RPGM - Onhold - Grolokk [v0.65] [gacorman70]

Art is great, concept is good, writing is great, execution and programming is bad.

I love the art in this game, the characters are expressive and sexy. Enough said.

The concept is good, you're a lowlife goblin trying to build a warband through wacky hijinks meeting quirky characters. I also like that the harem girls you gather aren't really that unwilling (just unenthusiastic). It keeps the lighthearted nature of the game.

The writing is good, too. The goblins sound barely literate, the guards sound drunk. Everyone's an asshole or an idiot. Or both. Every character also has just a smidge of self-awareness cooked that, again, keeps you from taking anything seriously.

The actual game functioning, though, is where it falls apart.

It froze on me regularly, almost like clockwork, every 15-20 minutes. There's a bug concerning a quest requiring you to gather 5 Harem Girls. If you gather them in the wrong order, you can get 2 at once, and jump from 4 to 6 harem girls, making that quest, and hence the game itself, incompletable.

The game has 2 scavenger hunt fetch quests. Requiring you to either have a VERY keen eye and OCD-investigation tendencies the first time you explore a place, or going around the various locales trying to find what you need blindly. And this game has random encounters on the overworld that will grind your patience while your searching.

The combat feels incomplete. The mage and the healer, during my playthrough, learned spells/skills that had no MP cost, no description, and as far as I can tell, no effect when used.


This game also feels a little short. It ends on a "To Be Continued" like it's Chapter 1 of something, but it's not labeled Chapter 1.

You get 6 harem girls and most only have 1 sexy scene each after you get them. So the reward might not feel worth it after all the slog through the random encounters and fetch quests.


This is an interesting idea, but it would need a better game designer and programmer for the future installments.

Great game, especially for initial release. Expect a lot of good stuff down the line. I do sorely miss some kink elements, like at least put a collar on them slave girls and make em kneel.
You should consider making a discord for people to keep up with the project

Good game. Art's consistently high-quality, and one of the girls even has multiple options to choose from, which has been bizarrely absent from every other RPGM porn game I've tried. Gameplay's pretty good: nothing mind-blowing, but it works, is engaging enough, and doesn't get in the way. Assuming things continue on their current trajectory (ideally with more options added for all girls, maybe even with some minimal trainer-esque progression) this should be excellent.

PSA: Any time you're rating something and your rating will be factored into an average visible to others, 5 stars means good, 4 means good, but with significant reservations, and 3 or under means bad. When something only has a few ratings, this is even more true. This isn't the way it SHOULD be, but it's the way it is. Thus is the internet.

v1.1 on Linux

Bloody great. Just a tad short maybe. It is a good game, a good adult game, I just want more.

Art is great, constant and appealing.
Story is engaging, humorous without being annoying.
Gameplay is RPGM, but has nice art and works well.

Again, it is just too short, hope for more content soon!

I have no idea how this has anything higher than a 4 star. If I imagine someone who has a goblin kink, I imagine that person would give this a 4 star. Best possible rating. It's not amazing, it's not terrible, it is very average. The artwork is fine but not great. The animated scenes are few (1? 2?) and have like 3 frames max on loop. The story is okay but not very deep or long. The combat is okay but not very exciting. So on, so forth. Literally everything is just "okay".

When I play hentai games, I'm usually of hentai first game second mentality. I appreciate some build up and fun mechanics (ideally ones that lend themselves to the hentai aspect such as the "papers please"-themed Imperial Gatekeeper), I can play for hours without any sexual content and be content if the payoff is big, but this is just.. acceptable. Wish I had not wasted my time on it, thanks to the other 5 star reviews (5 stars means excellent btw, 3=average)

To above review trying to explain star value meanings, no, 5 stars does not mean good, 4 stars does not mean good with reservations. When you mouse over 5 stars on this site, it literally says "Excellent". 3 stars literally says "average". Stop trying to reinvent the wheel.

Finally, a MC that looks like me...

But on a serious note, story and writing is really good so far. Game-play is your usual turn based RPG and easy to understand. The UI is excellent. Can't wait for further updates.

This game is unbelievably complete for a 1.0. The art is great, it clearly sets the stage for a future expansion. Normally I hate RPGM games because they are incredibly grindy, but this game manages to be fun. The scenes are sufficiently kinky. I wish some of the girls took more persuasion before they eventually cave but it was still great. Hoping for more evolution of the mother and daughter pair. Can't wait for more!