WOW ! What a beginning!
The writing in this 20 minute first chapter, was so well done, I could feel the discomfort and fear of the MC. The renders are well done. Sound is added in some scenes. This is a magnificent beginning.
The premise is believable. No hypnosis or magic. Just a straight up government where the MC is put in his place. The opening of the chapter, just seals the deal for the MC and his wife. I am hanging by my fingernails for the next update. Great Job Dev!
The writing in this 20 minute first chapter, was so well done, I could feel the discomfort and fear of the MC. The renders are well done. Sound is added in some scenes. This is a magnificent beginning.
The premise is believable. No hypnosis or magic. Just a straight up government where the MC is put in his place. The opening of the chapter, just seals the deal for the MC and his wife. I am hanging by my fingernails for the next update. Great Job Dev!