Ren'Py Hard Days [v0.4.0] [VNAdults]

[Geko1711]

Yes I noticed you added a little spin to some phrases and it's overall better to read but nothing hits quite like dirty talk in your native language

You are more than right! In Italian, the dirty phrases remain very faithful to the Spanish. On the other hand, Loren and Molli are very hot and hardly hold back.

 

[Geko1711]

I don't understand how MC can be Jealous of Kirsten spending time with her husband. He trets her poorly (like most people to be honnest).
It would make more sens that she would be jealous of her husband, at leaston the path when you can dominate Kirsten, i was kinda expecting jealousy to be the other way
I wanna make Kirsten mine, but don't really care about hubby, like someone says he is borring AND treats his wife poorly AND a quickshot AND with a tiny dick compared to other male in the game (that a lot of argument against the dude).

Loren's jealousy isn't so much the act itself that Kirsten goes with Thomas, but because Thomas desires her, that's what drives Loren crazy, there's a scene right at the night of the 4th that you see Loren pinned down by Leo watching Kristen and Thomas starting anal sex. Well for me it's the most meaningful sentence Loren thinks about what her husband had told her some time before: 'I don't like anal sex it's slutty'. This driving her crazy with jealousy because she sees Thomas wanting to do it with kirsten when with her, he had told him no.

 

[boulimanus]

2 I think I know why this typo occurred but better keep it grammatically correct for now. LOL

This is on purpose and I won't change it actually.
It is written as it was spoken. It's meant to suggest James being playful and trying his luck saying it without being caught. So he could always say he misspoke or was misheard. If I write grammatically correct here, it would lose that playfulness that I wanted to add. I thought about adding quotes at the time, but it would suggest it was insisted upon when spoken, which would bring too much attention to it.

 

[Sorter]

This is on purpose and I won't change it actually.
It is written as it was spoken. It's meant to suggest James being playful and trying his luck saying it without being caught. So he could always say he misspoke or was misheard. If I write grammatically correct here, it would lose that playfulness that I wanted to add. I thought about adding quotes at the time, but it would suggest it was insisted upon when spoken, which would bring too much attention to it.

Totally understand, and I got the gist of it right away LOL. If that is the intent, then absolutely.

1 Capital Oh. There are other instances which at this point I can't recall which don't have a capitalized start of a sentence. But I guess this is just nitpicking. LOL

2 What are you trying to say in the 3rd sentence? It sounds odd. Maybe just "He's crazy about being with you one last time"?

3 "get as many as I can" from the last sentence.

4 If you want to use "seat" then it should be something like "take a seat anywhere". Otherwise it should be "sit" as written.

5 Should be "subdued by him". Unless you want to say something like subservient.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I really hope that Loren gets a very painful, harmful and disgusting STD. She really deserves it. Btw...has someones read the Text? Isn t it confusing? She s jealous that her Husband likes and fucks this sick psycho Bitch Kirsten, but on the other hand she s the whore of the City who fucks literally everyone. Oh the hypocrisy. Nothing and i really mean nothing in this "Comic" makes sense. Choices are useless as before and almost everything is forced. Ahhhh...at least the Renders are decent.

Seems to me this just isn't your cup of tea, and for some bizarre reason you seem to have taken Loren's cheating very personally. Because why else would you wish such a horrible thing on her? This is a fantasy. You're not supposed to take it seriously and get all upset because the 'heroine' of a cheating game, actually has the gall to cheat on her hubby. Not that he has anything to complain about having literally sold his soul to their next door neighbour at the drop of a hat.

I think a lot of the jealousy is caused by how easily her husband succumbs to Kirsten's charms. I mean, he barely puts up any fight at all from the word go. And he's literally willing to do everything sexual for her, that he's always denied Loren, claiming that he didn't like it, which she now knows was a blatant lie. It's like his wife was ugly as fuck compared to Kirsten, and not being lusted over, by every man she comes into contact with besides Thomas. I think that would cause any woman to get jealous, if her husband suddenly started acting like she didn't even exist.

But you're also ignoring that at the same time she gets very turned on by these feelings of jealousy. The more jealous she gets, the more sexually aroused she feels. This is a classic cuckquean scenario, and it's obvious Kirsten and Leo have planned for this to happen, so Loren will become too horny and riled up to resist her sexual desires. And since this is subsequently what happens at the end of the scene, I think it makes perfect sense.

You say choices are useless. But that's not true. You can avoid all the sex scenes in this update, if you so wish. Which makes me wonder why you decided to play them, when you appear to find them so offensive?

