HTML Haunted Inheritance [v0.01] [Altris]

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You play the role of a man that recently was informed his estranged grandfather passed away and left his old abandoned home to you. The story starts on the night you decide to visit the property for the first time and come across a strange woman. Short story revolving around story of the home itself and the strange woman that resides there with different endings based on the path you take.​

Thread Updated: 2024-05-29
Release Date: 2024-05-29
Developer: Altris
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Version: 0.01
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Language: English
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Lerd0 said:
..am gettin kinda jealous of vn protags......they all have rich grandpas.......
....mine didn't leave me shit.......:cry:
...thx for the share......good luck.....
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lol Mine didn't either....and I'm the one who found him...lol

Dang... only a 10 second download! Pretty neat
Hope it's good

Cheers
 
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Fantastic job!
Love the Blue color font on words. Very easy for me to see
I thought it was funny....not sure it's supposed to be but really great job.
Good job on the story telling..was pretty immersive..
Great job on images/colors being bright.
Super job on file size...I realize there isn't much content...but still...good job


Personally I would suggest
all the images being in their own folder separate from the html file.
Not using the word YOU so much.


Glisp should probably be glimpse
Blone should prob be blonde
Taking a moment to catch your breathe....should prob be breath
ttry...try
the last imagine you see........the last image you see


Anyway. Thanks very much
Cheers and Good Luck!
 
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Forgotted said:
Fantastic job!
Love the Blue color font on words. Very easy for me to see
I thought it was funny....not sure it's supposed to be but really great job.
Good job on the story telling..was pretty immersive..
Great job on images/colors being bright.
Super job on file size...I realize there isn't much content...but still...good job


Personally I would suggest
all the images being in their own folder separate from the html file.
Not using the word YOU so much.


Glisp should probably be glimpse
Blone should prob be blonde
Taking a moment to catch your breathe....should prob be breath
ttry...try
the last imagine you see........the last image you see


Anyway. Thanks very much
Cheers and Good Luck!
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Yeah, I agree with everything you said. These are things I've already been addressing, haha. This entire thing was written in like... an afternoon. The visuals and quick structuring was done over a couple nights. I fully intend to deal with that stuff ASAP.

Just kind of wanted to put something out to the world so I can at least make it feel real, ya know?
 
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only few minutes upon entering the mansion i suppose to inherit
then walk around the back to find a woman in the shed
she could be trespasser or worse, but a simple gesture from her makes me unzip my pant

i mean, yeah. . . immersion :HideThePain:
there is no worthwhile horror without proper build-up, and this is not it
not to mention the sprinkle of typos

honestly when horror and ai-cg tag combined i expect at least monstrous anatomy
like extra fingers, deformed face, and usual sort for this kind
the only one i notice is disappearing freckles in the end, i had goosebumps on those

anyway, best of luck :Kappa:
 
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Lerd0 said:
..am gettin kinda jealous of vn protags......they all have rich grandpas.......
....mine didn't leave me shit.......:cry:
...thx for the share......good luck.....
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Still beats me who was left with a tiny piece of never the less very productive and fertile land that was popping out "lots" of money relative to its tiny size and then my parents basically stole it and even butchered the trees (which was what was popping out the money in the first place). Also them literally stealing me 2.5 months worth of salaries in inheritance from the other grandparents and thats not even half of it.
 
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telotelo said:
i mean, yeah. . . immersion :HideThePain:
there is no worthwhile horror without proper build-up, and this is not it
not to mention the sprinkle of typos
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Yeah, I didn't write it, but I wasn't counting the bj.
Just kinda meant the writing in general.
Good Catch.


Cheers
 
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AltrisDynam said:
Yeah, I agree with everything you said. These are things I've already been addressing, haha. This entire thing was written in like... an afternoon. The visuals and quick structuring was done over a couple nights. I fully intend to deal with that stuff ASAP.

Just kind of wanted to put something out to the world so I can at least make it feel real, ya know?
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Cheers,
Hope it didn't sound snarky. Was just
tossing things out there, like sp and such.
No offense.

Have a Good One
Best of Luck
 
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Forgotted said:
Cheers,
Hope it didn't sound snarky. Was just
tossing things out there, like sp and such.
No offense.

Have a Good One
Best of Luck
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Nah man, all good. I definitely appreciate the constructive criticism and as I said I had similar feelings. This is merely a proof of concept, of sorts, with the basic tone and style for the project. I actually find some of the stuff comical too as you mentioned. Was there something specific that stood out as funny to you? The entire Bad End gives me a chuckle because its a little absurd and really fits the 'Don't stick your dick in crazy' saying.
 
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Good start! I think this is definitely something you could flesh out into a smaller but complete game with many branches and endings. Keep at it!
 
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