Runey
For 0.15 or following I would love to see the same character development you are doing. I love the way that you went away from the hard switches between some of the early Character Episodes to a really gread flow. You managed to make the story and even the inbound sex believable.
I personally would be grateful when I would try to get "the small things" in there. For example when Maria in the morning asks how I would like my eggs - why not have the option to really have breakfast with her. Give the characters time to be... persons. The small interactions of a day to show how cherished they are.
Or when the MC asks Ellen to expand the Hotel - why not show the MC painting a new room, perhaps someone comes in to help or brings him a much needed Coffee and cookies - they share a short kiss. Something like that. Things that aren't dates - but show that they all care about each other.
I feel that these kind of interactions would add to the believable flow and if you introduce them from the beginning it would even help with the "immersion" breaking that a girl would somehow want to be banged from someone he met "5 minutes" ago (I am exxagerating of course) It would explain why Kali in the beginning begins to trust the MC and opens up if they shared a meal in the kitchen and talked about stuff - something like that.