 

[moonhowler1972]

MC is jealous of her husband, while she is fucking every cock in the game, this is really ridiculous, a disgusting scene, in fact, what is Thomas for in this game, he is a nerd, a cuckold with a small cock, the only man in the whole game, with a small cock, again this description that the poor cuckold has a small cock, is becoming the stuff of jokes, a game without a plot, we have a MC with her legs open to every cock, father-in-law, uncle, lovers, and others, and she disgusts her husband, what the fuck kind of wedding do you organize in these plots, hahahahhaha

Here we go again. Same shit, different thread. Get a fucking life.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Best update in the game so far without a doubt. Absolutely awesome! This game just keeps getting better and better.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Thanks. I do take some creative liberties but don't want to change too much. I'll see what I can do

You can keep avoiding him. But you won't be able to avoid everyone during that night.
Show your tits at the start of the poker game if Leo is your worst nightmare.

It's possible to avoid having sex with anyone. She gets groped, sits on Charley's lap, kisses Molly and Kirsten, and has to briefly bare her breasts. But you can get away without doing anything more sexual than that.

 

[VNAdults]

Thank you so much to everyone who has commented on the game. Knowing your thoughts and how you perceive the characters helps a lot in developing the next chapters.

I see that one of the most discussed topics is the choices in the game. I try to improve this as the game progresses, adding more options and choices. However, to reach the end, there will be certain scenes that must happen. I will try to ensure that these unavoidable scenes at least have variations so they can unfold in different ways.

I am quite flexible during development, and I don't mind making changes and/or adding things to the game. But I also try to meet deadlines to update within reasonable times.

I know that some characters are more liked than others. I try to give more space to those who interfere more in Loren's life. At times, I’ve even changed scenes based on how players favor certain characters to give them a bit more prominence. However, characters like Thomas, Leo, Kirsten, or Charlie are important to the game and will have a presence throughout. I will try to ensure that scenes have options for things to happen differently and/or be avoided. Loren's arousal meter will also influence certain choices. Although I still need to adjust it, I aim to give it more weight in upcoming chapters.

Best regards to everyone, and thank you so much for your comments—they help more than you think

 

[michelita]

Thank you so much to everyone who has commented on the game. Knowing your thoughts and how you perceive the characters helps a lot in developing the next chapters.

I see that one of the most discussed topics is the choices in the game. I try to improve this as the game progresses, adding more options and choices. However, to reach the end, there will be certain scenes that must happen. I will try to ensure that these unavoidable scenes at least have variations so they can unfold in different ways.

I am quite flexible during development, and I don't mind making changes and/or adding things to the game. But I also try to meet deadlines to update within reasonable times.

I know that some characters are more liked than others. I try to give more space to those who interfere more in Loren's life. At times, I’ve even changed scenes based on how players favor certain characters to give them a bit more prominence. However, characters like Thomas, Leo, Kirsten, or Charlie are important to the game and will have a presence throughout. I will try to ensure that scenes have options for things to happen differently and/or be avoided. Loren's arousal meter will also influence certain choices. Although I still need to adjust it, I aim to give it more weight in upcoming chapters.

Best regards to everyone, and thank you so much for your comments—they help more than you think

Thanks. This is great to read. I'm fine with those 4 characters that you mention having a presence in most scenarios since they seem now tied to progress as long as I can keep at least 1 from going all the way (with MC) in every situation.

I was concerned about the ability to progress the game without being forced into a situation with a certain character but I understand the sex must come from somewhere so as long as you keep adding options in regards to who gets involved into the action we can navigate those in a way that is satisfactory to our preference.

Although the current choice system is still a bit convoluted for new players, I'm happy with the way you've been managing this so far and I'm relieved to see we can expect this to continue.

 

[master861]

Is any hero out ther i loved that game so far nice renders and what are great ride so far.
Only one question or maybe two , prego planned and why is ther the tag bukkake.

I haven't seen any scenes that correspond to that tag

 

[Sorter]

Thank you so much to everyone who has commented on the game. Knowing your thoughts and how you perceive the characters helps a lot in developing the next chapters.

I see that one of the most discussed topics is the choices in the game. I try to improve this as the game progresses, adding more options and choices. However, to reach the end, there will be certain scenes that must happen. I will try to ensure that these unavoidable scenes at least have variations so they can unfold in different ways.

I am quite flexible during development, and I don't mind making changes and/or adding things to the game. But I also try to meet deadlines to update within reasonable times.

I know that some characters are more liked than others. I try to give more space to those who interfere more in Loren's life. At times, I’ve even changed scenes based on how players favor certain characters to give them a bit more prominence. However, characters like Thomas, Leo, Kirsten, or Charlie are important to the game and will have a presence throughout. I will try to ensure that scenes have options for things to happen differently and/or be avoided. Loren's arousal meter will also influence certain choices. Although I still need to adjust it, I aim to give it more weight in upcoming chapters.

