And I take it your opinion is more valid than everyone else's?
I was replying to a guy whose response to criticism of the game was basically "well
I like it, so it's fine". His opinion not being more valid than those who
don't like that aspect of the game is
exactly what my point was.
Lin's been a slave since her first appearance, don't act like it's only just appeared.
Eventually the overall arc was going to come into play just like everyone else's storly lines have deeper arcs. Lin's just has further reaching consequences.
There's a pretty big difference between her backstory being that she's a slave and making her story about slavery in the world. Is Ashley's story going to be about child abuse? Not
her abusive past, but child abuse in general? I'm not going to apologise for thinking Lin's story should be about
Lin. Not that I object to bringing in the other elves that is, just
how it's done.
Walk away? Probably not. Her story still leads to the competition so MC would have to talk about his training methods.
The competition is one of the things I want to walk away
from. I
still haven't seen a good explanation of why it
has to happen. I think that's the biggest issue that we should be talking about. The rest I feel there's a worthwhile discussion to be had, but it's all secondary to this.
If you want to play a game where everyone and everything is perfect, that's great. But I love broken girls, and I love fixing them. If girls have flaws, they're more realistic and you can become more emotionally invested in them.
No argument here, I agree completely.
I also like slaves and obedience as a fetish, I like small breasts and short girls as well. That's why Lin is the way she is. She's always wanted to be better. She tried hard at becoming a cook, did great at teaching Android everything she needed to do. She adores your praise as an SO and Master. If you hate something about a character, don't play the character. She hasn't changed, she just matured.
I like all those things too. If I'd
said that I didn't like Lin that would be a fair response. If I
didn't like her however I would have stopped before her
twentieth scene.
I like Lin just fine, she's one of my favourite girls. What I don't like is the direction her story is going in
after all that. How the
game is on course from being one of my favourites to one it looks like I may end up dropping.
Training is also something I love. Being responsible for the growth of a character is something that will always be in this game. A huge part about Lin's story is training her both sexually and in other ways. What's the point in training if you never test your skills?
Because it's fun in and of itself and we just love doing it. The only one Lin needs to be better than is herself. She shouldn't have to prove
anything to anyone else.
This event is meant to show how corrupt the world is. The reason Elves are still slaves is because of people like Cornwall and his friends. Before this, you were never shown how bad the world was, you were just told. It's not good writing if you aren't shown it.
There are some things we just don't want to see, let alone
participate in. It's
perfectly good writing to gloss over unpleasant things if it would bring the mood down too much.