VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hatred [Ch. 2] [Kutad-gu Büdık]

[Machete]

She can walk straight, right?
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This game had my bland curiosity until this oppai picture.

 

[Machete]

No sound, bad english and uninteresting writing, breasts shaped like loafs of bread, poor visuals, clipping errors...
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...I'm out.

Perfect analisys, mr. Data. Make it so.

 

[DrakoGhoul]

Looks interesting, I'll try it out. That overview has my attention, with the sister dying and stuff. I hope the revenge and dark stuff sticks. Too many games do this stuff but don't go through with it all the way.

 

[x_Flinx_x]

No sound, bad english and uninteresting writing, breasts shaped like loafs of bread, poor visuals, clipping errors...
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...I'm out.

Looking at that first image... Those girls are so short compared to the guys.

 

[izayatakayama]

Thank you !

 

[Willfriedstogamer]

At least the Name is pretty cool

 

[zeraligator]

Is this game inspired by Superhuman?

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Pretty sure that's quoted from Hatred.

 

[leloil]

YESSSSS FINALLY SOME BADASS MC WHO DOESN'T CARE ABOUT ANYTHING ELSE BUT REVENGE (i like hateful mc or vengeful mc tho)
Don't ever think about abandoning the project :}

 

[Behappy69]

Will there be any sex at some point?.

 

[Machete]

Will there be any sex at some point?.

Nope. Don't you feel hatred building already?

 

[LostBR]

My name is not important...

what is important who im going to fuck...
The Antagonist x Postal Dude dating sim when?

 

[Bastus]

Will there be any sex at some point?.

Just you and your raging revenge boner.

 

[Behappy69]

Just you and your raging revenge boner.

lol, no blue balls plz.

 

[elle21]

It's kinda confusing in how the dev using the word "he" "she" "his" "her"...

 

[Zxhu]

Chapter 2 is out,

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Changelog

- 130+ New images.

- 3 new animation

- 350+ new line dialogues.

- Fixed of grammar errors

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[Kutad-gu Büdik]

Hi guys, I am developer of the game. I have read your comments. First of all, thanks for your good and bad comments. You are right, I am aware of the shortcomings of the game and I am trying to fix it as much as I can. English is not my native language and this is my first game. I didn't notice the grammer mistakes because I had a friend do the translation job. I will keep updating the game. Thank you again.

 

[Kutad-gu Büdik]

No sound, bad english and uninteresting writing, breasts shaped like loafs of bread, poor visuals, clipping errors...
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...I'm out.

Thanks for your rewiev. If I have time I will try to fix the game from the beginning.

 

[Kutad-gu Büdik]

Looks interesting, I'll try it out. That overview has my attention, with the sister dying and stuff. I hope the revenge and dark stuff sticks. Too many games do this stuff but don't go through with it all the way.

I'm thinking of increasing both the dark stuff and sexual aspects of the game a little more and continuing that way.

 

[Kutad-gu Büdik]

YESSSSS FINALLY SOME BADASS MC WHO DOESN'T CARE ABOUT ANYTHING ELSE BUT REVENGE (i like hateful mc or vengeful mc tho)
Don't ever think about abandoning the project :}

Thank you for comment. I don't want to abandon the game for now. The character is now an angry coward. He will also turn into a badass character over time.

 

[Kutad-gu Büdik]

Something different this time. Nothing bad about that.
But the Engrish needs a proof reader, every MTL (including Google Translator, one of the worst in my opinion) would do a better job. You get the meaning, but also a headache during reading. Besides the renders, they look...empty. Yeah, empty is the best word, I can imagine. The locations are big open spaces, even the side alley where you meet the unknown person, and filled with barely anything. I don't say it's bad work, and I wouldn't do a better job, but there is a lot of improvment to make. Content wise, it's an introduction of the characters, a tiny bit of background (what you get told, doesn't even fit the revenge story) and that's it. You could call it a "tech demo". My advice: wait for 3 or 4 updates until you try it.

That being said, good luck to the 2 devs.

First of all, thank you for your review. Yes, the game has a lot of shortcomings, we are aware of that. Since it's our first game, we missed a lot of things. We will try to improve and fix the game. If necessary, we will do all the scenes in the game by starting from the beginning.