Best regards to everyone, and thank you so much for your comments—they help more than you think

With all that said, I STRONGLY suggest, and hope, you'd consider adding an option for MC to go back to the party without Tom. He, frankly, however vital to the game, based on how you've designed him, is a loathsome POS SOB LOL. This point was hammered HARD when choosing to flash MC's titties. It is the way you've written him. He is just some extra useless character who's sole purpose is to add some moral dilemma. To which, in this case, I'd say is none. IF Tom remains the same shithead, and our choices are "cannon", please have the option to dump him. The earlier the better. Based on how you've written MC, this would be the best course of action to take IMHO.

The other reason for at least adding an option to return to the party is that you've already spent so much effort writing it. It's literally a waste to have it not see play just because of one action.

 

[johnsilverjohn80]

Man, I'm really enjoying this game. Keep it up!!!

 

[Geko1711]

Is any hero out ther i loved that game so far nice renders and what are great ride so far.
Only one question or maybe two , prego planned and why is ther the tag bukkake.

I haven't seen any scenes that correspond to that tag

Ehmm maybe you saw wrong, it's just a matter of choices dude.
Give it a try and you will be satisfied.

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[Zara Scarlet]

With all that said, I STRONGLY suggest, and hope, you'd consider adding an option for MC to go back to the party without Tom. He, frankly, however vital to the game, based on how you've designed him, is a loathsome POS SOB LOL. This point was hammered HARD when choosing to flash MC's titties. It is the way you've written him. He is just some extra useless character who's sole purpose is to add some moral dilemma. To which, in this case, I'd say is none. IF Tom remains the same shithead, and our choices are "cannon", please have the option to dump him. The earlier the better. Based on how you've written MC, this would be the best course of action to take IMHO.

The other reason for at least adding an option to return to the party is that you've already spent so much effort writing it. It's literally a waste to have it not see play just because of one action.

Loren obviously still loves Thomas (or at least thinks she does), so it would be stupid for her to suddenly dump him, just because you don't like him as a character. Eventually, I can see her maybe falling out of love with him, simply because both of them are changing so radically as individuals, and their lives take them in different directions. But I don't see that happening soon.

For me, not liking a character, is not a good enough reason for removing him or her from a game. Loren loves being a cheating whore. It's a bit nasty, but she seems to get an incredible ( if occasionally guilty) kick out of doing it, and quite frankly I get a bigger kick out of watching her do it, and even more that she unrepentantly enjoys being a cheat. Take that out of the game, and Loren loses a whole level of 'evil' sluttiness. Because it's not just that she's cheating on Thomas, she's cheating with his father, his uncle and probably very soon with his mother as well. Now with Thomas likely starting to cheat on Loren with Kirsten ( at least from his perspective) and becoming progressively more obsessed with her and Loren literally becoming a whore for Leo, they are one fucked up couple, and it's hard to see a longterm future for them on that kind of trajectory. So maybe that will happen eventually, just not before the end of the game?

 

[atrebor68]

A game that never disappoints, with the gas pedal pressed to the maximum always, the level of the sex described is very hot. Nice nice nice!

 

[master861]

Ehmm maybe you saw wrong, it's just a matter of choices dude.
Give it a try and you will be satisfied.

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Wait i dit not see that scene with the bitch collar hmm strange

 

[Geko1711]

Wait i dit not see that scene with the bitch collar hmm strange

Exactly, it's all a matter of choice! In this case, Loren was the one to show her tits at the pocker's table, against her husband's wishes, and she ends the evening rather badly (pissed off and repressed) if the next choice is not to be driven home by James and Charlie, so she can't wear that collar given to her by Kirsten/Leo.
With different choices the night becomes much longer and more vibrant.

 

[master861]

Hmm i thing i know why i dont get that scene i try everthing i thing it is because of this scene.

You need to wear that right? i only get the fuck scene with my dad in law strange can you upload your save for me.

 

[VNAdults]

Hmm i thing i know why i dont get that scene i try everthing i thing it is because of this scene.
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You need to wear that right? i only get the fuck scene with my dad in law strange can you upload your save for me.

In that scene, if Loren decides to wear the necklace, Kirsten takes the initiative, if she refuses, it is Kirsten who wears it, and Loren who takes the initiative at Kirsten's request.

The poker night scene is different, Loren has the option to spy on Thomas and Kirsten, or the option not to spy, depending on what he decides, the following scene will be different, with Loren taking the lead or with Loren subdued, consequences of spying on her husband

They are different moments in Loren's state, in that scene she is still not so uninhibited, in the poker night more things have happened to get there, and the alcohol helps Loren to be more euphoric, so to speak