohol, what does that say about me then.........
So you're assuming I make mistakes huh.........It's just that you have to find something else to blame your mistakes on.
You aren't the only one that remembers Melissa (the sisters Name if you forgot) there's Dozens of your Kind Dozens I tell you, as for finding her I'll point you to Moonbox for thatSo is MC ever gonna meet that sister of his that went missing or am I the only one that remembers that weirdly specific (and arguably only) plot point?
Yes!!!!So you're assuming I make mistakes huh.........
Looks like someone wants drama and a cliffhangerSo is MC ever gonna meet that sister of his that went missing or am I the only one that remembers that weirdly specific (and arguably only) plot point?